Versatile Mage: Died in Space, the Emperor Dies in the World

The author writes well, and the details are also good now. There are just too few updates. Know how to hide in the early stage. Know how to find a backer. There are basically no brainless plots if you take a big boss as your teacher. The plot has not changed much. The arrangement is reasonable in terms of opportunities, and overall it's pretty good. I hope that the protagonist's combat power in the later stage will not be too crazy. It is enough to be invincible at the same level, and to kill people at a higher level. As for the heroine, it seems that she should be a heroine. Later, Mu Nu, Jiao Mu, Ning Xue and Ding Yumian should also be taken in, right?

It's hilarious. It starts with the classic "Why are you forcing me? I just want to be an ordinary person." However, the protagonist at this moment is at the core of the original plot. In this blaming "Didn't I just know that this place was going to be massacred and I didn't leave? You are all working against me." Oh, by the way, after killing the villain who discovered him, the protagonist left the villain's body in the same place openly and waited for everyone to regard him as the first suspect, for fear that others would not know that the villain died here and he was the last person to appear here.

It felt boring after reading the previous part. Nothing was clearly explained. First, why the protagonist is in Bo City. Second, at what age did the protagonist awaken? Why did the victims of the third space department awaken in other departments? Is it because of other abilities or something? Also, the protagonist said that he was afraid of trouble and why he still stayed in Bo City. The protagonist is a time traveler. It is impossible not to know what will happen in Bo City. Finally, I only read the first two chapters. If there is a supplementary setting later, just pretend that I didn't say it. I just read the first two chapters and made a comment.

Hurry up and update me. Who can read these chapters?

Idiot logic, Xinxia dominates the temple because Mo Fan fights for it, and the protagonist gets close to Xinxia and makes Xinxia like her, so does the protagonist fight for Xinxia? Isn't that the same as exposure? Now that we know he was killed, it's not impossible to develop secretly after having the water system. As long as he doesn't jump around and doesn't go to the national competition, it will obviously not be known so easily. According to the protagonist's plan, there is no need to bring it with him in Bo City, whether in the hunting station or as a disciple of Mingzhu. If you insist on shouting that I just want to be an ordinary person, why do you have to force me? It's like a lunatic. After you only think about the convenience of making friends with this and that, then how much do you have to pay for others to reach that position? To put it bluntly, it would be better to make friends with Mo Fan. I don't understand the logic of this. I know that Xinxia is in trouble, and I only think about gaining status in the future. I have not considered that you have the ability to handle those things well. As long as there is no one who can tie you down, don't panic at all. I have accepted this kind of fairy logic. I need kunai talent. It is much better to make friends with Mo Fan in another way. After all, Mo Fan is really interested in something. Come up with this kind of idea and make friends. In order to be able to say something in case of trouble in the future, Mu family? If you want to pick up girls, just pick up girls. You have to use all the excuses and write coldly and so on... My evaluation is that it is logical and not a poet.

There are many conflicts, holes are dug but not filled, and the protagonist's character is not good enough. The logic, plot, and details are all very poor. I feel like a little Tangren and I don't feel happy. There's not a single plot point that attracts attention. It's so draggy. Does this still deserve space for death? Seize the golden finger to give the protagonist, who is also blind, a hearing aid. The rest of the plot is still the same old routine. It is understandable that there is no innovation. It is also understandable that there are many female protagonists. After all, there must be many female protagonists in diaosi time travel. That's it

I read eight chapters and it was a waste of my time. Every chapter is poisonous, the protagonist is a time traveler, and then the opening line is "Why don't you let me go, I just want to be an ordinary person." At this moment, he is in Bo City, it is still during the disaster period, and his personality is difficult to judge. He is also a facial paralysis. Others kindly remind him of the danger. He is there to forcefully pretend to ignore others, not talking to others, not even looking at it, and just leaving. He has been emphasizing that the protagonist is afraid of numbness. Annoyed, and then he ran to stay in Bo City. When the disaster came, he did not see what role he played. He did nothing. He was afraid of trouble and went to hook up with Xinxia a long time ago. Afraid of trouble, he deliberately killed people without destroying the corpses. He said that no one would doubt that he, an eighteen-year-old student, could kill high-level people. It is obvious that high-level spaces can easily destroy corpses and eliminate traces. It was easier to hide in this way. In the end, he pulled a big

The character of the protagonist is a bit disgusting, but he still runs a small business and lives a stable life! You know what kind of world background it is, but you still make jokes like this?

There's something wrong with your Mu family's writing. He didn't even find the original work. Mo Fan, you are looking for the protagonist here. The way you write it makes readers feel disgusted with the Mu family. If you take the Mu Nu Jiao heroine, there will be some problems.

I was foresighted and didn't know Ye E. Hiding in Bo City. It was exposed at the beginning, and then started to pretend for various reasons.