The Most Beautiful Lady
by Rourou Loves Vegetarian Food
About This Novel
Lin Yue lived smoothly until she was twenty-five in her last life, saved a child, and then traveled to ancient times and became a fat woman who was a butcher! Looking at the man who looked like the handsome man of later generations, Lin Yue said that such a man could not hold on. Looking down at her fat body and squeezing the swimming ring around her waist, Lin Yue said that she couldn't hold on to this figure! I thought she was a butcher, but after she lost weight, she became a beautiful woman with outstanding looks. Who knew that she was a butcher? Lin Yue, who had just emerged, said it was okay, but in a blink of an eye, he also discovered that he also had an identity. Lin Yue smiled from ear to ear: Who is that, don't leave, I want to marry you now!
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Official(2)Scraped 8d ago
I prefer reading fat girl inspirational articles about losing weight. But didn't the heroine sever ties with the Lin family? Why don't you be tougher and ask the male protagonist to talk to his father about a formal marriage? Haha~ In the end, he invited his father into the house and started chatting. How could he be so heartbroken? What's more, before that, the male and female protagonist also knew about the secret marriage that his father sold the youngest daughter in the family. Although the male and female protagonists discussed rescuing the little girl, couldn't they completely cut off the relationship and cut off the contact? Also, the heroine's father obviously has a tendency to let her stepmother go. Why should such a family care about it? Hehehe~ Hey, it looks like it's so annoying! Frustrated!
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When writing an article in the future, the author must first write an outline before writing. I see that a lot of what you write is written wherever you think of it. It's so simple. There is no foreshadowing, and it is just written for you. It seems too abrupt. I feel that you are about to collapse several times, so you have to write so many things. To be honest, now that I see it, I feel that the character design has collapsed. I hope the author will not make this mistake next time.
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Official(2)Scraped 8d ago
I prefer reading fat girl inspirational articles about losing weight. But didn't the heroine sever ties with the Lin family? Why don't you be tougher and ask the male protagonist to talk to his father about a formal marriage? Haha~ In the end, he invited his father into the house and started chatting. How could he be so heartbroken? What's more, before that, the male and female protagonist also knew about the secret marriage that his father sold the youngest daughter in the family. Although the male and female protagonists discussed rescuing the little girl, couldn't they completely cut off the relationship and cut off the contact? Also, the heroine's father obviously has a tendency to let her stepmother go. Why should such a family care about it? Hehehe~ Hey, it looks like it's so annoying! Frustrated!
Give an opinion
When writing an article in the future, the author must first write an outline before writing. I see that a lot of what you write is written wherever you think of it. It's so simple. There is no foreshadowing, and it is just written for you. It seems too abrupt. I feel that you are about to collapse several times, so you have to write so many things. To be honest, now that I see it, I feel that the character design has collapsed. I hope the author will not make this mistake next time.
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