Dimensional Invasion of Reality

The system is too messy, the Holy level is equivalent to the Earth Immortal, followed by the Celestial Immortal, Mysterious Immortal, Golden Immortal, and Daluo. Your ninth level is perfect and you are the most powerful one. The Cave Heaven level is equivalent to the Holy level and the Earth Immortal. After that, the inscriptions, formations, and venerables are included. Divine Fire is equivalent to Daluo, followed by True God, Heavenly God, Dunyi, Supreme, and higher up are True Immortal, Immortal King (ordinary, giant, supreme), Quasi-Immortal Emperor, Immortal Emperor, a perfect saint cannot even compare with a True Immortal. There are some realms in between that I have forgotten, otherwise there are more. Why are the saints perfecting themselves into ants? Retarded!

I feel like I can write about the world passage in Kuiba. The opening of vein gates in Kuiba should be regarded as a secret method of body training. The more vein gates are opened, the greater the increase in strength. If all the vein gates are opened, the pulse beast can be summoned, and it feels like opening the vein gates is very pretentious. Please support the Chinese comic. Thank you for the author. Your book is a genre that I like very much.

The first poisonous point is about my sister. (What does PS want my sister to do?) The second poisonous point is that it is long-winded. I can explain it clearly in one or two sentences, but if I have to talk a lot, it will make people incomprehensible. The third poisonous point is that there is no center, you have no idea what you want to express, it is completely like talking to yourself.

The framework is very good, the concept is exquisite, but it is too polished. The system is clear and energetic. The main line should be determined. The starting points are all Japanese, and the two dimensions are all done, such as One Piece, Avengers, Qin Shimingyue, etc., Stroke, Sunwind, etc. Beauty style, Korean style, supernatural powers, internal power, cultivation of immortals, magic, etc. Are all mixed together. Now that they are all done, let's make it bigger, or use the game route, or the way of crossing the gate, cross-border, or apocalyptic invasion. I think it will be better! A little suggestion! ᶘ ͡°ᴥ͡°ᶅ

It starts with a domineering and domineering attitude, but others don't even understand it. It's been decades since the alien space was opened. How is it possible that the country has only understood it a little bit? And the timeline is wrong. Every time the protagonist enters, the plot has just begun. If you say that the plot has just begun when the protagonist first enters, then where will the influence of the people who entered in the previous decades be affected?

Countries living on the same planet are all in competition! You have reduced the governments of other countries to nothing, but how powerful can the Dragon Kingdom, which has been in long-term competition with these countries, be! The opponent's performance is strong (meaning you are competing with the strong); the opponent's performance is weak (meaning you are competing with the weak)!

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It's quite poisonous. The timeline cannot be accepted. The protagonist has already started to integrate into the world thirty years before. (Then the pirate time ratio is 2 months to a year, and the Bleach is 2 months to 2 years +) The real time of the previous thirty years has disappeared, and the plot is just before the protagonist enters. Oh my God, the timeline has collapsed. What kind of mentality does Fudo's author have to write such a high timeline ratio? The plot should have ended early, and then the tone of voice is also drunk, ohhh, it's very scary.

How should I put it? Those missiles and rockets, those weapons are effective after all, especially those that can hit half the world. The high-end combat power can be ignored. The navy can still clean up the trash fish. The battle depends on the number of people.

1: The ideas, worldview, and storytelling of this book are pretty good. 2: The overall framework is also considered to be tenable. Disadvantages: 1. The plot jumps too much. The first part is fine, but the second part of the story is difficult to connect. 2: The characterization is not vivid, and it is difficult to remember other people except the protagonist. 3: There are too many descriptions of the two-dimensional story, and the protagonist is a bit weakened.