An Orphan in Troubled Times, Living a Daily Life

The heroine seems to have done bad things in her previous life and is here to pay off the debt. She can encounter any kind of bad luck or bad people. He has no brains and is very unsmart.

I guess a white-eyed wolf must be arranged because of the plot, and it must be a white-eyed wolf. However, there are a few unreasonable things in the plot. With so much money, he should hire an escort before escaping. A bunch of weak, sick and disabled people are fleeing, even if you put an 11-year-old child in modern times with a broken leg and a little girl of one year old, it is inconvenient to travel even if you have a car. In the ancient situation, deserting soldiers across mountains and ridges was a disaster, and we did not have the corresponding military support. This heroine is still thinking like an adult after all. There has to be some calculation. You can't do drama for plot's sake.

Regarding relationships: Shen Yue feels like the male lead In the end, the setting of the two male miraculous doctors and the female protagonist together feels very good It might be better if it was written more cruelly The female protagonist here never felt like she liked the male protagonist throughout the whole process. But I feel like I don't like the miracle doctor that much either. Fortunately it's not a dog food article It's okay if you can't write about deep sadomasochism. At least it won't make you want to vomit. Regarding war: What I wrote above is considered to be very good compared to most war articles. Cruel and tragic, the heroine's golden finger is neither too big nor too small, just right About the space: It's just right, not so magical that the heroine is so omnipotent that she turns into a virgin. Regarding the Holy Mother's Heart: The heroine in this article is okay. Although the character is written without the Virgin's Heart, it feels silly and sweet. Fortunately, the space is not omnipotent and blocks the heroine's steps. The two male protagonists are still cold-hearted and cold-hearted, and they also restrain the heroine from seeking death. Regarding the use of space: The writing is very decompressive and can be regarded as the highlight of the whole text. The description of searching for things in space is the best of its kind in space writing. The gold brick digging by the Korean government all shows that the author is determined and talented. Regarding the literary talent: the sense of traffic on the road, the cruelty of war, the escape from famine and drought (the writing is not detailed enough + the writing is not sensational enough, there are no acquaintances around, it is difficult for readers to empathize, there is only plot, no sensation), the arrangement of a man taking over the world, the concept of a man taking concubines, the medicine hall setting, the heroine's escape south, etc. The plot settings all show that the author is very talented and focuses on key points. I was dissatisfied with the shortcomings, such as the inability to write sensational stories, the lack of sadomasochism, and the lack of arrangements for a painful and early death for the male lead, Shen Yue. Because from the moment Shen Yue asked the heroine to help him use space to transport food and grass, I felt that if I were the heroine and I didn't want him, I would definitely choose the pure love miracle doctor. Shen Yue's love is not pure. When he feels that taking a concubine is okay and that it is great if he doesn't touch it, if I were the heroine, I would kill him and take the throne myself. He only deserves an early death. So it's not a cool article Got a reborn girl: This setting is very jarring. It simply exists for the male protagonist to seek death. It's completely unnecessary and makes readers feel uncomfortable. Steps of War: I saw it ranked among the top three in the female counting video. The author has a good view of the overall situation In short, this article is an excellent one among women's videos. It is not worthy of comparison with articles that are generally about petty love, moaning about nothing, and making noise in the back room. Although there are many shortcomings, the various settings and frameworks are comparable to the vastness of Han Yuxi's novel. It's eye-catching. So I give five stars I'm picky, but this article is worth typing

I can't stand it anymore, it's too frustrating. Goodbye.

The content of this book is quite good, but there is too much nonsense. When escaping for her life, the heroine even talked a lot of useless nonsense to her family, which makes it impossible to grasp the main point. I hope the author will curb some of the nonsense, otherwise he will really abandon the book.

The plot is okay and the writing style is good too

I really don't know what to say, and it's really stupid to find out that there are really supporting characters in the whole story. Damn it, I saw them going to that small village, so I hid on the roof. Please, I just tried it randomly, and there were reminders. You must prepare first. Even if you are unfortunate, you should make more preparations. When there is chaos, I don't know what to say. If I had the energy to put it into reality, I would have died thousands of times. The novel should at least be realistic. I found that everything I read recently has some brain problems. Let's not talk about the problem of the protagonist first, but let's talk about the supporting characters or something else. They are really stupid and foolish. I really don't know what to say. They are just ancients, not fools. They are stupid and stupid. I really don't know what to say. I stopped reading and gave up the article. I really don't know what to say. If there is no such stupidity in that part, I will read it later. The first part is obviously quite good. It's just because that part makes me more disgusted. I'm really tired of stupidity. Can I write that I have a higher IQ? It really shouldn't be so stupid. At least if a normal person really has that difficult environment, he shouldn't be like that. Suddenly he sat on the ground and burst into tears. I really didn't know what to say. And the heroine, you can be kind, but please understand your current situation clearly. You actually have to live in troubled times with your family. That's no problem, then you can help, but can you remind others to have a certain degree of restraint? Just remind me, I don't know what to say. The old people in troubled times are right, but the Holy Mother must also have a sense of restraint. At first I thought it was just the comment section. They occasionally mentioned the Holy Mother or something, but I didn't realize it was the real Holy Mother. To be honest, if there were a few white-eyed wolves or something among the people he helped, he would be the first to die. If he didn't have the aura of the protagonist or had no space, it goes without saying that he would die in two days. The world is in chaos. Can you put your compassion and the Holy Mother's heart aside and take care of yourself and your family? Don't talk about kindness or not. In a troubled world, do you still care about kindness? Everything up to this point is good, but this part is so disgusting to me, like a thorn, I can't stand it at all. I didn't want to comment at first, but the more I think about it, the more I get annoyed and stupid. Don't read it. Couldn't it be written in the same way as before? I don't know how to write it later. The more I read, the weirder it becomes. I feel like it's written for ordinary people. They are just ordinary, not stupid. If they were really stupid, they wouldn't be called ordinary. I suggest you cure the heroine's Mary's Disease, and how old the heroine was before she time traveled. Just take care of your family. If you have the time, you can help people, but you don't have to help so many people. If you want to help so many people, if you are within your ability, then there is nothing to say. But if you don't have the ability, there is nothing to say. But to be honest, I really feel that if this kind of person really travels over there, the first one to die will be said to have a dog's life or something, but a real dog's life will not tell others the secret. Why is it called a dog's life? Because it has the word "dog", which means you have to stick to it, instead of blatantly telling others. If you do as you are told, then forget it. If you tell everyone so blatantly, are you afraid that there will be no white-eyed wolf or something, who will suddenly give you a knife? Don't talk about having space. If he didn't have time to enter the space at that time, it would be a dead end. Don't take people's hearts so seriously. I can only say that this book is of that kind. If it's not that he has stupid eyes and doesn't read it with brains, then he can continue reading. I'll use my brains, so forget it. I planned to read it without thinking, but the more I read, the more annoyed I became. The more I read, the more I realized that the author is too big. I will write less stupid reviews in the future, and the score can be higher😔

Anyway, I can't stand the nonsense. It's too much. What should I do? A lot of nonsense

Author, why do you want to write the heroine as a stupid and silly character? You should be scolded for writing such things. My uncle and aunt can't protect themselves. Why should I bring Xu Miaoying and her sister with me on vacation? In troubled times, she still has the kindness of a woman. The heroine is really speechless. She is soft-hearted and helps these unscrupulous people. Why do you think you are the savior? There are so many people in trouble. You should just become a saint and forget about it. Give up the article.

I don't know if I'm getting impatient. I've been reading a lot of Taneda's stories recently and I feel like I can't stand them anymore. This one is okay so far. The golden fingers are a little thicker, but it will still be acceptable if it is no longer expanded. I hope there won't be any sudden 180-degree turns later on, such as falling in love, gaining peerless martial arts, ascending to immortality, etc. I have a similar feeling after reading a few books recently. The previous and later chapters are very disconnected, and the further you go, the more you lose the original intention of farming.