The End of the World Female Supporting Role Plays with the Ball in a Group Fight
About This Novel
The eldest lady of the Tang family, Tang Qin, took her best friend to catch someone raping her, but she accidentally caught him, leaving her unable to even beat up the scumbag. Out of nowhere, I found myself in a room that was similar to my own. Before I could catch my breath, I realized that the body shape was very similar to hers. It was so cool! Marriage! Got it! Oh my god, Miss Tang, although she had a boyfriend, she never thought about getting married. But when she came here, she not only got married, but she also got pregnant. Fuck, that damn familiar feeling was clearly the apocalyptic novel she read in the car today, and her body was that of the heroine who had not survived two chapters of the apocalyptic novel, and the original partner of the male protagonist who gave the heroine a golden finger. Phew, whoever likes this female protagonist should be her. Miss Tang is a free fighting champion in both worlds. Even if the apocalypse comes, she will not be afraid. Since there is a golden finger, she will get the golden finger on herself first, and she will live or die with the heroine. If the man is too stupid, then he will not want it. Look at Miss Tang, dribbling the ball and having a group fight in the last days!
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Official(97)Scraped 15d ago
Too many typos. There are too many bad sentences, too few words, and too many sentences that are not fluent. I have to guess for a long time while reading a book. I am so tired. Can the author check it a few times after each time he writes? Be careful? Correct these mistakes? Also, could you please correct what everyone has mentioned? It affects the viewing experience too much and makes people not want to continue watching.
It looks great. Come on! ! ! I have read many types of novels, and now I am obsessed with apocalyptic ones! Very well written! Come on! I'll give you the tickets from now on 👍Oli's
The author is great
When will there be an update? I can't get enough of it. I've read several of the books you've written and they're all very good.
I just watched it, was the male protagonist so stupid in his previous life? What does Bai Lianhua believe? So is the male protagonist in this life still her husband? Suddenly disgusted with this husband
Too many typos
Too many typos. There is also a problem with sentence fragmentation. Didn't the author check it after he wrote it? Too many typos really affect the reading experience
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It's a bit confusing... The male protagonist brought the original heroine's belongings with him when he came to see the heroine. He said he picked it up on the way but brought it back without even asking her name? The heroine also knew that the woman who returned from the hero was Ye Qing, so why didn't she tell them? It would be too easy for her to just leave her there. Not to mention the trouble Ye Qing caused for the heroine during this period, let's just say that the heroine knew that this person was her murderer in her previous life and let her go like this? ? ? If it was because Ye Qing still had a role to play, then he shouldn't have released it so carelessly, right? Also, when the heroine met Zhang Shuyuan, why was it Zhang Shuyuan who was the one talking? She also did not tell Zhang Shuyuan about her dream. And what about Mr. Lu's supplies? No more? I haven't seen Mr. Lu say that they still have supplies. Also, you really have a lot of typos and there are a lot of repeated words. I wonder if you are using those repeated words to make up the numbers.
I don't understand that the heroine, knowing she is a bad person, still keeps her at home and lets her be free.
When writing the original heroine, did the author forget that it was an apocalyptic setting? Even in peaceful times, he would not let an enemy stay in his home and grow freely, right?
The author is still young, right?
How old is the author? The writing is so childish and messed up. The heroine is too stupid.
Just a few suggestions
1. The author may have typed it by voice? Some people look confused about punctuation and sentence fragmentation, which affects reading. 2. You can ask people with relevant knowledge in the professional field, or don't write in such detail. 3. Come on
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The plot is okay, but there are too many typos. Wouldn't the author correct it? And what I'm very confused about is why the heroine didn't tell the hero about her pregnancy, and no one around her even mentioned it. It seems that there are quite a lot of crises, but they are all easy to solve and not very exciting.
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Official(97)Scraped 15d ago
Too many typos. There are too many bad sentences, too few words, and too many sentences that are not fluent. I have to guess for a long time while reading a book. I am so tired. Can the author check it a few times after each time he writes? Be careful? Correct these mistakes? Also, could you please correct what everyone has mentioned? It affects the viewing experience too much and makes people not want to continue watching.
It looks great. Come on! ! ! I have read many types of novels, and now I am obsessed with apocalyptic ones! Very well written! Come on! I'll give you the tickets from now on 👍Oli's
The author is great
When will there be an update? I can't get enough of it. I've read several of the books you've written and they're all very good.
I just watched it, was the male protagonist so stupid in his previous life? What does Bai Lianhua believe? So is the male protagonist in this life still her husband? Suddenly disgusted with this husband
Too many typos
Too many typos. There is also a problem with sentence fragmentation. Didn't the author check it after he wrote it? Too many typos really affect the reading experience
. . .
It's a bit confusing... The male protagonist brought the original heroine's belongings with him when he came to see the heroine. He said he picked it up on the way but brought it back without even asking her name? The heroine also knew that the woman who returned from the hero was Ye Qing, so why didn't she tell them? It would be too easy for her to just leave her there. Not to mention the trouble Ye Qing caused for the heroine during this period, let's just say that the heroine knew that this person was her murderer in her previous life and let her go like this? ? ? If it was because Ye Qing still had a role to play, then he shouldn't have released it so carelessly, right? Also, when the heroine met Zhang Shuyuan, why was it Zhang Shuyuan who was the one talking? She also did not tell Zhang Shuyuan about her dream. And what about Mr. Lu's supplies? No more? I haven't seen Mr. Lu say that they still have supplies. Also, you really have a lot of typos and there are a lot of repeated words. I wonder if you are using those repeated words to make up the numbers.
I don't understand that the heroine, knowing she is a bad person, still keeps her at home and lets her be free.
When writing the original heroine, did the author forget that it was an apocalyptic setting? Even in peaceful times, he would not let an enemy stay in his home and grow freely, right?
The author is still young, right?
How old is the author? The writing is so childish and messed up. The heroine is too stupid.
Just a few suggestions
1. The author may have typed it by voice? Some people look confused about punctuation and sentence fragmentation, which affects reading. 2. You can ask people with relevant knowledge in the professional field, or don't write in such detail. 3. Come on
.
The plot is okay, but there are too many typos. Wouldn't the author correct it? And what I'm very confused about is why the heroine didn't tell the hero about her pregnancy, and no one around her even mentioned it. It seems that there are quite a lot of crises, but they are all easy to solve and not very exciting.
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