The Path to the Peak of Elves

After reading the first 5 chapters, I can't watch anymore. I won't complain about following the popular way of time travel. It's enough that you can reprint the initial Pokémon according to the main line of the TV version. If the introduction is the same as you wrote, Kati Dog is already dead. Even if the Pokémon ball can slow down the death time, the protagonist will be dead when he reaches Joban City. Think of Zhenxin Town as a small village about 20km away from the town. You walk from the village to Joban City and avoid the attacks of wild elves. And the only combat power is that he is on the verge of death as soon as he reaches Joban Forest. How did the protagonist get out of Viridian Forest? Even if there is a main road, it is impossible not to encounter an aggressive elf. Can you please think through your mind when writing it? It is better to write it according to the TV plot. Finally, although I don't want to scold people for no reason, I just want to say that those two did not even write about the quality of the plot and gave it 5 stars. They must be really good. I want to know how good it is? It's okay to think only if you have a brain. Please take a good look at the strength of the elves written by the author and the previous plot. As long as you have brains, you won't give 5 stars directly. Please use your brain when writing reviews in the future. Don't let your brains be as ugly and ugly as shit.

This novel made me a little embarrassed. It feels like a carbon copy of Ash Ketchum. It's just a new skin.

Are you writing about whether you have watched Pokémon? Don't the three Hualan sisters know? What you wrote is the same as the remake of the first anime. What's so good about it? I might as well watch the anime to have a more immersive and nostalgic feeling. Your writing is really nondescript. You don't mention the advantages of foresight and foresight, and Goldfinger doesn't have it. I haven't used the knowledge of Pokémon and powerful Pokémon for so many years. It would be better to travel as a breeder.

This male protagonist has a selfish and bad personality, and he is angry at someone else's doctor? I just became a willful vegetative state. When I woke up, my mother told me not to stop her, so she still ran away? If you dislike someone's Cady dog, why don't they get angry with you? Such a bad person is really speechless. Get angry if things don't go your way

I read ten chapters, and seven of them were written around Xiaozhi. Who is Xiaozhi to you? Can't you write without centering on him? Can't the protagonist have his own dreams? Even if he is regarded as a competitor, there is no need to follow the path that Xiaozhi has walked. Can't the protagonist have his own story? That will only make readers feel poisonous. Even the villains who cultivate immortality and are reborn would not dare to write like this. Are you poisonous?

Just like anime, rubbish novel

There is nothing to say, it is completely copied from TV.

Good. . . . . .

Well, it takes ten words, that's a lot.

Did you hide your initial Elf Kati Dog? It's not used very much. The low-end version of Ash Ketchum is almost the same as a travel companion. Accepted