
The Stunning Miracle Doctor: the Ghost Emperor's First Mad Concubine
by Prosperous
About This Novel
When Mo Fengchen, the killer of the ancient martial arts family, traveled through time and became Mo Fengchen, the "trash" daughter of the alchemy family. Alchemy? She dares to admit that she is second, but no one dares to admit that she is first! Divorced while unmarried? Ugly, short, and thick! With one hand of poison and the other of medical skills, he can conquer the Assassin's Pavilion and sweep through aristocratic families, brutally tormenting geniuses, and if you don't accept it, I'll beat you until you do! He is the cold emperor who came to repay his kindness and transformed into a secular prince. Planning a plan and calculating everything, a marriage full of intrigues. He originally thought that the matter would be over, but unexpectedly, he accidentally gambled on his sincerity. He only wanted to pamper her in this life!
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Official(411)Scraped 2mo ago
Why the young master? Not a woman?
The ending is rather confusing
I have to say that this book is beautifully written and the process is very good. But the ending is a bit sloppy... In the article, the heroine accepted the inheritance, met her mother, and realized that it was not that her mother didn't love her, and that she had her own difficulties. Before leaving, the mother warned the heroine to be careful of Zhongyutian's family... And she was waiting for the heroine to go in Zhongyu... The heroine later also met someone related to the Tian family... And knew that this person was very dangerous... Did the heroine go to the Central Realm? What will happen to the Hetian family? What exactly happened to the heroine's parents back then? What was the reason behind the heroine's mother sealing the heroine's bloodline without telling the heroine's father? What is the secret of the heroine's heart? Why did the heroine's mother and father separate? What will happen to the heroine and her mother's family when she goes to the Central Territory? There are many more that I won't mention one by one... (I feel like the author still has a lot that he hasn't written yet) Anyway... The author, could you please have time to write a side story for this book? This book is really good... The process is exciting, but the ending is a bit perfunctory. What a pity... It would be great if there was a spin-off or a sequel^0^~ The author greatly supports you (?7?2>?6?3<?7?2)?1?7?1?8
Can the author explain it a bit?
The author has said that few people know that the heroine disguises herself as a man, not even the servants in the family, so take a look at what is written here, Chapter 14, "I heard that the King of War is very kind to his fiancée who cannot cultivate and is weak. Now it seems to be true." "As the proud son of Heaven, the King of War actually traveled thousands of miles to personally deliver medicinal materials and elixirs to his fiancée. This shows how infatuated he is!" "..." The onlookers were talking a lot, and Butler Mo said angrily to Xuanyuan Yuebai and Gu Wanruo. You see, it's said like this at the gate, and there are people around it, but very few people know the identity of the heroine? If we had to explain that we didn't mention the daughter's virginity and only mentioned the fiancée, would the emperor grant marriage to two men when the people didn't know that the heroine was a daughter? Was it so open in ancient times? It really means that this book is very messy, I hope you can sort it out a little bit!
This article is self-contradictory. How come a girl is still engaged to a boy even though she has been pretending to be a boy since she was a child without being caught. Also, should the heroine travel through time or be reborn? I mentioned rebirth before, but why is it now in the 24th century? She has been through it several times, and the ending is not good. The content is a bit confusing.
The plot is messy
First of all, his engagement to the prince showed that she was born as a girl. Why did it later be said that his family wanted him to disguise himself as a man? , Then, your plot is obviously dead from that time, why did you add a 24th century to the rebirth? If so, you should explain it in advance! The plot is very confusing.
Wasn't the heroine reborn? She later said that she was from the 21st century, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists was discovered too quickly. The male protagonist basically did not appear later, and the finale was also very rushed. The heroine originally went to the Central Region to find her mother, but in the end, she simply asked the heroine's mother to come to them. The writing style is still very green, I hope to see other excellent works written by the author~^o^~
The ending was too hasty. It didn't explain how the two fell in love, how her mother came out, and her heart problem.
The ending is a bit rushed
When will the second part be updated?
Dear author, it has been a long time since the first part was finished. When will the second part be released?
The ending is too hasty
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Official(411)Scraped 2mo ago
Why the young master? Not a woman?
The ending is rather confusing
I have to say that this book is beautifully written and the process is very good. But the ending is a bit sloppy... In the article, the heroine accepted the inheritance, met her mother, and realized that it was not that her mother didn't love her, and that she had her own difficulties. Before leaving, the mother warned the heroine to be careful of Zhongyutian's family... And she was waiting for the heroine to go in Zhongyu... The heroine later also met someone related to the Tian family... And knew that this person was very dangerous... Did the heroine go to the Central Realm? What will happen to the Hetian family? What exactly happened to the heroine's parents back then? What was the reason behind the heroine's mother sealing the heroine's bloodline without telling the heroine's father? What is the secret of the heroine's heart? Why did the heroine's mother and father separate? What will happen to the heroine and her mother's family when she goes to the Central Territory? There are many more that I won't mention one by one... (I feel like the author still has a lot that he hasn't written yet) Anyway... The author, could you please have time to write a side story for this book? This book is really good... The process is exciting, but the ending is a bit perfunctory. What a pity... It would be great if there was a spin-off or a sequel^0^~ The author greatly supports you (?7?2>?6?3<?7?2)?1?7?1?8
Can the author explain it a bit?
The author has said that few people know that the heroine disguises herself as a man, not even the servants in the family, so take a look at what is written here, Chapter 14, "I heard that the King of War is very kind to his fiancée who cannot cultivate and is weak. Now it seems to be true." "As the proud son of Heaven, the King of War actually traveled thousands of miles to personally deliver medicinal materials and elixirs to his fiancée. This shows how infatuated he is!" "..." The onlookers were talking a lot, and Butler Mo said angrily to Xuanyuan Yuebai and Gu Wanruo. You see, it's said like this at the gate, and there are people around it, but very few people know the identity of the heroine? If we had to explain that we didn't mention the daughter's virginity and only mentioned the fiancée, would the emperor grant marriage to two men when the people didn't know that the heroine was a daughter? Was it so open in ancient times? It really means that this book is very messy, I hope you can sort it out a little bit!
This article is self-contradictory. How come a girl is still engaged to a boy even though she has been pretending to be a boy since she was a child without being caught. Also, should the heroine travel through time or be reborn? I mentioned rebirth before, but why is it now in the 24th century? She has been through it several times, and the ending is not good. The content is a bit confusing.
The plot is messy
First of all, his engagement to the prince showed that she was born as a girl. Why did it later be said that his family wanted him to disguise himself as a man? , Then, your plot is obviously dead from that time, why did you add a 24th century to the rebirth? If so, you should explain it in advance! The plot is very confusing.
Wasn't the heroine reborn? She later said that she was from the 21st century, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists was discovered too quickly. The male protagonist basically did not appear later, and the finale was also very rushed. The heroine originally went to the Central Region to find her mother, but in the end, she simply asked the heroine's mother to come to them. The writing style is still very green, I hope to see other excellent works written by the author~^o^~
The ending was too hasty. It didn't explain how the two fell in love, how her mother came out, and her heart problem.
The ending is a bit rushed
When will the second part be updated?
Dear author, it has been a long time since the first part was finished. When will the second part be released?
The ending is too hasty






