Reason for Attack

I read it carefully and found it to be very good and imaginative. The characters are well portrayed and very coherent, and there is no suffocating feeling when reading. But generally speaking, there are a few points that need to be noted. The description of the environment should be increased, and the psychological description should also be appropriately reduced in conversational writing. Good novels generally focus on the environment. The psychology of the characters is quite rich and colorful, giving people an immersive and vivid effect. This kind of novel is also the most attractive to readers. Of course, this is just my own point of view, and it may not be correct. I hope it can give you some inspiration, and I hope your novels will get better and better as you write them. After all, I am your loyal fan. Come on!