Lord of the Yellow River

What the hell are you writing? You are so high-profile when you say you are stubborn. You are neither fishy nor fishy. You feel invincible at level 8. God-level rules stipulate that saint-level people cannot take action. But this is a god-level person who wants to kill you. Hehe. Either write that someone is covering you, or don't go to the magic academy and stay at home. After all, there are all the exercises at home. At most, there is no one to teach you. It's a little slower, but it's safe. The main character in your book seeks death, jumps around repeatedly, and still talks about being stubborn. It's incredible.

Since it's about gringos, don't bring Chinese culture into it, and the main character's name "Lan Feng" is obviously a Chinese name, which is really outrageous.

The overall idea is okay. This is the first time I encountered such an idea, but there are some flaws.

The writing is good, the characters are well drawn, and he is proficient in Gou's way. There is no pretentiousness and slap in the face, and there is no system to add some grandpa, but only talent and hard work! The shortcomings are that there are few cool points and few explosive points. Overall, I like it! Come on, come on, come on!

Nothing, just all kinds of rubbish, rubbish is not good, if you don't tell me, who are you to blame?

The protagonist has no emotional intelligence at all. I wonder if he thought he was writing a composition for an elementary school student.

It's raining heavily but I still like your life

It seems okay. You can read it when you are short of books

It seems okay. You can read it when you are short of books

It seems okay. You can read it when you are short of books