
I've Already Founded the Country, but You Say I Haven't Traveled Through Time?
by Crossing The World Of Mortals
About This Novel
On June 6, the fifth year of the Great Wilderness, Yang Xu came to the ancient wilderness for the fifth year. He established a kingdom in the wilderness and became the king, establishing the Great Xu Kingdom. The country has one city, three towns, and nine thousand people. The people include the Qingqiu Fox Clan, the East China Sea Shark Clan, and the Qingniao Clan. The fox tribe is good at illusions, the sharks can control water, and the bluebirds soar across the nine heavens. Not long after the founding of the country, the sharks found a lifeboat in the northwest waters of Daxu Kingdom, and captured six humans, talking to themselves about the American Federation. Yang Xu:? ? ? Hey, I've already established a country, but you're saying that I'm still on Earth and haven't traveled through time?
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Official(62)Scraped 2d ago
The subject matter is good
A little suggestion or personal opinion, as an LSP I can't bear it. There are too many descriptions of body shape and appearance. Is it necessary? It's because of the water that the book is opened. It really affects the experience of reading the book.
Is this country too rubbish? A destroyer can be destroyed directly. One missile will kill a large area of the island😑😑😑
Your development speed is a bit slow.
You can handle the more than 200 people who are in a difficult group by yourself. There are more than 30 Bluebird tribesmen and more than 10 hipsters. The speed is too slow. What can a person like this do? Now, how can you resist the earth's weapons from the army? How can we fight without developing millions of people? One missile came and all were wiped out. And the strength should be improved quickly.
The subject matter is very good, but it is really too watery and makes people lose interest in reading it.
At least speed up the pace a little bit, really.
Isn't this just a tribe of ten thousand people? There was also talk of founding a country, which made me think it was really a country, and it was too watery. The whole book was full of water.
Author, why are you cooperating with an island country? The Chinese don't like this country. You actually give priority to it. They have a strong mentality. Just because they go back on their words and what they have done to our country, they should be eliminated. You are the first to become strong and then support Japan. It is really disappointing.
The subject matter is good, the plot line is also good, but there is too much saliva, and the writing is just saliva. I can't wait to jump to the next chapter.
I don't know how this book became popular, it's so cool!
Too watery
This book is too shabby, usually there are eunuchs at the end, and it becomes more and more boring as you read it.
come on
Come on, author, don't be influenced by others, no one is perfect, and writing novels can't satisfy everyone's needs.
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Official(62)Scraped 2d ago
The subject matter is good
A little suggestion or personal opinion, as an LSP I can't bear it. There are too many descriptions of body shape and appearance. Is it necessary? It's because of the water that the book is opened. It really affects the experience of reading the book.
Is this country too rubbish? A destroyer can be destroyed directly. One missile will kill a large area of the island😑😑😑
Your development speed is a bit slow.
You can handle the more than 200 people who are in a difficult group by yourself. There are more than 30 Bluebird tribesmen and more than 10 hipsters. The speed is too slow. What can a person like this do? Now, how can you resist the earth's weapons from the army? How can we fight without developing millions of people? One missile came and all were wiped out. And the strength should be improved quickly.
The subject matter is very good, but it is really too watery and makes people lose interest in reading it.
At least speed up the pace a little bit, really.
Isn't this just a tribe of ten thousand people? There was also talk of founding a country, which made me think it was really a country, and it was too watery. The whole book was full of water.
Author, why are you cooperating with an island country? The Chinese don't like this country. You actually give priority to it. They have a strong mentality. Just because they go back on their words and what they have done to our country, they should be eliminated. You are the first to become strong and then support Japan. It is really disappointing.
The subject matter is good, the plot line is also good, but there is too much saliva, and the writing is just saliva. I can't wait to jump to the next chapter.
I don't know how this book became popular, it's so cool!
Too watery
This book is too shabby, usually there are eunuchs at the end, and it becomes more and more boring as you read it.
come on
Come on, author, don't be influenced by others, no one is perfect, and writing novels can't satisfy everyone's needs.













