Bring Your Graphics Card to Practice Immortality
About This Novel
Network administrator Jiang Xiaobai traveled through time, but unlike others, his golden finger turned out to be a graphics card. At first, he complained that the graphics card was useless, but after learning more about it, he realized that the graphics card was a real treasure. Do you want to play swordsmanship? Ka Ye: Thousands of swords return to the sect, endless sea of swords... Do you want to play fantasy? Ka Ye: The picture of the Nine Dragons pulling the coffin, the golden lotus growing in the bitter sea, the stars shining in the sky, the bright moon growing in the sea... Do you want to play magic? Ka Ye: Break the illusion, copy the illusion, rebound the illusion, add the illusion 1234567... What kind of sparks will a defective product of modern industry collide with the world of immortality?
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Official(8)Scraped 11d ago
How many people read this book because of the cover?
Something's wrong with you
😲There's something wrong with this cover, it shouldn't be here
Although I wrote a 200,000-word novel without a single comment, come on, editor
Cover is awesome
Take a look, take a look, when will you come back? ? Nosebleed
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The writing is pretty good and I am quite happy. It's just that the pace is a bit fast. In Chapter 32, I went directly to the bridal chamber, even though I haven't done anything yet. Even though I didn't do anything, I went straight to the master, the master, and the brainless male protagonist. Even if the protagonist is in trouble, you can't help like this. Moreover, the characterization is not too profound. For example, the master of the protagonist is too omniscient and omnipotent. He is omnipotent in heaven and on earth. Even a cow cannot be so awesome. Moreover, my first impression of the protagonist was that he was frivolous and laughing and joking could never be successful. There is no way to pretend that I am the only one in the world. I need to go through some hardships to do it. The descriptions of other people are not very good and only have a few sentences. If you want the characters to be vivid, you must describe them more. The plot is also written in a hurry. More than thirty chapters go directly to the bridal chamber. The characterization is too little and needs more foreshadowing. Write something you want to say to the author: "The characterization is not enough. If you want to write a good article, you must improve it. The characterization of the characters is like the foundation. All the performances of the characters are based on the foundation. It is like building a house. It must be done step by step and cannot be rushed. In general, the world view There are also some problems that need to be described in depth. How can the protagonist become stronger without practicing? In the first few dozen chapters, the protagonist has to rely on others rather than himself. If you want to become stronger, you have to look at yourself. Moreover, the overall content is quite confusing, and the author cannot think of anything to write, so he needs to describe it step by step and in detail." To sum up: Character descriptions should be detailed Don't rush the content The protagonist becomes stronger on his own book worldview The writing is rather confusing Improve writing skills That's pretty much it, I'll read it first and then give my opinion after reading it. Bar I have lived in Zuan for three years and my parents are still alive. The genealogy has not yet ascended to heaven. Everyone talks about virtue and practices good deeds
Excellent cover!
Your cover attracted me deeply! I decided to take a look! Get ready to score! 😂
Cover 666
The book is also very nice and interesting. Good luck to the author.
One visit to Kangmao Beibi is enough
We have been doing more and more, when will there be a big explosion? 😷
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Official(8)Scraped 11d ago
How many people read this book because of the cover?
Something's wrong with you
😲There's something wrong with this cover, it shouldn't be here
Although I wrote a 200,000-word novel without a single comment, come on, editor
Cover is awesome
Take a look, take a look, when will you come back? ? Nosebleed
Give advice to the author
The writing is pretty good and I am quite happy. It's just that the pace is a bit fast. In Chapter 32, I went directly to the bridal chamber, even though I haven't done anything yet. Even though I didn't do anything, I went straight to the master, the master, and the brainless male protagonist. Even if the protagonist is in trouble, you can't help like this. Moreover, the characterization is not too profound. For example, the master of the protagonist is too omniscient and omnipotent. He is omnipotent in heaven and on earth. Even a cow cannot be so awesome. Moreover, my first impression of the protagonist was that he was frivolous and laughing and joking could never be successful. There is no way to pretend that I am the only one in the world. I need to go through some hardships to do it. The descriptions of other people are not very good and only have a few sentences. If you want the characters to be vivid, you must describe them more. The plot is also written in a hurry. More than thirty chapters go directly to the bridal chamber. The characterization is too little and needs more foreshadowing. Write something you want to say to the author: "The characterization is not enough. If you want to write a good article, you must improve it. The characterization of the characters is like the foundation. All the performances of the characters are based on the foundation. It is like building a house. It must be done step by step and cannot be rushed. In general, the world view There are also some problems that need to be described in depth. How can the protagonist become stronger without practicing? In the first few dozen chapters, the protagonist has to rely on others rather than himself. If you want to become stronger, you have to look at yourself. Moreover, the overall content is quite confusing, and the author cannot think of anything to write, so he needs to describe it step by step and in detail." To sum up: Character descriptions should be detailed Don't rush the content The protagonist becomes stronger on his own book worldview The writing is rather confusing Improve writing skills That's pretty much it, I'll read it first and then give my opinion after reading it. Bar I have lived in Zuan for three years and my parents are still alive. The genealogy has not yet ascended to heaven. Everyone talks about virtue and practices good deeds
Excellent cover!
Your cover attracted me deeply! I decided to take a look! Get ready to score! 😂
Cover 666
The book is also very nice and interesting. Good luck to the author.
One visit to Kangmao Beibi is enough
We have been doing more and more, when will there be a big explosion? 😷
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