Douluo: Twins of Destiny

It's a bad start. Let Xuanzi discover his identity directly, and add a ninth-level soul guide, can this be tolerated? ? ? The first thing Shrek thinks of is to steal the Soul Dao Machine and then kill you.

I have been following the update until now. I was disgusted by Ye Xishui's plot. I felt very aggrieved. This is my first comment since I read the novel. The plot and themes are very good. I really don't want to give up on this book.

In my personal opinion, Ye Xishui is too disgusting and that part is a bit frustrating. The following is the part I saw and what I imagined was the story of being protected by a big boss (no other meaning) ...(Act 1) After Ye Xishui and Long Xiaoyao verified that Jiang Qingtong and Jiang Shengyu were not brothers and sisters, Ye Xishui had a nasty idea, and Long Xiaoyao was about to stop him. At this time, a word rang in the hearts of Ye Xishui and the others, if they were hurt, you wouldn't have to exist. Immediately afterwards, the space in front of Ye Xishui and the others was distorted, and an ethereal and light pressure rushed towards their faces. A white-haired Taoist riding on a green bull appeared from it. Long Xiaoyao looked at the old Taoist in front of him, but he couldn't see through his cultivation level, and his inner alarm rang loudly, as if he would instantly turn into ashes if he disobeyed the old Taoist. When Ye Xishui saw this, a look of madness appeared in his eyes, and he was about to take action. The old Taoist just lightly flapped his feather fan, and Ye Xishui vomited blood and fell to the ground seriously injured. As soon as Long Xiaoyao helped Ye Xishui up, another thought emerged in their hearts - "Get lost" Long Xiaoyao was shocked, but quickly left with Ye Xishui. The old Tao lowered his head and slowly looked at the two naked people hugging each other on the ground. In an instant, the two of them were wearing clothes, and a pair of Tai Chi diagrams under their bodies lifted them up and followed the old Tao to Jiang Shengyu's room. After settling them down, the old man disappeared, as if he had never appeared. ...(Act 2) During the final between Shrek and the Sun Moon Team, Ma Xiaotao's evil fire broke out, but was defeated by Jiang Shengyu and Ma Rulong. The referee was about to announce the winner. But at this time, Mr. Xuan in the audience, adhering to Shrek's fine tradition, rushed to the stage to interrupt, tried to use force to snatch the Sword of Judgment from Ma Rulong's hand, and declared the game invalid. Just when Jiang Shengyu wanted to use words to delay time, the space next to him was distorted. After a shadow of the Tai Chi diagram, the old Taoist from before appeared again. He looked at Jiang Shengyu with gentle eyes. As for Mr. Xuan, after the old Taoist appeared, he was slapped against the wall and could not unbutton it. Faced with Lao Tao's gaze, Jiang Shengyu was still confused and was about to speak, when Lao Tao looked at Jiang Qingtong in the audience and slowly waved to her, signaling her to come on stage. When Jiang Qingtong came up, just as Jiang Shengyu was about to say "senior", a red lotus appeared in front of the two of them, entwining them and integrating them into their bodies. The two of them looked at the old Taoist. The old Taoist did not speak, but two words appeared in their hearts - [gift, self-defense] Jiang Shengyu was horrified by Hong Lian's origin, and was still a little afraid to accept it. Another thought came to her mind - [If you encounter evil, you can use your karma, don't be afraid] Jiang Shengyu had no choice but to accept it. Seeing the two accept it, the old Taoist smiled, but he slowly looked at the sky again, as if he thought of something. He lightly fanned the feather fan in his hand, and the Tai Chi Yin and Yang fish appeared on the chests of Jiang Shengyu and Jiang Shengyu, and then the shadow of a black and yellow pagoda shrouded their heads. The old Taoist seemed to feel relieved after seeing his arrangement. The two of them also knew what the old man in front of them had done for 'them'. They had a lot to say, but in the end they just bowed down. The old Taoist accepted this readily. Good The competition passed smoothly, and the veteran also left again. Note: Red Lotus: Twelfth Grade Fire Red Lotus Tai Chi Yin Yang Fish: Tai Chi Diagram Xuanhuang Pagoda: Xuanhuang Exquisite Pagoda of Heaven and Earth Old Taoist: Taiqing The reference picture is as follows:

I was really shocked when I saw Xu Tianran telling the Holy Spirit Cult about the talents of the protagonist's brother and sister, and then Ye Xishui went to catch the protagonist. If he is really captured, the Sun and Moon Royal Family will lose two Extreme Douluo in the future, and the Holy Spirit Sect will have two more Extreme Douluo. How else could Xu Tianran fight against the Holy Spirit Cult? Digging your own grave?

What the hell is the difference between a second-level man with a level 9 soul guide and a child with a nuclear weapon launcher? And based on Shrek's lineage of bullying, if I'm strong, I'll get you, if you're weak, you'll get beaten. Why don't you rob this?

Ye Xishui, the biggest failure, the writing is very interesting and very enjoyable, but Ye Xishui is like a sword of Damocles hanging above my head. Every time I am curious about the next plot and feel so good, this piece of shit comes out. You must show up to disgust me, tell me that the protagonist is just a vegetable, just a bug, and Ye Xishui can crush it to death at will. It makes me so sick. I really want to give you five points, but you make me feel like I'm holding back for a long time. I'm so speechless, buddy 😎

I hope the female clone Lily is normal and the male clone is normal

So invincible, okay? This year's readers are really invincible, okay. I must give it a five-star review, not only for the author, but also for the good readers of this generation.

However, the details of the writing are not well controlled, such as Dai Hao's cultivation, the relationship between Xu Jiawei and Dai Hao, Meng Hongchen's cultivation, etc. There are also many typos. The biggest problem is that Tang San was ignored. Huo Yuhao went to Sun and Moon, completely avoiding Tang Sect Shrek, and did not contact Wang Donger, but Tang San didn't react at all? It's been a hundred chapters, and there's no trace of Tang San.

As I said yesterday, the author's writing was actually pretty good, but seeing all the characters related to the protagonist running towards Shrek gave me a bit of a myocardial infarction.