
I Became a Taoist Couple with My Old Enemy
About This Novel
A hundred years ago, Liu Shaohua, a prodigy in the world of immortality, fell into a state of immortality and became a demon that everyone wanted to kill. When he was besieged by the entire world of immortality, his enemy Ye Fengran stabbed him through the heart with a sword, and he died tragically on Fengduya. One hundred years later, Liu Shaohua was reborn and vowed to kill his mortal enemy and disrupt the entire world of immortality. However, he accidentally became the apprentice of his mortal enemy Ye Fengran. Liu Shaohua, who originally vowed to kill his mortal enemy, turned out to be: He glances at his arch-rival every day: "Master, you look so good!" Peeping at my rival taking a shower every day: "Master, your skin is so white!" Every day he sneaks into his rival's bed: "I really want to practice dual cultivation with Master!"
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Official(78)Scraped 4d ago
I would like to send my favorite CPs, Brother Zhan and Brother Yibo, please collect them and vote for them, thank you! In fact, when I started this article, I originally wanted to write it as a Danmei novel, but considering various reasons, I gave up in the end...
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The title is eaten by me♥
I was attracted by the title, and then I saw the big article. I really love Liao. ♥ The writing style is delicate, the writing is smooth, and the character creation is also very good. The heroine is sometimes cute, sometimes rebellious, playful and a little bit sharp-tongued The male protagonist dotes on the female protagonist. He is a loyal dog√ and he is his only pet√ --------♥Cute dividing line♥-------- The final confession is huge(.'▽'.)♡ The galaxy is hot, you are the ideal in the world. The bright moon is cool, you are the dawn of the world. The sea of people is indifferent, but you are the blazing heat in the world. My eyes are full of stars, you are the breeze and the full moon. All things go up and down, you are the way home from this world. All living beings are mediocre, but you are the starlight in the world. The world is impermanent, but you are the beauty of the world. The trees are full of prosperity, you are where my heart desires. The bright moon is dim, you are the last light. The mountain flowers are blooming, you are the dawn breeze last night The world is bitter and salty, but you are sweet yet sugary. The vast Milky Way, you are the Chinese star and autumn moon. (I found the above from Baidu, but I admit that the author is absolutely true) Please give me more five-star reviews for such a beautiful book, okay ♥ I wish you a great book to become a god, come on! ♡ʚ♡ɞ(ू• ̮ •ू❁)(This is my first time writing a book review, please don't mind if it's not good)
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Fried chicken looks good
Great, the writing style is very special and the plot follows very well. Please support me and keep updating.
Come on!
It's rare to see this type of article, but it's really nice! Especially the kind of unbearable pampering that the male protagonist shows towards the female protagonist, it's super sweet!
Why do I feel like I'm watching Chen Qingling?
Very good, worth watching
Urgent update, urgent update!
It's very beautiful. Can you please hurry up? I can't get enough of it!
Welcome back!
I'm very happy to be back. Besides, I've been thinking about it for a long time. Maybe the following words are a bit hurtful, but I still want to say them out. I would like to give you some suggestions: 1⃣The writing style is really good, especially the description of the protagonist's appearance is very thoughtful, but the psychological description needs to be strengthened. 2⃣About the number of words in a paragraph: The maximum number of words in a paragraph is 200. Too many words will make it boring to readers. Regarding the word count issue (I heard this from Master Yunqi. Because I originally wanted to write a book, but gave up because of my studies and resources. 3⃣The language and background of the novel are a bit boring to read. The writing is good but... I always feel like something is missing. 4⃣I know you are also a fan of Mo Xiang. Maybe the story of the work is a bit like Mo Xiang's magic path. It's probably not just me, but other young readers think so too. But if the styles are too similar and the text is not interesting enough, it will form a sharp contrast, you understand? ----------------------------Uh... Anyway, if you don't have diamonds, you can't do the porcelain work. I don't want you to change the outline of the novel or start a new one. After all, there are still people who like to read this book. They also have a lot of expectations for this book, and they don't want it to end halfway. It would be nice if the style of the novel could be slightly changed. If the language is too formal, it will always feel like I am reading a classic novel. Although the writing is good, the language is not interesting enough. Since most novels are read by students, it is not enough if the writing is good. I have summarized the characteristics of some recent popular novels, hoping to help you. 1. The language is humorous (some are mixed with some Internet terms, which may be more interesting) 2. The novel has a unique story background (most of the popular novels on the market now are about time-traveling, falling in love with a yandere, system flow, fast time-traveling flow, or unbridled, fresh, and normal love story (for example, the one I saw before, "I Pretend I'm Not Familiar with the Male God Every Day"), although it's not good to mention other people's books in your book, but I still want to say it ( You can read novels by other great authors) I definitely don't mean to ridicule this work, I just want your writing style to attract more and more people [Strong Desire to Survive. Jpg] Finally, I want to say that I actually like this book very much. After all, the writing style is relatively good. It is very useful for me as a student to write essays. In the past two years, I have started reading novels, and my writing style has also improved a lot. I'm giving you these opinions. It's not that I don't like this novel, but that I hope this novel can continue to be strengthened and include more young readers. Well... Come on! Chongya~٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و
Quite attractive
Judging by the title, this is my favorite dish
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Official(78)Scraped 4d ago
I would like to send my favorite CPs, Brother Zhan and Brother Yibo, please collect them and vote for them, thank you! In fact, when I started this article, I originally wanted to write it as a Danmei novel, but considering various reasons, I gave up in the end...
This is the check-in building
If you have nothing to do, little cuties, you can come here to check in. Remember to give the author a big five stars! Be active and lively, otherwise the book review area will be too deserted (*^ω^*)
The title is eaten by me♥
I was attracted by the title, and then I saw the big article. I really love Liao. ♥ The writing style is delicate, the writing is smooth, and the character creation is also very good. The heroine is sometimes cute, sometimes rebellious, playful and a little bit sharp-tongued The male protagonist dotes on the female protagonist. He is a loyal dog√ and he is his only pet√ --------♥Cute dividing line♥-------- The final confession is huge(.'▽'.)♡ The galaxy is hot, you are the ideal in the world. The bright moon is cool, you are the dawn of the world. The sea of people is indifferent, but you are the blazing heat in the world. My eyes are full of stars, you are the breeze and the full moon. All things go up and down, you are the way home from this world. All living beings are mediocre, but you are the starlight in the world. The world is impermanent, but you are the beauty of the world. The trees are full of prosperity, you are where my heart desires. The bright moon is dim, you are the last light. The mountain flowers are blooming, you are the dawn breeze last night The world is bitter and salty, but you are sweet yet sugary. The vast Milky Way, you are the Chinese star and autumn moon. (I found the above from Baidu, but I admit that the author is absolutely true) Please give me more five-star reviews for such a beautiful book, okay ♥ I wish you a great book to become a god, come on! ♡ʚ♡ɞ(ू• ̮ •ू❁)(This is my first time writing a book review, please don't mind if it's not good)
(σ゚∀゚)σ⁶⁶⁶⁶⁶⁶⁶⁶⁶⁶
✨✨✨✨✨✨✨😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Fried chicken looks good
Great, the writing style is very special and the plot follows very well. Please support me and keep updating.
Come on!
It's rare to see this type of article, but it's really nice! Especially the kind of unbearable pampering that the male protagonist shows towards the female protagonist, it's super sweet!
Why do I feel like I'm watching Chen Qingling?
Very good, worth watching
Urgent update, urgent update!
It's very beautiful. Can you please hurry up? I can't get enough of it!
Welcome back!
I'm very happy to be back. Besides, I've been thinking about it for a long time. Maybe the following words are a bit hurtful, but I still want to say them out. I would like to give you some suggestions: 1⃣The writing style is really good, especially the description of the protagonist's appearance is very thoughtful, but the psychological description needs to be strengthened. 2⃣About the number of words in a paragraph: The maximum number of words in a paragraph is 200. Too many words will make it boring to readers. Regarding the word count issue (I heard this from Master Yunqi. Because I originally wanted to write a book, but gave up because of my studies and resources. 3⃣The language and background of the novel are a bit boring to read. The writing is good but... I always feel like something is missing. 4⃣I know you are also a fan of Mo Xiang. Maybe the story of the work is a bit like Mo Xiang's magic path. It's probably not just me, but other young readers think so too. But if the styles are too similar and the text is not interesting enough, it will form a sharp contrast, you understand? ----------------------------Uh... Anyway, if you don't have diamonds, you can't do the porcelain work. I don't want you to change the outline of the novel or start a new one. After all, there are still people who like to read this book. They also have a lot of expectations for this book, and they don't want it to end halfway. It would be nice if the style of the novel could be slightly changed. If the language is too formal, it will always feel like I am reading a classic novel. Although the writing is good, the language is not interesting enough. Since most novels are read by students, it is not enough if the writing is good. I have summarized the characteristics of some recent popular novels, hoping to help you. 1. The language is humorous (some are mixed with some Internet terms, which may be more interesting) 2. The novel has a unique story background (most of the popular novels on the market now are about time-traveling, falling in love with a yandere, system flow, fast time-traveling flow, or unbridled, fresh, and normal love story (for example, the one I saw before, "I Pretend I'm Not Familiar with the Male God Every Day"), although it's not good to mention other people's books in your book, but I still want to say it ( You can read novels by other great authors) I definitely don't mean to ridicule this work, I just want your writing style to attract more and more people [Strong Desire to Survive. Jpg] Finally, I want to say that I actually like this book very much. After all, the writing style is relatively good. It is very useful for me as a student to write essays. In the past two years, I have started reading novels, and my writing style has also improved a lot. I'm giving you these opinions. It's not that I don't like this novel, but that I hope this novel can continue to be strengthened and include more young readers. Well... Come on! Chongya~٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و
Quite attractive
Judging by the title, this is my favorite dish









