Xiaochou Pawn Shop
by Written Ink
About This Novel
There is a strange pawn shop and a strange boss at the corner of a remote street. Here, lost love is pawned, and what is redeemed is love. Here, you can realize the dialogue between yin and yang by pawning your thoughts for the deceased. Here, the confusion about the future is pawned, and what is returned is the prophet's future. ... However, when they came here, they were all teased and played pranks by the same chuunibyou patient wearing a hooded robe and a white smiling mask. They didn't know who this chuunibyou patient was, but they hated him when he was mentioned. This guy was more annoying than a nightmare! "Hey, don't you know it won't work if you chip off the Sansheng Stone with your name on it?" The Great Sage shouted, holding Zixia's hand. "But I can't move such a big piece..." "!!!"
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Official(4)Scraped 11d ago
Thanks to the starting point of the universe for the tip
Thanks to the starting point of the universe for the reward, thank you, thank you very much
Advice to authors.
The author writes very well, but I suggest you insert more stories about this person's son. It's just about psychological feelings, because the way you write it should be in the form of a diary, right? It turns out that it is written like reading a diary. What you feel when you write this now is that, uh, the protagonist is a father, but there is no feeling like writing a diary at all. Do you know that you lack that feeling?
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Expectations and opinions about the next book
The author writes well, but the beginning of the dream is too clear. I personally think that if you want better results, you should leave space for readers to discover, so that the discoveries that can be discovered and the ones that cannot be discovered will also have a sense of surprise. At the beginning of the second story, when your character does not realize that this is a dream, your readers will also have a feeling of secret joy, a sense of superiority to the character in the game, and a sense of superiority to me outside the game.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 11d ago
Thanks to the starting point of the universe for the tip
Thanks to the starting point of the universe for the reward, thank you, thank you very much
Advice to authors.
The author writes very well, but I suggest you insert more stories about this person's son. It's just about psychological feelings, because the way you write it should be in the form of a diary, right? It turns out that it is written like reading a diary. What you feel when you write this now is that, uh, the protagonist is a father, but there is no feeling like writing a diary at all. Do you know that you lack that feeling?
Good classic books worth reading Classic good books
Expectations and opinions about the next book
The author writes well, but the beginning of the dream is too clear. I personally think that if you want better results, you should leave space for readers to discover, so that the discoveries that can be discovered and the ones that cannot be discovered will also have a sense of surprise. At the beginning of the second story, when your character does not realize that this is a dream, your readers will also have a feeling of secret joy, a sense of superiority to the character in the game, and a sense of superiority to me outside the game.
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