
Sky Forged Sword
by Going Down The Mountain On The Ninth Day Of The Lunar New Year
About This Novel
They were born in the flames of war; They grow up in battle; They forge swords above the sky; They defend against enemies thousands of miles away; They are driving the enemy within easy reach!
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Official(1)Scraped 2d ago
There are three golden chapters, but your selling point is not enough, and some of them are dull and boring. After reading a few, I found that there were not enough hot topics, not enough plot, and not enough sales, so I had to change it. For example, in the first chapter, I could crash into a primeval forest, a wild beast, a secret realm, and the power would revive. I would have the same fall, and I would also know each other and find out that I am my ex-girlfriend. I look down on the protagonist, and then get slapped in the face by the protagonist. I want to be strong but then I suppress it. It's so interconnected, but yours is not bad, so go for it!
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Official(1)Scraped 2d ago
There are three golden chapters, but your selling point is not enough, and some of them are dull and boring. After reading a few, I found that there were not enough hot topics, not enough plot, and not enough sales, so I had to change it. For example, in the first chapter, I could crash into a primeval forest, a wild beast, a secret realm, and the power would revive. I would have the same fall, and I would also know each other and find out that I am my ex-girlfriend. I look down on the protagonist, and then get slapped in the face by the protagonist. I want to be strong but then I suppress it. It's so interconnected, but yours is not bad, so go for it!









