Uncle Jiu's Chief Disciple

Isn't it okay if you don't have a stallion? I'm so annoyed that you still accept three of them! You have reluctantly accepted it before, and now you are starting again.

The writing about the innate spiritual treasure is so rubbish, even a small cultivator in the foundation-building stage can refine the innate spiritual treasure. Speechless

The content is unbearable at all. The key protagonist is always talking to himself, which makes people not feel immersed at all. It's very dramatic!

This makes my head explode. Can you use punctuation marks properly? I won't talk about various hydrology. I attracted them based on your profile. That's it? He messes up the punctuation and breaks up sentences in various ways at every turn;;;;;;;;. Reading a novel is also reading a book. The more you read it, the more irritated you will become. To find out how bad it is, you should try the poison yourself before coming back. I saw Chapter 80 and was advised to quit. I don't know about those good-looking and exciting ones. How much did it cost to paint? Compare it to another Jiu Shu fanfic that seems to be about refining Gu. The writing is really good and the new storylines are added, one day at a time.

Finished reading it today. It feels okay. It just lacks a sense of immersion and feels a little lacking. There is also the fact that the protagonist has reached the realm of True Lord Yuanying, but the secular world does not feel much surprised. It feels that the realm of True Lord Yuanying is just that, but don't forget that this is the secular world, with very little spiritual energy. It is not a world of immortals, even if it is a world of immortals. If you look at the realm of mortals who are cultivating immortals, Master Jin Dan is already very impressive. The Nascent Soul realm is even more terrifying. And you, the Nascent Soul Lord in the secular world, are just like the foundation-building monks in the fairy world. It feels very ordinary. It feels ordinary. This is just bad, which is a pity.

Various detailed introductions, don't I fucking know? There's so much nonsense and so much inner drama. I force you to give yourself the word "water". You're really a dick. You deserve to be thrown into the street.

When I saw this introduction, I didn't want to read it. You worshiped Uncle Jiu as your master, and your master was from the Maoshan sect. You worshiped Uncle Jiu as your master, so you are from Maoshan. Unexpectedly, you actually left the master's sect and established your own business. I don't know what to say, and I see What they said is that you wrote such rubbish about the innate spiritual treasures. There were not many innate spiritual treasures even in the ancient times. You actually wrote such rubbish about the innate spiritual treasures. It would be fine if I didn't give you one star. What kind of system can be as high as that of the ancient times? Maoshan originated from Taoism. The same system of cultivating immortals cannot be separated from innate spiritual treasures, so it will not go from low to high: mortal weapons, magical weapons, spiritual weapons, treasured weapons, immortal weapons, acquired spiritual treasures, innate spiritual treasures? Also, at the end of the Qing Dynasty, there was not much spiritual energy in the world. Uncle Jiu used all magical weapons in the TV show, not even a powerful spiritual weapon. Don't tell me that it's not a system of cultivating immortals. I'm not a fool. Uncle Jiu also holds some official position in the underworld. He may be an agent in the earth. Anyway, I don't know.

Forget it, I accepted Ren Tingting. I also accepted Ren Zhuzhu from Music Zombie, and she did it so naturally.

The writing is relatively good, but I see so many people saying it is not good, and I don't know why. Even if the earth is in the Dharma Ending Age, can it not even have innate spiritual treasures? Who is a normal person who has come to this era and is not affected by the past and has more contact with heroines?

This kind of explanatory text is really difficult to read. The process of collecting treasures along the way is so-so and the scenes are hazy. After reading more than ten chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up!