
I Cultivated Immortality in the Military Academy and Cried All over the World
by Menghuaizhu
About This Novel
Initially, she said that when the mental test ball broke. Others thought she had no mental strength, and they felt that she was so shocked that she began to have random thoughts. Until she went to school with a disposable test ball of F-level mental power. Later, every time Zhu Jiuzhi went to the Star Alliance for spiritual power, he could give the people of Aqua Blue Star a little shock. Spirit tattoo master? Isn't this a talisman? Pharmacist? Isn't this just alchemy? ... Everyone dislikes you, but you are the most successful. Let's see how Zhu Jiuzhi, who lives in the future interstellar world, can use his Five Elements Spiritual Roots to build a road to the sky!
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Official(5)Scraped 20d ago
nice
But I feel that it will be balanced with some background and some abilities, because currently we know that it is a female protagonist, but it also means that her talent is destined, which is good. I know that I want to arrange the secrets easily, but it is faster than the female protagonist. If someone uses it to backfire on the female protagonist, she may even be used as a tool. It is very possible, and the female protagonist has been giving a lot of things to the National Research Institute. If the heroine doesn't leave herself a way out, she will be replaced sooner or later. I think it's best to make the heroine's talent unique and irreplaceable. Otherwise, there is no way out, and the other party is also studying your stuff. If it is leaked by spies or something, it will only be a matter of time to find the weak point after a little research. As for Jiang and Zhongzhou, they know that there are not so many good people. There are also heroines with better talents than her. It's only a matter of time before someone is replaced and squeezed. I saw that the heroine was secretly able to achieve the heroine's success for several months in one night, and I was a little unwilling to accept it. The heroine should be unique and even talented in the reader's mind. Because originally, uniqueness is a genius and a talent. When someone with a better talent than her appears, I kind of feel that the heroine, besides knowing those things, never thought about what she would do if she was studied for mass production. She originally came here with a unique talent, but in the end, someone with a better talent appeared. . Substitutability is too high. On the contrary, there is nothing good to see.
So pretty! I read it all in one go. The writing is smooth and correct. I recommend everyone to read it.
Being poisoned from behind
The Jiang family targets the heroine like this, but the heroine doesn't even say a single thing. What happened to the top family? Is it just a request compared to the country, and the income the heroine can bring is comparable to that of a top family? As long as the heroine tells the country that the Jiang family is plotting against her? It's probably going to rain the next day in Jiang's house. Seven times later, her father came to take advantage of Qiu Feng when he found out that she was successful. The heroine endured it as if she was her father after all. She cheated on her during marriage and abandoned his wife and daughter. I would just kick out this kind of scumbag father and provide him with a sperm. It was as if his bloodline was noble and he had the throne to inherit. It was impossible for a strong man to be threatened by ants.
The combination of interstellar and immortal cultivation is inexplicably easy to match and look good. I hope the heroine can find her own world.
The article is flowing and has a strong sense of rhythm. The content is cute and cute, with a strong sense of immersion Very well written Urgent to update. Urgent to update.
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Official(5)Scraped 20d ago
nice
But I feel that it will be balanced with some background and some abilities, because currently we know that it is a female protagonist, but it also means that her talent is destined, which is good. I know that I want to arrange the secrets easily, but it is faster than the female protagonist. If someone uses it to backfire on the female protagonist, she may even be used as a tool. It is very possible, and the female protagonist has been giving a lot of things to the National Research Institute. If the heroine doesn't leave herself a way out, she will be replaced sooner or later. I think it's best to make the heroine's talent unique and irreplaceable. Otherwise, there is no way out, and the other party is also studying your stuff. If it is leaked by spies or something, it will only be a matter of time to find the weak point after a little research. As for Jiang and Zhongzhou, they know that there are not so many good people. There are also heroines with better talents than her. It's only a matter of time before someone is replaced and squeezed. I saw that the heroine was secretly able to achieve the heroine's success for several months in one night, and I was a little unwilling to accept it. The heroine should be unique and even talented in the reader's mind. Because originally, uniqueness is a genius and a talent. When someone with a better talent than her appears, I kind of feel that the heroine, besides knowing those things, never thought about what she would do if she was studied for mass production. She originally came here with a unique talent, but in the end, someone with a better talent appeared. . Substitutability is too high. On the contrary, there is nothing good to see.
So pretty! I read it all in one go. The writing is smooth and correct. I recommend everyone to read it.
Being poisoned from behind
The Jiang family targets the heroine like this, but the heroine doesn't even say a single thing. What happened to the top family? Is it just a request compared to the country, and the income the heroine can bring is comparable to that of a top family? As long as the heroine tells the country that the Jiang family is plotting against her? It's probably going to rain the next day in Jiang's house. Seven times later, her father came to take advantage of Qiu Feng when he found out that she was successful. The heroine endured it as if she was her father after all. She cheated on her during marriage and abandoned his wife and daughter. I would just kick out this kind of scumbag father and provide him with a sperm. It was as if his bloodline was noble and he had the throne to inherit. It was impossible for a strong man to be threatened by ants.
The combination of interstellar and immortal cultivation is inexplicably easy to match and look good. I hope the heroine can find her own world.
The article is flowing and has a strong sense of rhythm. The content is cute and cute, with a strong sense of immersion Very well written Urgent to update. Urgent to update.






