Da Qin: the Magic Machine is Perfected, Arresting Yan Lingji at the Beginning
About This Novel
At the beginning, you travel through the world of Qin and become the eldest son of Prime Minister Li Si, Li You! He knew clearly that in a few years the First Emperor would die and the world would be in chaos. At that time, his stupid father would join forces with Zhao Gao and Hu Hai to launch the Sand Dune Coup, and then be stabbed in the back by Zhao Gao, ending up with the city cut off in half, and the whole family would be implicated. "No, I can't sit idly by as I've traveled through time and wait for a disaster to come, and the nine tribes will follow the dog's lead!" So Li You decided to make arrangements in advance and at the same time give some good advice to his confused father. ... A few days later. "Sir, a group of Baiyue slaves have been captured in Sanchuan County. Do you want to behead them in public tomorrow and punish them?" When Li You came to the prison, he saw a loli figure in an ice blue dress, and the look on her face and eyes looked quite familiar. "This is... Yan Lingji from the loli period?!" This Great Qin seems to be a little uneasy...
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Official(19)Scraped 13d ago
The fastest human being can write is 800 words per minute. I'm not asking too much, 300 words, one hour and 60 minutes, which is 18,000 words, 24 hours a day If you eat breakfast, lunch and dinner within 2 hours of each other, you will easily become obese. Obesity will cause obesity. If you want to lose weight, you have to exercise. It's easy to lose the number of words if you remove people. An average sleep time of six hours is enough. If you sleep too much, it is a waste of time. I will give you 2 more hours to do some trivial matters, and you will have ten hours of rest time a day. In other words, you only spend 14 hours a day typing and writing books, which is 250,000 Words, let me go with you. 250,000 Words means I write 200,000 words in a day, just So be it, after all we are humanitarian, I hope the author can see me Comments, be strict with yourself, don't be lazy
I remember that Yan Lingji is about the same age as Li Si. There is a big time difference.
I give you five stars because your subject matter is good
Most of your writing revolves around the bright moon of the Qin Dynasty or the plot of history. This is not good. The first focus is on the magical hundred refinements, and the second focus is on public losers, like flowers and bags, and the stove. These are enough for you to write three or four hundred pieces. All the magic weapons under one person are sorted out, and the focus is on one person's Dharma. By the way, the situation of the country.
The time difference is too big. Yan Lingji was still a little lolita after Qin unified the six countries. If you really like Yan Lingji, you can't mess with it. If you can take a look at it if you change your identity, you have to make the timeline so messy. Anyone who has watched Qin should not be able to stand it.
Da Qin is not equal to Qin Shi Mingyue. Qin Shi Mingyue both said that culture is the backbone of secondary creation.
Li Si hadn't gotten married yet at that time. What nonsense are you talking about?
Isn't that what my brother is writing? What happened to the cloud? The timeline is in such a mess.
I want to ask, this word is too dramatic, it's annoying to see it. Also, if you can't write a branch line, don't write it. Don't use the jokes you've read on the Internet without changing them at all (a scene about two women raping their children).
So far it looks pretty good
I especially like the scene where Yuki Onna is in prison. I want to see more updates. Quick updates.
This place of birth was refreshed, and I looked confused.
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Official(19)Scraped 13d ago
The fastest human being can write is 800 words per minute. I'm not asking too much, 300 words, one hour and 60 minutes, which is 18,000 words, 24 hours a day If you eat breakfast, lunch and dinner within 2 hours of each other, you will easily become obese. Obesity will cause obesity. If you want to lose weight, you have to exercise. It's easy to lose the number of words if you remove people. An average sleep time of six hours is enough. If you sleep too much, it is a waste of time. I will give you 2 more hours to do some trivial matters, and you will have ten hours of rest time a day. In other words, you only spend 14 hours a day typing and writing books, which is 250,000 Words, let me go with you. 250,000 Words means I write 200,000 words in a day, just So be it, after all we are humanitarian, I hope the author can see me Comments, be strict with yourself, don't be lazy
I remember that Yan Lingji is about the same age as Li Si. There is a big time difference.
I give you five stars because your subject matter is good
Most of your writing revolves around the bright moon of the Qin Dynasty or the plot of history. This is not good. The first focus is on the magical hundred refinements, and the second focus is on public losers, like flowers and bags, and the stove. These are enough for you to write three or four hundred pieces. All the magic weapons under one person are sorted out, and the focus is on one person's Dharma. By the way, the situation of the country.
The time difference is too big. Yan Lingji was still a little lolita after Qin unified the six countries. If you really like Yan Lingji, you can't mess with it. If you can take a look at it if you change your identity, you have to make the timeline so messy. Anyone who has watched Qin should not be able to stand it.
Da Qin is not equal to Qin Shi Mingyue. Qin Shi Mingyue both said that culture is the backbone of secondary creation.
Li Si hadn't gotten married yet at that time. What nonsense are you talking about?
Isn't that what my brother is writing? What happened to the cloud? The timeline is in such a mess.
I want to ask, this word is too dramatic, it's annoying to see it. Also, if you can't write a branch line, don't write it. Don't use the jokes you've read on the Internet without changing them at all (a scene about two women raping their children).
So far it looks pretty good
I especially like the scene where Yuki Onna is in prison. I want to see more updates. Quick updates.
This place of birth was refreshed, and I looked confused.
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