After Pampering a Powerful Minister, I Became the Heroine's Nemesis

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There are quite a few details that need to be modified. I think the author needs to clarify the timeline It was said earlier that the heroine came here when she was six or seven years old, and then lived with her family for three years, and she was 13 years old. A year later, she is fifteen or sixteen. How old is she? I can feel that the author wants to write about many things, such as the massacre in Stone Village, Xie Lin's life experience, and the heroine and her family. Before, I still didn't want to be his brother, so the two of them lived separately, and then after searching, they turned into liking each other. The relationship between the male and female protagonists felt illogical. Why do you like it? At the beginning, it was because we slept on the same bed, and then we spent time together day and night. I fell in love with it out of nowhere. It's so simple, it's just farming + house fighting + suspense? How about some delicious food on the way? Now it feels like instant noodles with a lot of ingredients, and I want to make sukiyaki, military hot pot, and snail noodles. I think you can give it a good try as a young author. The writing is still good.

It's even too slow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Urging, urging, urging, urging

I haven't read the main text yet, but after reading the introduction, I think it should be pretty good. I'll save it first and read it later to get better.

I hope the author will work hard and update more

It's quite interesting, but I just want to know if it's a sweet article?

This book has not been saved, and the setting and outline were not written at the beginning, so after the setting was changed later, some previous parts were not corrected. I saw that many babies read it carefully and found some bugs. In addition, sometimes the update was stuck and there were some mistakes in typing quickly, or the wrong names were remembered. I apologize here and ask everyone to be tolerant qaq. I will definitely write an outline for my next book555 In addition, I will explain some setting issues that have been raised frequently. Although the heroine came from a family of killers in her previous life, I also said that her family has declined. Although she has this inheritance, she does not make a living from it. In addition, as a modern person, she still respects human life in her heart, and subconsciously abides by the law, so she will not kill at will. Furthermore, even if she is a killer, she does not rely on physical combat. She has boxing and kicking skills but not much, so she cannot just go hunting in the mountains. Hunting is not easy either. Then regarding the age timeline of the heroine, the heroine traveled through time at the age of four. Lin Jizhong joined the army at the age of nine. Her mother died of illness at the age of eleven and her brother left the house. From then on, she lived until she met Xie Lin at the age of fourteen. When she returned to the Hou Mansion, the New Year had already passed, so she was fifteen years old. The first book was indeed inexperienced, many places were not written well, the writing was not strong enough, and many places were not well described. There are still many deficiencies that need to be improved. However, I will urge myself not to give up, not to finish the work, and to fill in all the holes that need to be filled. Thank you to every reader who has supported me, thank you for your votes, comments and time.

When I read the beginning, I thought it was about a heroine. She looked quite strong. But as I got to the end, I felt that it was unsatisfactory. The heroine was a bit weak. She felt like she was going high and low, and her senses were average.

The ending was a bit rushed, I didn't watch enough

Looks good, I like this type