
I Can Enjoy the Coolness with My Dad on My Back
About This Novel
Qianhong Edith, the little princess of Lunt Star, was accidentally involved in the chaos of time and space at her fourth birthday party, and she began her journey through time and space. Every time she goes to another world, a handsome guy will pop up, rushing to be her father and pampering her endlessly. Zombie dad: My daughter wants a crystal core? Dad will give you the Crystal Core Mountain! Emperor's father: Anyone who dares to bully my precious princess will be killed without mercy! Chef Dad: My daughter wants to eat delicious food? Dad will hire ten super chefs for you, all of different nationalities and races! Superstar Dad: My daughter is unhappy? Dad will perform the splits for you and even live stream it! Star Wars Dad: My daughter wants to wear a mecha to play? The chief mecha master comes to your door to make a tailor-made service! ... With her back against her father to enjoy the cool air, the little loli walks sideways all day long. However, beside every father, there is a very possessive little brother. Little brother: Go away, don't steal daddy from me! Boss dads: Stand aside, you brat! Don't smoke my sweet little girl!
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Official(16)Scraped 23d ago
Is there an emotional line to this? Actually, it doesn't matter to me whether it's there or not. Looking at the introduction, it seems like there isn't one.
I want to ask if there is a male protagonist?
reminder
The corners of the mouth rose crazily at a 45-degree angle! Oops, it starts from the left ventricle. Fresh arterial blood flows from The left ventricle is squeezed out through the systemic artery, and the exchange of oxygen and carbon dioxide is completed through the tissues and tissues throughout the body. The arterial blood becomes venous blood, returns to the right atrium through the inferior vena cava, then enters the right atrium, enters the circulation into the lungs through the pulmonary artery, converts the venous blood into arterial blood, then enters the left atrium through the pulmonary vein, and finally enters the left ventricle. The blood is then ejected from the right ventricle through the lungs The arteries flow to the pulmonary capillaries, where they exchange gas with the alveolar air, absorb oxygen and expel carbon dioxide, and the venous blood becomes arterial blood; then it flows back to the left atrium through the pulmonary veins. The author is great. Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it touches the readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are fluent and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This article shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said that every word is precious and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. How about... I'll add a few more chapters (take advantage of the lack of people in the building)
Come on!
The subject matter is very novel, please come on and grow together.
Is there a male protagonist?
What time does the author update every day? How many words do you say each time?
No one but me first!
I was attracted by the introduction~ I am more obsessed with this kind of writing recently. I like this one very much~ Although there are very few updates at the moment, and it's a bit scary... Maybe it's because of the shadow left by watching Resident Evil, and I'm afraid of zombies and the like. However, I actually finished watching the first episode "Dad, Dad is a Zombie" I'm trembling, I need some help from the author to get better!
About the plot
Because your introduction is well written. It is very attractive. The main text at the beginning is a relatively long paragraph and it is not similar to the introduction, so it is easy to read it. I didn't say that what you wrote in the previous paragraph is meaningless, but really when we read the article, we all feel that it is different from the introduction, and there is such a long paragraph, so it is easy to abandon the article. If you don't write in the previous paragraph, you can add some hidden lines about the zombie dad to arouse the reader's interest. I really think this subject matter is very good. I also hope he can be better. Come on! Big
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Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 23d ago
Is there an emotional line to this? Actually, it doesn't matter to me whether it's there or not. Looking at the introduction, it seems like there isn't one.
I want to ask if there is a male protagonist?
reminder
The corners of the mouth rose crazily at a 45-degree angle! Oops, it starts from the left ventricle. Fresh arterial blood flows from The left ventricle is squeezed out through the systemic artery, and the exchange of oxygen and carbon dioxide is completed through the tissues and tissues throughout the body. The arterial blood becomes venous blood, returns to the right atrium through the inferior vena cava, then enters the right atrium, enters the circulation into the lungs through the pulmonary artery, converts the venous blood into arterial blood, then enters the left atrium through the pulmonary vein, and finally enters the left ventricle. The blood is then ejected from the right ventricle through the lungs The arteries flow to the pulmonary capillaries, where they exchange gas with the alveolar air, absorb oxygen and expel carbon dioxide, and the venous blood becomes arterial blood; then it flows back to the left atrium through the pulmonary veins. The author is great. Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it touches the readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are fluent and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This article shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said that every word is precious and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. How about... I'll add a few more chapters (take advantage of the lack of people in the building)
Come on!
The subject matter is very novel, please come on and grow together.
Is there a male protagonist?
What time does the author update every day? How many words do you say each time?
No one but me first!
I was attracted by the introduction~ I am more obsessed with this kind of writing recently. I like this one very much~ Although there are very few updates at the moment, and it's a bit scary... Maybe it's because of the shadow left by watching Resident Evil, and I'm afraid of zombies and the like. However, I actually finished watching the first episode "Dad, Dad is a Zombie" I'm trembling, I need some help from the author to get better!
About the plot
Because your introduction is well written. It is very attractive. The main text at the beginning is a relatively long paragraph and it is not similar to the introduction, so it is easy to read it. I didn't say that what you wrote in the previous paragraph is meaningless, but really when we read the article, we all feel that it is different from the introduction, and there is such a long paragraph, so it is easy to abandon the article. If you don't write in the previous paragraph, you can add some hidden lines about the zombie dad to arouse the reader's interest. I really think this subject matter is very good. I also hope he can be better. Come on! Big










