Under One Person: Witnessing the Education of Love at the Beginning

Author, I'm sorry. After reading this novel, I feel that it does not suit my temperament. In my opinion, the essence of a practitioner is to be separated from human beings or to be separated from the secular world. It is a path of seeking transcendence and self. On this path of practice, there is only one most important thing - the understanding of thoughts! And regardless of whether you are practicing or not, some things require more decisiveness. This is not to say that your writing is not good, but I can only say that I cannot accept this kind of troublesome things that are constantly being cut off and confused! What's more, if we say that cultivating immortals and spiritual practice are two concepts, the former is alienating itself, and is gradually getting further and further away from the concept of "human beings", like mountains and rivers. What we want is - all the worlds will be like dust, and only my human body will remain. If it is true, if you tie your hands and feet and look forward and backward, what kind of immortality will you be? You will not be able to be free and free, and you will not be able to be a free immortal. Even if you become an immortal, it will be no different from before you became an immortal! Let's talk about spiritual practice. To put it bluntly, it means assimilating oneself. Although most of them talk about seeing the true self in the appearance of all living beings, in the final analysis, it is still about letting oneself adapt and identify with it. This is a principle that most people agree with. Therefore, the author you write is more like an immature practitioner. It doesn't look like someone who has experienced three lives. If there is a method of immortality, he may be confused and confused in the first life, and his Taoist heart may not be firm enough in the second life. However, in the third life, he is still being affected by external objects, and even has the intention to change his path. It can only be said that the practice of the first two lives is all practiced on dogs! To sum up, I personally think that the author wants to express the story of a traveler who has experienced the world of Qingyunzhi and then arrived in the world below one person. However, he does not have enough grasp of the psychology and the understanding of the two worlds. The writing can only be said to have a sense of youthfulness in the novels of his parents, not mature enough, and there are huge loopholes in some details. By the way, what I want to complain about the most is that you have Qing Yunzhi's cultivation techniques. You can understand the things in a person by analogy, but if it is influenced by the people and ideas inside, I can only say that the neighbor has the chaff and wants to steal it!

The woman who cuckolded you can be killed or crippled directly. What is she doing? I have lived for hundreds of years, and I don't even have this little mental concentration.

It's a pure and stupid plot, it's inexplicable, and Lu Xueqi is mentioned all the time in the middle, why are you mentioning this? The same goes for Lu Ran. Either you just put your hat on, or you just throw it away. What are you doing with this hat? Ah? Can't bear to part with it? Or you can just write that Lu Ran is a power-hungry person. What's the point of this whole story? It's written in such a way that someone is forced involuntarily, even in the wedding photo, and they don't dare to resist. It's so pitiful and pitiful. Don't look at it. I've been reading books for six or seven years, and I've never seen such a vicious plot. It's even more disgusting than real cuckold stories. Cuckold stories are just uncomfortable to watch. This book looks purely disgusting.

This novel is not something that ordinary people can write. The protagonist is so tolerant. I believe he can die in the world of Zhu Xian.

After reading it, I feel so sick, and I feel bad all over. A cultivator is in such an unbearable state of mind, and he is timid in doing things. The worst he can do is run away. When your strength reaches a certain level, the company will definitely recruit you. After all, it is not a special big deal. If it doesn't work, you can just be a temporary worker.

What kind of mentality? How can I write like this?

I can see it, the author is just disgusting people

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After cultivating for 300 years, this is where I am, put your hat on

After reading so many Under One Person fanfics, I feel that the protagonist of this book is the most normal, even though he has learned some "spells" in the Zhuxian world before.