I Check in at Wanjie
About This Novel
Occasionally obtained the super check-in system, young Liu Bai travels through the major planes. As long as he enters the plane and checks in, he can easily get opportunities! Bite! The host successfully checked in at Ip Man World and obtained: Peak Wing Chun! Bite! The host successfully checked in the world of Condor Heroes and obtained: The peerless martial arts Dugu Nine Swords! Bite! The host successfully checked in Wolverine Three Worlds and obtained: the perfect version of Wolverine! Quiba... Pacific Rim... DC... Marvel and so on. From then on, Liu Bai understood a truth on the way to becoming stronger. You can be strong as long as you are strong, just check in and be strong!
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Official(91)Scraped 6d ago
Although the writing style is average, it is already very good for a new author. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Don't be a bastard. Just have one female protagonist in each world. Also, try to be more rigorous and logical in thinking. Just like learning martial arts from Guo Jing is not rigorous. If the male protagonist gets to know Guo Jing and has a good relationship, will he teach him martial arts? Moreover, it is the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon, the Nine Yin Manual, and fighting each other. This is a bit ridiculous. In the world of martial arts, let alone such top-notch martial arts that are rare to find, even ordinary martial arts are not so easy to teach. In fact, you don't need so many martial arts. The Dugu Nine Swords alone is actually enough!
old routine
This routine is so old, and you still write it out, do you really not know how to come up with another routine? Do we have to go back in time and slap in the face to pretend? The protagonist was a licker before, but this free list is really bad. This kind of book can reach 51st place.
It's too natural to think of it
When you were in the realm of the Condor Heroes, you asked Guo Jing to ask for the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms as soon as you came up. You were too proud!
It's so true. Every time when I play in a team with others, I really want to fight back when my teammates criticize me. But, I look at the record again and feel that I am the worst and have nothing to say. This is really too difficult. I don't know how to fight back reasonably even if I want to fight back.
I would like to make a small suggestion to the author
If you can't write about Douluo, then don't write about it. To be honest, all the fandoms nowadays are about Douluo. Moreover, the fantasy time-traveling articles basically all involve Douluo. Why don't you see why there were no time-traveling articles before? Isn't Douluo better now? What's the use of some? The system is different. If you go to Douluo, you still have to practice martial arts. To be honest, Douluo's martial arts are really useless. It's better to go to Wuhun Supreme. Not to mention the advanced system, there are still uses. I've almost seen this martial soul supreme. I forgot whether the protagonist's surname is Lin or Su. It's up to you whether you adopt it or not. It's just a little suggestion.
Single heroine?
Across the Heavens feels better to have a single female protagonist.
Small suggestions (don't spray if you don't like it)
I don't think we should write about Marvel or DC. These worlds are so messed up and I'm tired of looking at them. Is it better to write about Dragon Nest, The Adventures of Jackie Chan, etc.?
Fellow Taoists, please rate me.
Mine only has Samsung. To be honest, it is better to practice alone. One star cannot be seen. Erxing can watch it without using his brain. Samsung can barely watch it even with a brain. Four stars are rarely toxic. Five-star aptitude for becoming a god. Six (broken) stars (grids) have become gods.
Oops, not bad#those labels and comments you have been posted#
Go fight and break. Douluo. Use force. Cover the sky. Sun God. Tomb of God. Perfect. Devour. Eternal life. Holy ruins. That time when chaos first emerged.
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Official(91)Scraped 6d ago
Although the writing style is average, it is already very good for a new author. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Don't be a bastard. Just have one female protagonist in each world. Also, try to be more rigorous and logical in thinking. Just like learning martial arts from Guo Jing is not rigorous. If the male protagonist gets to know Guo Jing and has a good relationship, will he teach him martial arts? Moreover, it is the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon, the Nine Yin Manual, and fighting each other. This is a bit ridiculous. In the world of martial arts, let alone such top-notch martial arts that are rare to find, even ordinary martial arts are not so easy to teach. In fact, you don't need so many martial arts. The Dugu Nine Swords alone is actually enough!
old routine
This routine is so old, and you still write it out, do you really not know how to come up with another routine? Do we have to go back in time and slap in the face to pretend? The protagonist was a licker before, but this free list is really bad. This kind of book can reach 51st place.
It's too natural to think of it
When you were in the realm of the Condor Heroes, you asked Guo Jing to ask for the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms as soon as you came up. You were too proud!
It's so true. Every time when I play in a team with others, I really want to fight back when my teammates criticize me. But, I look at the record again and feel that I am the worst and have nothing to say. This is really too difficult. I don't know how to fight back reasonably even if I want to fight back.
I would like to make a small suggestion to the author
If you can't write about Douluo, then don't write about it. To be honest, all the fandoms nowadays are about Douluo. Moreover, the fantasy time-traveling articles basically all involve Douluo. Why don't you see why there were no time-traveling articles before? Isn't Douluo better now? What's the use of some? The system is different. If you go to Douluo, you still have to practice martial arts. To be honest, Douluo's martial arts are really useless. It's better to go to Wuhun Supreme. Not to mention the advanced system, there are still uses. I've almost seen this martial soul supreme. I forgot whether the protagonist's surname is Lin or Su. It's up to you whether you adopt it or not. It's just a little suggestion.
Single heroine?
Across the Heavens feels better to have a single female protagonist.
Small suggestions (don't spray if you don't like it)
I don't think we should write about Marvel or DC. These worlds are so messed up and I'm tired of looking at them. Is it better to write about Dragon Nest, The Adventures of Jackie Chan, etc.?
Fellow Taoists, please rate me.
Mine only has Samsung. To be honest, it is better to practice alone. One star cannot be seen. Erxing can watch it without using his brain. Samsung can barely watch it even with a brain. Four stars are rarely toxic. Five-star aptitude for becoming a god. Six (broken) stars (grids) have become gods.
Oops, not bad#those labels and comments you have been posted#
Go fight and break. Douluo. Use force. Cover the sky. Sun God. Tomb of God. Perfect. Devour. Eternal life. Holy ruins. That time when chaos first emerged.
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