
There is a Paradise at the Beginning
About This Novel
(The realm of cultivation: practicing essence to transform into qi, practicing qi to transform into spirit, refining spirit to return to emptiness...)
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Official(16)Scraped 1mo ago
come on
Come on, work hard, boy
Speechless
Bad character. Too bad. Just change a few things for a top-quality skill. He also promised that he would have trouble in the future. Want to help. Oh. You saved him. I also want to help others. If it were me. So what if you give it to him. Want nothing. Wait until you succeed in cultivation later. Destroy his entire sect
It feels like a cold-blooded family that doesn't ask for anything in return. At least there are some good parents who think first. For example, the Jiuli Pot was given to him by his mother. Even if his mother didn't get the Jiuli Pot, he could save his life at the cost of his blood and essence in a crisis. (Essence and blood can be restored, but if you lose your life, you really have nothing.) Who is willing to give this kind of life-saving artifact to someone? When the protagonist meets a Nascent Soul, others haven't said anything about him or the Eighty-nine Mysterious Techniques. He gave it to his parents, but he didn't see any good things for his parents...
personal opinion
The protagonist has no relationship with his family. The protagonist has many opportunities but no overall situation. At Qi Training 6, he has the Golden Elixir. What makes people wonder is why he didn't give it to his family? I have so many opportunities even if I can't let my parents build infrastructure. It can also make them feel better. The story line you wrote in this book is still okay, but the emotional expression is too ruthless.
Come on
Recommended votes will be given to you. Come on, no more eunuchs.
The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes
You should write the title of the book as, I got hallucinations while cultivating immortality.
When will your sacred wooden king tripod\(◎o◎)/! come out
I am speechless╯╰Where is it?
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Do the task, finish the task, finish the task, finish the task, finish the task, finish the task,
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Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 1mo ago
come on
Come on, work hard, boy
Speechless
Bad character. Too bad. Just change a few things for a top-quality skill. He also promised that he would have trouble in the future. Want to help. Oh. You saved him. I also want to help others. If it were me. So what if you give it to him. Want nothing. Wait until you succeed in cultivation later. Destroy his entire sect
It feels like a cold-blooded family that doesn't ask for anything in return. At least there are some good parents who think first. For example, the Jiuli Pot was given to him by his mother. Even if his mother didn't get the Jiuli Pot, he could save his life at the cost of his blood and essence in a crisis. (Essence and blood can be restored, but if you lose your life, you really have nothing.) Who is willing to give this kind of life-saving artifact to someone? When the protagonist meets a Nascent Soul, others haven't said anything about him or the Eighty-nine Mysterious Techniques. He gave it to his parents, but he didn't see any good things for his parents...
personal opinion
The protagonist has no relationship with his family. The protagonist has many opportunities but no overall situation. At Qi Training 6, he has the Golden Elixir. What makes people wonder is why he didn't give it to his family? I have so many opportunities even if I can't let my parents build infrastructure. It can also make them feel better. The story line you wrote in this book is still okay, but the emotional expression is too ruthless.
Come on
Recommended votes will be given to you. Come on, no more eunuchs.
The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes
You should write the title of the book as, I got hallucinations while cultivating immortality.
When will your sacred wooden king tripod\(◎o◎)/! come out
I am speechless╯╰Where is it?
,,,,,,,,
,,,,,,,,
Do the task, finish the task, finish the task, finish the task, finish the task, finish the task,












