Self-improvement Life System

But there are too many articles about women, more than one-third of the page. Personally, I feel that the word count is too low. I wonder if other readers would like to read this kind of warm love story.

The plot has moved forward, so don't go back. Like some female classmates before, it is very easy to affect the coherence of reading. Now the male protagonist has become famous. What is needed is an opponent at the same level. It would be better to have less emotional scenes that turn back. If you write less about irrelevant people, the reading experience will be very bad. I hope the author can see it. Don't write it down later.

This book is better than the previous one!

But it was really boring to get entangled with the girls in the class at the beginning. I would like to write more about the system, the process of strengthening myself, the process of learning, and the process of starting my own business. It gives me a headache to write about these warm moments with female classmates in high school.

If God gave me a chance to start over, I would only live to be fifty.

As mentioned above, the beginning is good and relatively rigorous. It is not the kind of novel with exaggerated and explosive wealth. But when I write about stock trading in college, it slowly begins to drift, and then it becomes more and more exaggerated. I feel that the tone of pig's feet has completely changed, and the original flavor is gone. It has completely become a running account, and I have lost the desire to read on. It's a pity.

Although this book is a rebirth novel, it is not attractive to readers when reading it. I personally feel that some poems do not need to be continued too much and can only be embellished. The protagonist should be more powerful and give full play to his greatest advantages. I think there are two advantages. The first is the protagonist's system plug-in. The second is the memory and character of human beings in two lifetimes. Among them, the system should be the most prominent, but it is not prominent in the book and is not so attractive. This book is not a pure rebirth article, but you should pay attention to certain aspects, etc... Overall it's pretty good, keep it up!

Thank you to the author, this book is very well written.

There are quite a few updates, and the author doesn't update on time. It's the same as the last book, can there be more updates?

Things have changed since entering university. Self-improvement in life. University is not busy studying to enrich and enrich oneself, and career has not been successful. There are more and more women. Delete it. It's good to finish the college entrance examination, but it will become more and more rubbish in the future.