Starting from the Story of a Mortal Cultivating Immortality, Traveling Through the Heavens

Does the author know why the rating is so low? Because there are too many poisonous points! Does the spirit beast bag have the function of subduing spirit beasts? You thought it was a Poké Ball?

What you wrote is really rubbish! First of all, in terms of emotions, I am always frightened and in a hurry. I don't think even a passerby is like this. Secondly, in terms of character, I have just entered the foundation building period, and I have already gone to 4 Liangfang City, right? You are a weakling. The first time you went there, you were beaten to death. You made no progress and went there again. You were hunted down again. You don't have a long memory? You don't prepare any killer moves, but rely solely on the protagonist's halo to counterattack? Don't even know how to use a plug-in? Since it is an interfering plug-in, the Bloody Forbidden Land should just try to find an opportunity to kill Li Huayuan and anyone related to Han Li.

I really don't want to say anything, so I'll make up the number of words

Change your name to The Great Master of Picking Up Girls.

The protagonist exchanges his own interests for Nangong Wan's practice skills. What do I mean as a reader? After all, she is your apprentice. It's worth it no matter how much you pay. But Lu Xueqi. Disciple of Dazhu Peak. And what is the relationship between Zhang Xiaofan and the protagonist? Is it reasonable to write this way? How old is Lu Xueqi? It should be easy to fool yourself. May I ask the author, do you really remember things before you were 4/5 years old? Lu Xueqi was only a few years old when she really had feelings for Qingyun Sect! Nonsense, right? Now Lu Xueqi is not the protagonist's woman nor her apprentice. There is no need to give things away like this, there are tens of millions of people with spiritual roots in the three thousand worlds. Did the protagonist send it over? Just wait until Lu Xueqi becomes yours and send it away. And Zhang Xiaofan. What is the relationship between the disciples of Dazhu Peak and the protagonist? Just to see them as pitiful? There are too many poor people. Are you coming over in pity? Watching the Three Kingdoms shed tears, are you worried about the ancients? Is a character in a novel like this? The author is an adult, and adults don't use idols. All very sensible. Irrational people are not adults either. The author thought it was useless. You fell down on the street and couldn't get up? Does anyone really dare to help you up? Reality is so real and no one will stand up for anything that has nothing to do with you. Someone fell down on the road. We are all human, don't we want to help others? It's just that the price is too high. Unless you are as rich as Jack Ma. Don't care about being blackmailed. The author should write the following writing in an adult way. You write about mortals. Why is the story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality so popular? Because the original author wrote Han Li as an adult. The entire book is written according to reality. Very true. So it can be popular. The writing is too childish. Do you feel like you're insulting the reader's intelligence?

Isn't this a novel? At first, I directly added a few thousand lifespans, and then used martial arts elixirs, which can be used even during the Qi refining period. It's really funny. There are also martial arts elixirs that add a hundred lifespans, and they can still be used in this world of cultivating immortals. It's really amazing. Then the combat power collapsed again, and a ghost doctor's eyeball came to a strange world. I really wanted to laugh.

The new world is an original world. Because I really couldn't decide which world to write about, I used the mortal system to create an original one. If you have any worlds you would like to recommend, please leave a comment and I will consider it.

Why not sign into a portable cave? This is a Zhutian flow, and there is no aquatic animal to grow herbs, which feels very inconvenient.

I gave this novel five stars before I paid for it. I also collected it. After paying, the protagonist goes to other worlds, neither to cover the sky nor to fight against the world, nor to be perfect. The author suddenly made the protagonist travel to the world of cultivation. I was speechless. If you travel from the world of cultivation to another world of cultivation, you might as well not travel. Also, Son of Luck's Revenge doesn't matter what you do, you have to go to the address. If you can barely give it two stars after seeing this, then the protagonist ran away and waited for Son of Luck to finish slaughtering the city. The protagonist came back and killed the Son of Luck with his eyeballs. When I saw this, I just wanted to ask why there was no negative five stars. This novel only deserves negative five stars. . . . . . . . . . Author, what kind of brain circuit do you really have? . . . . . . I'm better than you in fighting on the street. . Real

It's okay in the beginning, but in the end it feels like the protagonist is like a bonobo who wants to have sex with a girl when he sees one.