
Si Ruobing's Parallel Dimensional World
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A gap opened in time and time traveled... How did I come to this world where women are respected? Could it be who is calling me? Or is the world calling me?
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Official(3)Scraped 4d ago
Like is crystal clear, but love is a vast ocean.
The gap between liking someone and loving someone is really huge. I want to go back, but I'm afraid of losing it, hahahahahaha
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The writing is okay, but some paragraphs are too long. Many people prefer to read quickly when encountering this situation, and may ignore a lot of content. You can try to divide it into paragraphs when writing. A long list of very long content will not easily make people want to read it. If there is a lot of content, divide it into more paragraphs. This will not only make it easier for others to read, but also make it easier for you to modify the paragraphs. If you are writing a novel, you can also read more novels of different types, which may bring you different inspirations. Come on, keep working hard, I'm still optimistic about you. Your friends + readers.
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Official(3)Scraped 4d ago
Like is crystal clear, but love is a vast ocean.
The gap between liking someone and loving someone is really huge. I want to go back, but I'm afraid of losing it, hahahahahaha
notify
The first day of school in September is here, let's get into the groove of your life! This author will be updating for a few months, thank you for your support!
The writing is okay, but some paragraphs are too long. Many people prefer to read quickly when encountering this situation, and may ignore a lot of content. You can try to divide it into paragraphs when writing. A long list of very long content will not easily make people want to read it. If there is a lot of content, divide it into more paragraphs. This will not only make it easier for others to read, but also make it easier for you to modify the paragraphs. If you are writing a novel, you can also read more novels of different types, which may bring you different inspirations. Come on, keep working hard, I'm still optimistic about you. Your friends + readers.






