Devouring the Stars: Lord of Original Sin
by Pitting
About This Novel
Jiang Luo traveled to the Devouring Starry Sky Universe. Bad news, this is an undiscovered planet with life still in primitive society. "People Are Devouring, Fighting Against Heaven and Earth" became "I am a Chief in a Primitive Tribe" Jiang Luo was unwilling and died at the end of his life. Unexpectedly, after death, sacrifices would be continued, and he would become the supreme god of the planet's civilization, 'Di Luo'. His soul would be immortal under the maintenance of the power of faith. In this way, he discovered the golden finger that was five thousand years late. --By gathering faith and condensing will power, he can manifest the skills and abilities from the novels, comics, movies and TV shows he read in his previous life. Embodying the "Picture of Nuwa" to understand the original law... "Kaiou Fist" twenty times the body amplitude... "The Secret of Soldiers" manipulates the controller to command divine weapons like arms... "The Thirteen Swordsman Demonic Body" has unparalleled swordsmanship... "Fist of the Phantom Demon King" enslaves the soul... "Dou Zi Mi" is invincible in battle... "The Hunyuan Jing of Ten Thousand Tribulations" Super Great Divine Body... "The Treasure of the Cricket" controls time and space... "Cao Zi Sword Technique" cuts off the universe... "Swallowing Heaven Demon Technique" swallows all races and creates a chaotic body...
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Official(34)Scraped 3d ago
The writing is okay, but the settings are too vague, so I added them randomly. Let's not talk about the use of seizing the body for reincarnation. Many reincarnation methods related to reincarnation in the heavens and all realms also use seizing the body. It makes sense to switch to Burning Jue later to improve the Law of Fire talent. What kind of rubbish is the Xuantian Technique? The Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique related to the Devouring Origin, the Eternal Devouring Dao, really can't do it if nothingness swallows the Yanzi Fire, can't it swallow the Ancestral Talisman? There is also the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique. The original text clearly states that you can swallow corpses, but you can only swallow living bodies. Moreover, the two genetic evolutions of the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique and the God-Demon Body Refining are repeated. Is it because the number of star-devouring life forms is too small and the quality is too low and needs to be replenished by body refining? Or is it the God-Demon Body Refining that can be refined to be the same as a natural god or demon, that is, it can be refined Innate Ancestral Divine Body, the target of Devouring is also the Innate Beast God, it is too rubbish to repeat. When choosing gods and demons to refine the body, it is not good to choose a good one. The highest level in the Nine Heavens of Chiming is the True God (Manghuang). Why don't you use the God of Withered World? You can still reach the World Realm after all. What's the deal with changing sword skills? Swallowing the Starry Sky does not replace the will training method to improve the will, and the mind refining method improves the state of mind. If you do not exchange for the sword method and the Nine Secrets to improve combat power, do you want to have the Venerable as your teacher? If you want to find a set of Immortal King Techniques that are smaller than Great Emperor Techniques, you should replace them with those of the Clan Clan's treasures that include time and space. At least replace them with Void King Beasts from Perfection (there are true immortals among the representatives of the royal family in Perfection) and Time Beasts (from the Red King clan), which are at least immortal magics. There is also the minion divine body, the Supreme Law shield mentioned above (the Supreme Law in Devouring does not shield, it is the shield of the original universe, and it is only within the scope of the cosmic sea, and the universe disappears when it enters the body of the God King of Jin), and the origin of matter is so powerful that it goes to the sky. In the end, transforming a body with only the power of the world master is too messy. It is better to change it to a body amplitude secret method. At least that can still be used by the master of the universe.
I revoke my previous praise. What I wrote after arriving at the Great Ax Arena was all about idiots. It completely deviated from the style of Devouring the Stars and leaned towards a mysterious and mysterious style. Especially "Jue Ya World", it is a failure within a failure, the plot is rubbish, the writing is meaningless, the style has become disgusting, and what is even more disgusting is that the settings are changed randomly, the settings are added randomly, and the writing is a mess
He's so stupid, he's doing so many tricks, and he's still a little piece of trash.
Two stars are not worth having. Only deserves one star. All the messy things are present. Self-celebrity article.
Are you kidding me? Isn't this a balancer? Tudou didn't even say that this thing has any use. It has no use other than absorption and fusion. How could it have other functions?
debt collector
Damn it, it's you? ! The first book I have been waiting for you for more than two months has not been updated, and I finally caught it today. Get your money back! ! !
I bought it and reviewed it. There are no negative reviews in the book.
Not as good as your first one
This writing standard is getting worse and worse. It's not as good as the first Devouring fanfic.
When you finish writing it, can you write a book that turns into the Ten Evil Nine-Leaf Sword Grass in a Perfect World?
After Chapter 100, the settings are all messed up. I don't understand.
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Official(34)Scraped 3d ago
The writing is okay, but the settings are too vague, so I added them randomly. Let's not talk about the use of seizing the body for reincarnation. Many reincarnation methods related to reincarnation in the heavens and all realms also use seizing the body. It makes sense to switch to Burning Jue later to improve the Law of Fire talent. What kind of rubbish is the Xuantian Technique? The Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique related to the Devouring Origin, the Eternal Devouring Dao, really can't do it if nothingness swallows the Yanzi Fire, can't it swallow the Ancestral Talisman? There is also the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique. The original text clearly states that you can swallow corpses, but you can only swallow living bodies. Moreover, the two genetic evolutions of the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique and the God-Demon Body Refining are repeated. Is it because the number of star-devouring life forms is too small and the quality is too low and needs to be replenished by body refining? Or is it the God-Demon Body Refining that can be refined to be the same as a natural god or demon, that is, it can be refined Innate Ancestral Divine Body, the target of Devouring is also the Innate Beast God, it is too rubbish to repeat. When choosing gods and demons to refine the body, it is not good to choose a good one. The highest level in the Nine Heavens of Chiming is the True God (Manghuang). Why don't you use the God of Withered World? You can still reach the World Realm after all. What's the deal with changing sword skills? Swallowing the Starry Sky does not replace the will training method to improve the will, and the mind refining method improves the state of mind. If you do not exchange for the sword method and the Nine Secrets to improve combat power, do you want to have the Venerable as your teacher? If you want to find a set of Immortal King Techniques that are smaller than Great Emperor Techniques, you should replace them with those of the Clan Clan's treasures that include time and space. At least replace them with Void King Beasts from Perfection (there are true immortals among the representatives of the royal family in Perfection) and Time Beasts (from the Red King clan), which are at least immortal magics. There is also the minion divine body, the Supreme Law shield mentioned above (the Supreme Law in Devouring does not shield, it is the shield of the original universe, and it is only within the scope of the cosmic sea, and the universe disappears when it enters the body of the God King of Jin), and the origin of matter is so powerful that it goes to the sky. In the end, transforming a body with only the power of the world master is too messy. It is better to change it to a body amplitude secret method. At least that can still be used by the master of the universe.
I revoke my previous praise. What I wrote after arriving at the Great Ax Arena was all about idiots. It completely deviated from the style of Devouring the Stars and leaned towards a mysterious and mysterious style. Especially "Jue Ya World", it is a failure within a failure, the plot is rubbish, the writing is meaningless, the style has become disgusting, and what is even more disgusting is that the settings are changed randomly, the settings are added randomly, and the writing is a mess
He's so stupid, he's doing so many tricks, and he's still a little piece of trash.
Two stars are not worth having. Only deserves one star. All the messy things are present. Self-celebrity article.
Are you kidding me? Isn't this a balancer? Tudou didn't even say that this thing has any use. It has no use other than absorption and fusion. How could it have other functions?
debt collector
Damn it, it's you? ! The first book I have been waiting for you for more than two months has not been updated, and I finally caught it today. Get your money back! ! !
I bought it and reviewed it. There are no negative reviews in the book.
Not as good as your first one
This writing standard is getting worse and worse. It's not as good as the first Devouring fanfic.
When you finish writing it, can you write a book that turns into the Ten Evil Nine-Leaf Sword Grass in a Perfect World?
After Chapter 100, the settings are all messed up. I don't understand.
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