Substitute for a Wealthy Family: Rebirth of an Ace Boss

There are always some people who don't know how to repay kindness. It was obviously Song Hua's appearance that brought Zhou Lei a child, and Song Hua also had a liver cut operation to cure Song Baoyi, but Zhou Lei took it as a matter of course.

For people who don't like themselves, whatever they do is wrong. Song Hua was just a child at the time. She had no fault at all. She was just not Zhou Lei's biological daughter.

First, the update is too slow. I spent money to read this book, but I can only read one chapter a day and I am completely disinterested. Secondly, there were so many supporting characters in the early stage that I even doubted who the male and female protagonists were. What was this book about? Third, don't make too many typos. Every time you see a place, you have to think about which word the author wants to write. You may say that one or two typos is acceptable, but there are basically several typos in every chapter. I wonder if the author is studying in the nine-year compulsory education? Fourth, I'm thinking that the author may not have cared about the readers at all, and has not read the readers' comments, so the writing becomes more and more boring. Fifth, Ma Jiawen does have many male and female protagonists and then abuses them, but it does not necessarily make the supporting characters too annoying, such as Si Yue, Song Yiyan, etc. I know that it is okay for many people, but for me personally, I think it is too annoying. Every morning after watching it, I was thinking about how to deal with them. I felt full of resentment all day long (maybe I was too immersed in it) In the end I decided to give up writing (The above is just my personal opinion. If you think what I said is wrong, there is no need to comment)

I hope to write more about the warmth between the male and female protagonists, and stop using these disgusting characters. Even though these supporting characters look disgusting, they still take up a large amount of description. I still hope to write more about the male and female protagonists

The attitude of one person will affect the attitude of a group of people. Because Zhou Lei and others did not pay attention to Song Hua, Uncle Wang and the others in the Song family did not take Song Hua seriously.

Si Yue was written down. She appeared more than the main character. The main reason is that she was sick. She was seriously ill, which kept challenging my perception. There were too many top-notch movies, and they came one after another endlessly. It made me physically and mentally exhausted. I gave up the article because one of the supporting characters had more descriptions than the heroine. The slap in the face was not as enjoyable as the previous one. The plot at the back was very boring. They were all describing Si Yue. It looked like I couldn't finish it all at once, so I didn't waste my money and gave up the article.

I clicked in after seeing many people in the comment section saying it was good. It turned out that every supporting character was very narcissistic and thought they were the most noble in the world. They all thought the heroine was a country girl. I was really speechless. . What age is this? Even the village has access to the Internet. Everyone is studying under the same sky. There is still so much blind discrimination? ? ? And everyone is either discriminating against the female protagonist or on the way to discriminating against the female protagonist, ah? Can't live without discriminating against people? This is not the case if you want to write cool articles! There are also some so-called geniuses who were slapped in the face by the heroine. Originally, Class 8 was proficient in all kinds of martial arts. Are they really super invincible geniuses? You don't need to spend a lot of time studying? Why do you still discriminate against someone just by looking at them? The more they learn, the wider their horizons become. Why do they have smaller horizons the more they learn? Just forget about a few, this is a large number. . There is also the original family of the heroine. I understand that they were sad after losing the heroine. I also understand that they are looking for the heroine. But if you don't like Song Yiyan, why should you adopt her? After adopting, I felt all kinds of unhappy, so why did I adopt in the first place? If it's empathy, then raise it well. If it's not empathy, don't adopt it. Can't you just focus on finding the heroine? (It's a bit confusing, but what I mean is that if you decide to adopt a child, you must take on this responsibility, including the heroine's adoptive family. If you can't adopt it, don't adopt it. Someone else will raise it.) Anyway, it just made me very angry. All the supporting characters were dumb. The male and female protagonists were always discriminated against and then allowed to be discriminated against without any explanation. Finally, they were slapped in the face. Is this really cool? I don't understand.

What follows becomes less and less interesting. The golden eagles of the family are still unable to spot an uneducated nanny, so the nanny keeps jumping around and dragging out text.

This baby is here to predict that this book will explode. Come on, treat me to hot pot Such ☞

I have never written a book review, but this time I became speechless the more I read it, so I wanted to write down my thoughts. First of all, let's talk about the advantages. The heroine has a good personality, strong abilities, a lot of vests, and even more vests hidden behind her, which means that the slap-in-the-face plot is refreshing, and it is quite relaxing and comfortable for viewers. Then, here's what I don't like. Although the author has updated a lot of words, the plot is full of words, and the supporting characters also have a lot of words. However, the supporting characters don't have any interesting emotional scenes, especially Si Yue's inner drama is getting more and more disgusting. I wonder what kind of image the author wants to create? In the beginning, he was the heroine's best friend, kind and cute, and seemed to be a bit smart at first. Then he became stupid when he met his parents, and started to slowly turn bad when encountering changes? Guess what happens next in the plot. In the end, the second sister is embarrassed and the family is emotionally discordant because Bai starts to turn black? The plot is not good to watch, the characters are disgusting, and the large amount of descriptions really makes readers uncomfortable. Not only Si Yue, many supporting roles have sprung up one after another. For others, emotions and story lines are interspersed. At this point, the male protagonist has not even appeared after tens of thousands of words. Finally, the latest chapter suddenly appeared, a confession, a romance, the general confession scene is just to see how much money the male protagonist spent, and this is no exception. The writing is very average, but usually it also writes about what the male protagonist did that struck the female protagonist, but the author didn't write it, it felt dry, and then they even exposed each other's vests, and they didn't believe it? Is there a section where the male protagonist wants to believe it or not, so as not to feel inferior? Even the protagonist group has this kind of speechless conjecture... Then in the kiss scene between the two, was it because the male protagonist said that he had another identity, so the female protagonist took the initiative to kiss? This is so strange, so unexpected. Do you believe it, and then you are moved because your identity and your identity are a "natural match"? Or do you not believe it, I won't listen, I want to kiss you and block your mouth? Anyway, I felt that the description of the male and female protagonists was very off-putting to me. So, is the author's comfort zone of writing just a slap in the face? After all, the author can write so many vests and different slap-in-the-face plots one after another, which is pretty good. If you want to focus on slaps in the face, it's actually not bad. As I said before, I really like these Su Shuang plots, but the problem is that there are too many supporting characters, and they are all too unpleasant. Before, there were more supporting characters than others, which was just right, the characters were more three-dimensional, and the plot was richer. But now it is obvious that the author is enjoying writing and can't stop. There is a lot of redundancy in the writing, which makes people very speechless. The plot is the main focus, and the emotions can only be supplemented. But in romance, emotions are very important. I think the author needs to think carefully about how to write the male and female protagonists. After all, this is still a romance, not a story. Really, when I watched the emotional part, I found it very boring, not even as exciting as the face-slapping scene. But I personally still like more richer and better-looking emotional dramas, but the author's slap in the face is better than the emotions. I hope the author can jump out of his comfort zone and think more about it.