After Handing in the System, I Became a National Treasure by Grabbing Supplies

From what I saw in the submission, the main character was to protect the protagonist and help the protagonist with all the chores except cheating. It was the first time I saw someone purely using the protagonist. I felt that it was not in line with the values ​​​​of the country. Also, since the heroine's past was investigated and the people who hurt the heroine were arranged together, it might be easier to kill the heroine at any time. The name of the country is similar to that of the two stolen countries, and the setting is also better developed in other countries. I feel that it does not seem to be written by someone from our family. It should be a foreign author. Praise for the magnanimity of the great country!

After reading a few chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I thought it was probably a good book with so many five stars, but I didn't understand it. The heroine has this system and has become a person with great power. Why not kill the soft-boiled guy? A top-secret mission is also done by a person with corrupt moral character. I haven't read it yet.

Outrageous! That's outrageous! ! ! ! ! ! The author doesn't need to be so careful as long as there is conflict! If it hadn't been written about handing over to the country, I could have tolerated it. After all, this is a base where the country has collapsed after the end of the world. It may be regrettable, but it won't be so disgusting. Since you wrote about handing over to the country, it proves that the background is that the country has not collapsed, the state machinery is still running, and those who control the base are also Or the leader of the country. In this case, if you include such a person in a top-secret mission, a person with low character and clear intentions to harm the people, and you bring such a person with you when writing about the country convening elites, are you insulting the brains of our readers or insulting our country? Don't talk about fiction. As a Chinese, your readers are also Chinese. The audience of your novel is Chinese. The protagonist of your novel is Chinese by default. The country she lives in is naturally our China. I cannot accept it and cannot understand it. Ps: I've always wanted to complain about the name of this country. Okawa Country... The more I look at it, the more it sounds like a stick and a footbath. It's okay. You didn't add the word "emperor" or "people".

I haven't read much, but I have a lot of questions. 1. There were 100 people in the first mission. It was written at the beginning that there were 100 elites, but in the end there were more heroines and commanders. Then after all 100 people entered, a few more cars came in. The drivers were not human? In short, the writing style is strange, but understandable. 2. I wrote about a hotel twice. 3. Is the mecha so easy to operate? If you don't focus on describing this part, it would really be incomprehensible. Then with the mecha, after solving the first crisis, you can start focusing on destroying the surrounding zombies. 4. What are those commanders doing? Can't they all act separately? Do they have to stay with the chief? There are also a series of measures that make people panic. 5. If you value the heroine, why do you take her to get equipment, but then you bring a bunch of people and suddenly enter the mission space? Speechless😓 In short, there are so many problems, it is also very speechless, and the writing style is too immature.

Why is it called Okawa Country? It looks like a small Japan.

The good reviews are all fake, right? If it really doesn't work, let's stop writing about the apocalypse and instead write romance novels about the overbearing president. I think you are very suitable for this formula. There is no Virgin in the apocalypse, but there can be romance novels about the overlord.

The description of the heroine is really embarrassing, the King of Soldiers, her eyes are cold and heartless, when was this book written? Why are there such descriptions these days?

The heroine has to put up with that man, she can't stand it anymore

I won't talk about the previous chapters. A mecha several meters high can crush thousands of them to death with just one step. Can you have some common sense? Don't think of us readers as mentally retarded, primary school students. How did you get so many five-stars in front of you? Those who earn stars are so crazy.

I have never given such a low score. I have to say that the subject matter is very novel, but it is really not very logical and very discouraging. It is not suitable for old book friends!