After Rebirth, I Have a Beauty System

① The heroine relies too much on the system. She opens a beauty salon and loses weight. What if the system disappears? (I didn't say that the system is not needed, or the system sells some skin care product formulas. The heroine can go to the real world to buy materials and production machines to complete it.) ②There are too many top quality characters and the heroine is too weak. There are a bunch of them on the heroine's mother's side, and a pile on her father's side (just let the best people make trouble, can't think of a way to solve it?) ③ That Cao Muzi is very annoyed. The heroine and her mother have a certain balance, why don't they move to another place to live?

Can't this be written well? I want to write about some disgusting relatives. Are your relatives like this? Drunk

The first is too dependent on the system, hoping that the system will disappear for a while The second attitude is particularly bad. I feel self-centered. Third...

Even though I was reborn, I still feel too weak.

The novel is really good. But I have some thoughts of my own. 1. Some of the best relatives of the heroine are really speechless. Maybe it's because my family is very harmonious, but I really don't understand why there are so many best ones. 2. The heroine's attitude towards her relatives. Although he is reborn, first of all, when it comes to his treatment of his uncle, he is not a very harsh person, but his aunt is too cautious. The heroine's attitude toward her uncle didn't sit well with me. Secondly, treat dad. Maybe my heart softens too easily. I saw the heroine's father crying "uselessly" many times, which made me feel a little uncomfortable. Her attitude towards her father was so bad. But after reading the last two chapters, the heroine was still a little moved. I hope they can reconcile in the future, don't ask for more intimacy, at least get along on the surface.

It's a bit childish. The author is a bit of a novice.

There are so many great things, so many great things. I don't understand why the three daughters want the eldest sister to pay? Is the hostess still a playboy when she meets a boyfriend? There may be some suffering later on, but it's really boring to watch. If you don't develop your career well, you'll be doing trivial things every day. The heroine is so incompetent that she relies on her mother and the system.

She looks good. The heroine should lose weight as soon as possible so that she won't be looked down upon by others.

The whole article is quite good, but the ending feels a bit hasty. In fact, it could use more

It looks great, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง