Immortality

The technique practiced by the protagonist is obviously that of the Hundong Ancestor, but later it actually becomes his own. This logic is wrong, and the protagonist was a golden immortal in the prehistoric world in his previous life. Whenever I see something in my reincarnation, I will be extremely surprised.

The writing was not very good. The second one showed him transforming from a human into a loach. By the fifth chapter, he didn't know that he could change. He also thought it was strange that the first level of the Jinxian's spiritual consciousness was stronger than the Jindan. Can one-tenth of the level 9 and level 99 be the same?

Cultivation is all about a state of mind. I hope the author doesn't write people with too much contrast in personality before and after, and the plot doesn't make it too childish. After all, this is the rebirth of a golden immortal. It has to have a certain character, as long as it doesn't make people stupid.

If you are such a weakling, start from scratch, don't write so awesome at the beginning. Annoying

The author's book is like "the sound of loud music sweeping away the shadows", like "pushing away the clouds and mist to see the blue sky." It makes book friends like me see hope and the future! Bolt from the blue and enlightenment may not be enough to describe the possibility of the master's article. The moving clouds of Wushan Mountain and the flowing water of the Yangtze River are even more difficult to compare with the master's literary talent. Huang Zhongda Lu is inspiring and enlightening. Your candle illuminates the world, and you can clearly see thousands of miles away. You bring rain and dew to the common people, and you bring benefits to all directions. Through your profound words, I seem to see your majestic and heroic posture, looking at wolves and looking at wolves, walking like dragons and tigers; I seem to see your wisdom and demeanor, writing articles all over the world with a big pen as big as a rafter; I seem to see your heroic spirit when you press your sword and look around. After reading this book sentence by sentence, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time. I was shocked! Why is there such a good book? I have been browsing the Internet for many years, and I thought that no book would ever touch me again. I didn't expect to see such a wonderful book today. Author, it is you who made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is heaven outside the world". Thank you. After reading this book, I did not reply immediately because I was afraid that my vulgar reply would tarnish this rare book on the Internet. But I still replied, because I felt that if I couldn't leave my own footprints in such a wonderful book, then I would never die in peace. How proud I am to be able to leave my own footprints in such a wonderful book. Author, please forgive my selfishness. I know that no matter how gorgeous the words are, it is not enough and hypocritical to describe the brilliance of your book. So I just want to say: your book is really beautiful. I am willing to read it for the rest of my life. This book has a novel concept, unique subject matter, clear paragraphs, strange plot, ups and downs, clear main line, fascinating, and ordinary literary skills. It can be said that every word is precious and every sentence is a classic. It is a model that our generation should learn from. From the perspective of novel art, this book is not too successful, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. As the saying goes: A galloping horse, a shooting vulture and a bow, the heaven and the earth are in my heart!" The author truly deserves to be the founder of the new generation of Wuli World. Originally, I had been disappointed with the entire online literary world and felt that there was no future for me. My heart was filled with sadness. But after reading your book, I regained hope in the online literary world. It is you who rekindled the fire of hope in my heart, it was you who revived my heart, and it was you who saved my heart that was cold and cold. Originally I decided not to come back to the online literature world, but after reading your book, I told myself that this book is a must-read. This is a good book that is rare to see in a century. The sky has eyes, allowing me to read such a wonderful book in my lifetime.

Don't want to talk..........

The plot arrangement is so toxic, it really affected my mood after watching it.

The protagonist in this book has insufficient IQ, overflowing emotions, unknown abilities, no innovative spirit, and no imagination about the extraordinary itself. He is a bastard-type protagonist who lives as long as he can and cannot and cannot save himself.

It feels so boring, the idea is very good, but the literary talent is not very good, it is too wordy, and it is too worldly. It does not look like a Taoist at all, but more like a different kind of city. Writing is not easy, so I still give it 5 stars.

The two foxes were caught and not killed because they were too verbose.