
My Home is the Earth
by The Caterpillar Wants To Cross The River
About This Novel
I re-wrote it, but I'm not very satisfied with it, it's a bit messy! Maybe it can be saved
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Official(7)Scraped 24d ago
I read Chapter 5 and don't know what to write about.
It's just a name, don't worry too much about it!
What a coincidence. Who is assassinating the protagonist?
Isn't it that guy named Wang? His wife died right now. He was really poisonous.
There won't be only one person in the world! Thousands of ordinary talents make up the world. We are all heroes!
Some people don't like the protagonist's nickname. I can correct it. I hope you will comment more. Thank you.
New books, new people. Give me a good review first!
After reading two chapters, the author's paragraphs are too long! When writing a novel, you usually have to read the novel, so each paragraph doesn't need to be too long! It's full of words and it's a bit confusing to read. Now that I have written it, no matter how I thought about it - whatever the reason! Always hope for better grades. But no matter what, be sure to change the paragraph first! Otherwise it's a waste of time. Come on......
I wrote it in software but I don't know how to separate it? Next chapter, 3000 words, thank you
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Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 24d ago
I read Chapter 5 and don't know what to write about.
It's just a name, don't worry too much about it!
What a coincidence. Who is assassinating the protagonist?
Isn't it that guy named Wang? His wife died right now. He was really poisonous.
There won't be only one person in the world! Thousands of ordinary talents make up the world. We are all heroes!
Some people don't like the protagonist's nickname. I can correct it. I hope you will comment more. Thank you.
New books, new people. Give me a good review first!
After reading two chapters, the author's paragraphs are too long! When writing a novel, you usually have to read the novel, so each paragraph doesn't need to be too long! It's full of words and it's a bit confusing to read. Now that I have written it, no matter how I thought about it - whatever the reason! Always hope for better grades. But no matter what, be sure to change the paragraph first! Otherwise it's a waste of time. Come on......
I wrote it in software but I don't know how to separate it? Next chapter, 3000 words, thank you









