Lovely Wife is Like a Cloud

The first woman in the protagonist actually had a pretty boy, and even painted a nude painting and hung it on the wall for people to admire. It was really shocking. I dared to write this to the author. I give you five stars. It was you who let me know that I am not immune to all poisons, so you are welcome!

Chapters always fail to connect with the plot and many are skipped. Could it be that the author copied it from somewhere else? Bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review

I've always only read women's books. Recently, I started reading men's books, and I discovered that women's books advocate a life-long relationship between two people. There is no sand in my eyes. As for male writers, they wish they could capture all the beauties in the world. This is the difference between what men and women pursue. It seems that men are born with a love of love. The life-long pairing that a woman pursues is destined to be a fairy tale only found in books. 😘

What happened to Master Li in the end? Is it the heroine?

You can understand it this way, Pigfoot has a lovely wife named Ruyun. . . . .

The chapter is broken and the previous chapter cannot be linked to the next chapter.

From the beginning, each chapter was disconnected in the middle, which was inexplicable. But when I looked elsewhere, I didn't know how much was missing in the middle.

The author has repeatedly mentioned this book in his works, and I thought it was his most successful work. Unfortunately, the plot is blunt, the emotions are abrupt, and it is suspected of insulting the IQ of the old bookworm. Stallion stories and harem stories are the easiest to write, but they are the most difficult to write well because they involve too many emotional lines and are difficult to handle. The direction of the story is also difficult to control. Unless it is an H-story, it is not easy to deal with it while taking into account the emotional line and rationalizing the plot. Perhaps when the author wrote "The Prodigal Son" with a female protagonist, he realized that he could not control multiple emotional lines. All in all, just read it for beginners, and don't read it for old bookworms if you really don't have any books to read.

I see that there are many missing items and no connection between them. What kind of attitude do you have when writing a book?

The best servant is the number one in the servant world