Playful Peasant Girl

After reading a few chapters, the content is too simple, and many of them are skipped, like a running account. The author's writing style still needs to work hard to improve. It's like saying that after the house is repaired, there will be a banquet, with 16 dishes on the table, and there is no profitable business. Aren't you afraid of being known by others that you actually have a lot of money? Then I said that I was sold to a flower shop when I went out to see what business there was. After saying a few words to the mother there, they believed you and showed you what you are capable of, and then you made money! Nervous! The author really feels that the writing style needs to be reworked 😂. I have been reading novels for four or five years, and I have read thousands of novels. This is the first time I write a review 😂. Originally, the subject matter I like very much is written like this 😭, like a primary school student's journal, I really couldn't stand it anymore and decided to abandon the article. I hope the author can improve his writing skills. Also, I feel that it is too easy for the heroine to make money and live a life. I feel that the author must have never been out in the society. He really doesn't know the sufferings of the world. I hope the author can be more relevant to life 😂.

Could it be that my skills are too poor? That's why this article feels like a running account to me. It's not interesting.

Not bad! Very pretty

"The Farmer's Wife Is Extremely Pampered: The Man in the Mountains Needs Training" "What sin has my old woman committed? Is she a deadbeat who spent money to buy a daughter-in-law?" At the west end of the village, Mrs. Sun was crying and wiping her tears. Several families nearby gathered in front of her door. The old Lu family bought a daughter-in-law for Lu Nanchuan, the third son of the Lu family, at the market this morning. In the morning, the news had already spread in the village. When they heard the cry, everyone wanted to rush over to see what was going on. "Mom, my sister-in-law encouraged you to buy this girl for your third brother. How can you be the one who caused the evil?" Mrs. Hu, Lu's second daughter-in-law, held up her four-month-old belly, pulled her hand, and persuaded her hypocritically. Mr. Lu's daughter-in-law, Mrs. Han, was unwilling to do so. She was not the one urging the old woman to take out the money. Don't even think about pouring this dirty water on yourself. "Brother and sister, what do you mean by this? I didn't see you trying to persuade me when my mother paid for it. Besides, I said it would be a good idea to buy a wife for my third brother, but you chose this person. If it's like this, what do you care about me?" Lu Nanchuan squatted aside and looked at the little girl lying on the ground with some pity. She was dead, and the whole family was still arguing here. Mrs. Cheng, who was across the wall, came closer, looked at the little girl lying on the ground and asked Sun, "Sister-in-law Lu, what's going on with the third daughter-in-law? Are you crying all over the place?" Sun covered her heart, her head swollen with anger, and she said in confusion, "Dead, this girl died suddenly not long after she came back. She lost me two and a half taels of silver, and had to pay for a coffin. Oh, my God! My life is so miserable, old lady!" Dead? The villagers were all dumbfounded. What was going on? Dead? Aren't you just dead? Someone pushed him down from the twenty-third floor. It's a wonder he survived! The noise in his ears became louder and louder, and the chaotic sounds became clearer and clearer. A group of memories that did not belong to him suddenly appeared in Gengsang's mind. In my memory, a girl named Geng Sang was so hungry that she almost fainted on the roadside with cracks everywhere. Later, she was taken away by opportunistic traffickers. From Liangzhou to Jinzhou, the traffickers poured cold water on the "goods" they picked up and took them to the market. It was under such circumstances that she was bought back by Sun. Recalling that girls like him, the ones with outstanding looks were sold to brothels, and the ones in good health were bought back by powerful landlords as concubines, Geng Sang had to be grateful to Sun for buying back the original girls who had worked hard to save money. Eating chaffy vegetables is better than going to those dirty places, and you can live a clean life. Geng Sang listened to the unscrupulous Sun who was scolding the human traffickers, and felt extremely grateful in his heart. Thanks to her stinginess and stupidity, she listened to the trafficker's sweet talk and bought herself back. After waking up, Geng Sang opened his eyes and watched the villagers surrounding him spinning. He calmed down and then spoke with difficulty to remind them, "I'm not dead yet..." Lu Nanchuan listened to the voice that was smaller than a mosquito, looked at her inquiringly, and asked her in a nonchalant manner, "Do you know who you are?" Geng Sang was surprised, who was this person? When he woke up, he didn't ask her what was going on. Instead, he asked her such incomprehensible questions as whether she knew who she was. "Didn't I be bought back by Aunt Sun to be my wife? Who are you?" Geng Sang asked him cautiously. He had never seen such a person in his memory.

The plot description is not specific, too jumpy, the plot arrangement is unreasonable, the characters, environment, and emotions are unclearly described, the content is too concise and outrageous, and the writing style needs to be improved.

Passing by, would you recommend?

I abandoned the article decisively, the content was unclear, and it was a mess. I would like to ask the author to clarify it after you finish it. If you think this article is readable as a whole, it can be published again, okay? This is the worst article I have ever read.

It's a bit messy. . . . .

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