Disposable Sword God
by Double Egg
About This Novel
"Well... This is a little monster. It's very weak. You see, you only need to use an ordinary knife to kill it with a slight pick from bottom to top." The eldest sister wiped away the scarlet splash on her face and continued: "Seriously, you don't have to be so cautious. You're just dealing with a little monster. You don't have to use your full strength every time. I'll give you a knife and give it a try." Bai Yu took the knife and was troubled in his heart: "I don't know how to use a knife. Senior sister doesn't think I'm strong... This monster looks so scary. What should I do? Use a skill. Anyway, it's a one-time skill sent by the system, just... This is it." Lingshan Great Destruction The next second, a jade-colored Buddha phantom appeared in the western sky, and slapped the monster... Little Monster (pointing to Bai Yu): You must be happy! ............ Friends who want to watch can join the group: 543738111. Forget about the red envelopes from the group, my pocket is cleaner than the face of a female celebrity.
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Official(34)Scraped 9d ago
This is a very poisonous thing, Taoist friends should be careful before entering. Brainless article
The Virgin Bitch and the Wisdom Aura are a bit powerful
It's not that the author's writing is not good, the main thing is that this is really a bit uncomfortable😖.
The subject matter is good and the writing is not bad either.
It's just that the plot is too stretched, there is too little preliminary preparation, and the basic world view lacks description, making it confusing and without a sense of immersion. In addition, the plot map is always switching back and forth, giving people the feeling that there is no main line in the game. And it's too suppressed first and then promoted too much. It's better that the protagonist is not exposed. If he is exposed, don't pretend to be disguised. It's not that it was not popular in the last century to abuse the main character. Don't forcefully wrong the protagonist just to show off. You can beat the Holy Mother of Yaochi, but you have to go back to that small sect and be looked down upon by the master. It's really unnecessary. If his master were a powerful person in the immortal world, the protagonist would have to compromise in front of him and reluctantly accept it in order to show off in the future. He is a low-level monk, not even the leader of a low-level sect, and he is not worthy of the humiliation of a cheating protagonist. To put it bluntly, the level of the pretense is too low. In addition, the protagonist cheats too much in the early stage, to the point where even the Holy Land has to give way, which makes the feeling of frustration even stronger and makes it very unpleasant to watch. You have to do it step by step even if you're pretending to be a slap in the face! In order to solve the problem, the main character was too much cheated, and in order to keep up with the protagonist's cheating strength, the plot was too jumpy. Coupled with the way you mixed the basic world view of the book into the plot segment by segment, it makes the plot seem very confusing.
poison
You're really just pretending to be a pig, and you're just acting hard, it's disgusting🤢
I've read more than a dozen chapters, and I'll be poisoned if I continue reading. I don't have enough anti-toxicity.
The author of this book made the protagonist too poisonous
A bit poisonous
A bit poisonous but not too poisonous, haha
The author is short and weak
Water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water.
All very good,
It's just that the causal relationship between the protagonist and Nuwa is a bit big. He and Nuwa have been removed. He was originally free and unrestrained, but later he became the savior and the mastermind behind the scenes.
Give the author some IQ, can the protagonist not be a holy mother bitch, an ant betrays the human race several times in a row?
The protagonist and others act like they don't know what to do. This is a bit too much. The writing is good, but the Virgin bitch ruined the whole article.
The tree wants to be still but the wind doesn't stop
Crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire
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Official(34)Scraped 9d ago
This is a very poisonous thing, Taoist friends should be careful before entering. Brainless article
The Virgin Bitch and the Wisdom Aura are a bit powerful
It's not that the author's writing is not good, the main thing is that this is really a bit uncomfortable😖.
The subject matter is good and the writing is not bad either.
It's just that the plot is too stretched, there is too little preliminary preparation, and the basic world view lacks description, making it confusing and without a sense of immersion. In addition, the plot map is always switching back and forth, giving people the feeling that there is no main line in the game. And it's too suppressed first and then promoted too much. It's better that the protagonist is not exposed. If he is exposed, don't pretend to be disguised. It's not that it was not popular in the last century to abuse the main character. Don't forcefully wrong the protagonist just to show off. You can beat the Holy Mother of Yaochi, but you have to go back to that small sect and be looked down upon by the master. It's really unnecessary. If his master were a powerful person in the immortal world, the protagonist would have to compromise in front of him and reluctantly accept it in order to show off in the future. He is a low-level monk, not even the leader of a low-level sect, and he is not worthy of the humiliation of a cheating protagonist. To put it bluntly, the level of the pretense is too low. In addition, the protagonist cheats too much in the early stage, to the point where even the Holy Land has to give way, which makes the feeling of frustration even stronger and makes it very unpleasant to watch. You have to do it step by step even if you're pretending to be a slap in the face! In order to solve the problem, the main character was too much cheated, and in order to keep up with the protagonist's cheating strength, the plot was too jumpy. Coupled with the way you mixed the basic world view of the book into the plot segment by segment, it makes the plot seem very confusing.
poison
You're really just pretending to be a pig, and you're just acting hard, it's disgusting🤢
I've read more than a dozen chapters, and I'll be poisoned if I continue reading. I don't have enough anti-toxicity.
The author of this book made the protagonist too poisonous
A bit poisonous
A bit poisonous but not too poisonous, haha
The author is short and weak
Water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water.
All very good,
It's just that the causal relationship between the protagonist and Nuwa is a bit big. He and Nuwa have been removed. He was originally free and unrestrained, but later he became the savior and the mastermind behind the scenes.
Give the author some IQ, can the protagonist not be a holy mother bitch, an ant betrays the human race several times in a row?
The protagonist and others act like they don't know what to do. This is a bit too much. The writing is good, but the Virgin bitch ruined the whole article.
The tree wants to be still but the wind doesn't stop
Crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire
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