My Beloved Concubine is the Sweetest in the World
by The Young Master Is Lovesick
About This Novel
She is China's mysterious ace thief, and he is the unparalleled charming and bloodthirsty God of War in Tianwu Continent. Once in time, a villain meets a high-level villain. It is rumored that the God of War Ye Jiuyou is cold and ruthless, not close to women, just like the immortal who was banished on that day, but who can tell her who is this big pervert in front of her?
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Official(1482)Scraped 18d ago
A slightly sloppy article, but somehow it's attractive, isn't it?
This book can be said to be sloppy, but it is not unattractive at all. It has a comfortable feeling. I wish the book will get better and better.
Love you, little Sisi (but my wife will be jealous)
So what, my literary talent is not good, don't criticize me 😂 The night moon and the morning glow cherish the soft beauty The nine layers of rich brocade are all elegant and unrestrained Deep and confused mood Love is like a complex, willing to sink The past year is full of lovesickness The worry-free and warm autumn of Huaji
Little fairies look over
Recommend my new book, Genius Cute Baby: The Evil King Pampers His Little Doctor Concubine There are also several completed articles of mine, they are all very enjoyable, you can check them out.
too rough
The structure of the story is okay, and the plot is not draggy, but the author's writing is too rough, and many plot points pop up inexplicably. For example, the heroine suddenly becomes angry. Shouldn't you explain why there is a fire element? Also, the relationship between the male and female protagonists suddenly changes too suddenly. The task of Gongzi Ji is also inexplicable. After it came out, there was no background introduction and purpose. I only said a few words in the two previous meetings with the heroine and there was no psychological activity. Then I jumped out and competed with the male protagonist for the heroine. It still needs improvement. Please check it a few times before publishing. All the necessary foreshadowing and details must be written, otherwise it will be inexplicable.
It's not easy. It took me three months to finally finish it. The fate between Ye Jiuyou and Su Hua moved them. From being killed a thousand years ago to being reincarnated a thousand years later and being cursed, they were still able to break the curse and be together. It was the so-called love of a thousand years, and they went through thousands of hardships to go back and avenge the revenge of a thousand years ago. The heroine has grown from a weakling to the peak of a warrior. The most satisfying thing is to go to every place and torture the scum and white lotus. Bai Wennian's love for Su Hua is not love, but possession. If you love someone who doesn't love you, you want her to be happy instead of doing everything you can to make her sad and unhappy. The female scumbags inside always think that they are noble and beautiful, but in fact they are nothing but what they think. Su Hua Ye Jiuyou The Demon Emperor's Doting Wife: My beloved concubine, I was wrong
Can't open
Why can't it be opened? What's going on? ? ? ? ?
Why does the male protagonist Mao think about ooxx every day, unless the two are separated, otherwise the female protagonist will not come to visit her aunt every day without interruption?
If you are pregnant, you should not restrain your marital life at all. Even if the baby goes against the will of heaven, this common sense issue cannot be written carelessly. The male and female protagonists also like SM, feather dusters... So evil
Didn't we say at the beginning that the ring was left by the heroine's dead parents? Why did a biological father appear later?
Ahem, I take back what I said yesterday. The first part was rough and too fast. The second part was OK. Yesterday I only read about 50 chapters. I read some more today and reached 200 chapters. It was OK. Some book friends, please don't jump to conclusions after reading the previous part. You may gain something by looking at the later part.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(1482)Scraped 18d ago
A slightly sloppy article, but somehow it's attractive, isn't it?
This book can be said to be sloppy, but it is not unattractive at all. It has a comfortable feeling. I wish the book will get better and better.
Love you, little Sisi (but my wife will be jealous)
So what, my literary talent is not good, don't criticize me 😂 The night moon and the morning glow cherish the soft beauty The nine layers of rich brocade are all elegant and unrestrained Deep and confused mood Love is like a complex, willing to sink The past year is full of lovesickness The worry-free and warm autumn of Huaji
Little fairies look over
Recommend my new book, Genius Cute Baby: The Evil King Pampers His Little Doctor Concubine There are also several completed articles of mine, they are all very enjoyable, you can check them out.
too rough
The structure of the story is okay, and the plot is not draggy, but the author's writing is too rough, and many plot points pop up inexplicably. For example, the heroine suddenly becomes angry. Shouldn't you explain why there is a fire element? Also, the relationship between the male and female protagonists suddenly changes too suddenly. The task of Gongzi Ji is also inexplicable. After it came out, there was no background introduction and purpose. I only said a few words in the two previous meetings with the heroine and there was no psychological activity. Then I jumped out and competed with the male protagonist for the heroine. It still needs improvement. Please check it a few times before publishing. All the necessary foreshadowing and details must be written, otherwise it will be inexplicable.
It's not easy. It took me three months to finally finish it. The fate between Ye Jiuyou and Su Hua moved them. From being killed a thousand years ago to being reincarnated a thousand years later and being cursed, they were still able to break the curse and be together. It was the so-called love of a thousand years, and they went through thousands of hardships to go back and avenge the revenge of a thousand years ago. The heroine has grown from a weakling to the peak of a warrior. The most satisfying thing is to go to every place and torture the scum and white lotus. Bai Wennian's love for Su Hua is not love, but possession. If you love someone who doesn't love you, you want her to be happy instead of doing everything you can to make her sad and unhappy. The female scumbags inside always think that they are noble and beautiful, but in fact they are nothing but what they think. Su Hua Ye Jiuyou The Demon Emperor's Doting Wife: My beloved concubine, I was wrong
Can't open
Why can't it be opened? What's going on? ? ? ? ?
Why does the male protagonist Mao think about ooxx every day, unless the two are separated, otherwise the female protagonist will not come to visit her aunt every day without interruption?
If you are pregnant, you should not restrain your marital life at all. Even if the baby goes against the will of heaven, this common sense issue cannot be written carelessly. The male and female protagonists also like SM, feather dusters... So evil
Didn't we say at the beginning that the ring was left by the heroine's dead parents? Why did a biological father appear later?
Ahem, I take back what I said yesterday. The first part was rough and too fast. The second part was OK. Yesterday I only read about 50 chapters. I read some more today and reached 200 chapters. It was OK. Some book friends, please don't jump to conclusions after reading the previous part. You may gain something by looking at the later part.
