The Martial Arts and Immortality of the Three Kingdoms

The book is quite interesting. I like reading it as a girl. Depending on the situation, there are now two female protagonists. I hope the author can expand the career of the male protagonist. Multiple female protagonists are also ok. They all have to be excellent. I hope the author's male protagonist is a person with a bottom line. No. It's the kind of story where you can't walk when you see a beautiful woman. All women are included in the harem. Also, the author's description of the male protagonist when he met the female head of the Zhen family was a bit insulting to the male protagonist. The male protagonist wants to conquer the world and become an immortal. Don't write him in a too vulgar way. , There is no bottom line to be interested in a woman who has given birth to several children and has been married. The appearance of three women with some plots can make the male protagonist look at her with admiration. Those two girls can become female protagonists. If the female head of the Zhen family is male, If the protagonist has no bottom line and accepts it, then there is no need to read this book again. I hope the author will never write the male protagonist as the kind of man who has no bottom line. The minimum bottom line for his heroine should be a clean and innocent woman. The heroine is not expensive.

In fact, the subject matter of this book is quite good, but it is a pity that there is a problem with your writing method. If you are writing about martial arts cultivation, it would be better if the protagonist is a little mentally retarded. The key is history, and the protagonist is a bit of an afterthought when it comes to major events. Then how he can fight for hegemony depends on such a restrictive system. Don't underestimate the ancients. To this day, we still can't figure out some things about the ancients. I said this after seeing the protagonist going to Yingchuan Academy and the conversation on the way. As a protagonist who wants to fight for hegemony, you don't even have a long-term vision. You can't convince people like Guo Jia just by relying on the modern theories you plagiarized. At least when you say When making these theories, you must be prepared to deal with the situation of fighting with the aristocratic family, at least until you unify. As long as you are not unified, even if you are the number one prince in the world, the aristocratic family will still find ways to kill you, just like Wang Mang.

A note to readers and friends (a bit long-winded) Thank you to all my friends who came across this book, it is my honor! The new book "Three Kingdoms: Martial Arts and Immortality" has been successfully uploaded, and the old book is about to be completed. The old book is my first time writing it, and I am writing it part-time, so it has many shortcomings, and I am aware of this. I won't say how good this book is, but I will definitely try my best to write it. I will apply all the experiences in the first book to it, and I will definitely work hard to write a work worthy of everyone. In addition, you can rest assured that I have never been too careful when writing books. Even if the results of my first book were not very good, I still relied on QQ Reading to support it. But I promised readers that I would finish it, so I persisted even if it collapsed later. Therefore, this book can also promise readers that it will be finished no matter what, even if the results are not good, it will have a beginning and an end! Of course, from my perspective, this book is better than the first one. I just don't know if you like this type of book, but I will write it well whether you like it or not! In the early stage of the update, it should be updated three times a day. If it is lucky enough to be released, it should be increased to five updates a day. If there are special circumstances, we will notify you in advance. Also, thank you to everyone who read this! Thank you even more to my friends who read so many wasteful words! Thank you to my friends who have accompanied me along the way! Thank you all! ! !

Important Note 😭😭😭First let me cry for a moment Many friends always misunderstand the Zhang Sanfeng section when they read the first chapter. It says that Zhang Sanfeng may be the ancestor who traveled through the soul in later generations, not the ancestor of Zhang Yi who died during the Eastern Han Dynasty. Alas, the baby is feeling bitter [fn=12][fn=12][fn=12] Let me explain it specifically. Maybe my explanation was unclear and made you misunderstood. I would like to apologize in advance🙏

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In the first 50 chapters, it is written that Zhang Jiao is dead. The evidence: the Yellow Turban Army is already a remnant! Later, it was said that Liu, Guan, and Zhang were still white! This timeline is too messy! No logic, no order, Since he is a time traveler, what about his modern character? Could it be that as soon as I traveled through time, even the habits I had in modern times were gone? This is called imprecision! Pig's Feet knew that the Three Kingdoms era was too dangerous, but he still acted with a high profile. Even if he had a noble family as his backer, he had to figure it out slowly and first improve his own force to protect himself! There are always conflicts of interest among millions of people! Who handled it? You don't even have enough manpower, right? Dear author, I really don't know how to evaluate your work! Well! A good subject, but not well written! I hope that the author can re-examine his work, revise the places that are not logical, and use his imagination to be logical! To put it in a more neutral way, it is "cause and effect": set a goal, give clues, implement it, meet the enemy, discover the conspiracy, recruit bodyguards, improve strength...

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Which dynasty did Zhang Sanfeng belong to? In which dynasty did the Three Kingdoms exist?

I retreated from the first chapter. Personally, I don't like the Holy Mary novel!