
My Training Game
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I was stuffed with a pair of sunglasses, but unexpectedly they turned out to be a login device for a strange game. What, is this a training game? Can you practice and become stronger in the game? "Exercise Diary of a Strong Man", "Whisper of the Wasteland Sword", "The King's Court of Spirits", "The Will of Fire"... One game after another came one after another. When he came back to his senses, Lin Ze found that he had become a superhuman being. However, at this time, the other side of the world began to slowly reveal itself to him. Book club group: 959255191, welcome to chat.
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The villain is not intelligent enough
When I saw the part about the City of Mists, I couldn't figure out what this so-called team battle artifact was used for. . Various confusing situations. . Keep giving away heads. . 1. The protagonist killed two skeletons instantly, and the villain said: "The fog was too thick and I couldn't see clearly." The poisonous point: The summoned object died. You, the summoner, don't even know how the skeletons died, right? . 2. In Mist City, you should use less equipment to defeat more enemies, and quickly destroy the enemy with more attacks and less equipment. However, because it was used by the villain, no one in the protagonist group was injured after a long time. This is what a military strategist can do (ノД`)ヽ(゚Д゚ ), pull him away and shoot him for three minutes 3. It is known that the protagonist is elite level, and the light spot knows the protagonist's location. So sending four flying warriors to die is okay, there's nothing wrong with that. 4. Your special mother is in a team fight and starts a team fight. It turns out there are two elite captains, one is on a business trip and the other is applauding his secretary, okay! There's nothing wrong with that. Create opportunities for the protagonist to express himself, and then the deputy captain kills him, poisonous. . 🤔
Many of the things the protagonist does are to advance the plot. It feels like he doesn't have an idea of his own. It's like we are playing a game. The male protagonist is the game character controlled by the author. The author should be in the same situation as the male protagonist and think about "What should I do, how should I do it, and what should I do for you." "How to do anything", this book feels like a work composed of various writing techniques, novel routines, and some of the author's imagination. It is quite interesting, but it has no sense of substitution, no sense of satisfaction, and it will not make readers willing to believe that such a story really exists in a distant parallel world.
The protagonist of this book is a Japanese!
The hatred for the Japanese is engraved in the bones and hidden in the genes, so if one day, the emperor's family can be eliminated using genetic maps, no Han people will hesitate!
In fact, I feel that fulfilling any wish is just a fake trick. After all, there will definitely be some restrictions. How can you realize any wish you want? So if you want to destroy the world, the world will really be destroyed?
So-so, I feel like the author likes the word water very much
Have you deleted your book reviews? ? Otherwise, there are so many five-stars in the comment area and only a few three-stars only have 5.5 Points? ?
Is the animation too paced? I don't watch anime very much, so I'm confused in many places.
Is the animation too paced? I don't watch anime very much, so I'm confused in many places.
More updates! Don't write a bad story and don't want a female protagonist!
For such a game, if you don't spend a lot of time in it tomorrow, it's still limited to one or two hours. Isn't it ridiculous to say that it affects memory? Come back after a month or two of business trip and see if there is any impact. Normal people travel a lot for a year, and it doesn't have much impact.
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Official(105)Scraped 11d ago
The villain is not intelligent enough
When I saw the part about the City of Mists, I couldn't figure out what this so-called team battle artifact was used for. . Various confusing situations. . Keep giving away heads. . 1. The protagonist killed two skeletons instantly, and the villain said: "The fog was too thick and I couldn't see clearly." The poisonous point: The summoned object died. You, the summoner, don't even know how the skeletons died, right? . 2. In Mist City, you should use less equipment to defeat more enemies, and quickly destroy the enemy with more attacks and less equipment. However, because it was used by the villain, no one in the protagonist group was injured after a long time. This is what a military strategist can do (ノД`)ヽ(゚Д゚ ), pull him away and shoot him for three minutes 3. It is known that the protagonist is elite level, and the light spot knows the protagonist's location. So sending four flying warriors to die is okay, there's nothing wrong with that. 4. Your special mother is in a team fight and starts a team fight. It turns out there are two elite captains, one is on a business trip and the other is applauding his secretary, okay! There's nothing wrong with that. Create opportunities for the protagonist to express himself, and then the deputy captain kills him, poisonous. . 🤔
Many of the things the protagonist does are to advance the plot. It feels like he doesn't have an idea of his own. It's like we are playing a game. The male protagonist is the game character controlled by the author. The author should be in the same situation as the male protagonist and think about "What should I do, how should I do it, and what should I do for you." "How to do anything", this book feels like a work composed of various writing techniques, novel routines, and some of the author's imagination. It is quite interesting, but it has no sense of substitution, no sense of satisfaction, and it will not make readers willing to believe that such a story really exists in a distant parallel world.
The protagonist of this book is a Japanese!
The hatred for the Japanese is engraved in the bones and hidden in the genes, so if one day, the emperor's family can be eliminated using genetic maps, no Han people will hesitate!
In fact, I feel that fulfilling any wish is just a fake trick. After all, there will definitely be some restrictions. How can you realize any wish you want? So if you want to destroy the world, the world will really be destroyed?
So-so, I feel like the author likes the word water very much
Have you deleted your book reviews? ? Otherwise, there are so many five-stars in the comment area and only a few three-stars only have 5.5 Points? ?
Is the animation too paced? I don't watch anime very much, so I'm confused in many places.
Is the animation too paced? I don't watch anime very much, so I'm confused in many places.
More updates! Don't write a bad story and don't want a female protagonist!
For such a game, if you don't spend a lot of time in it tomorrow, it's still limited to one or two hours. Isn't it ridiculous to say that it affects memory? Come back after a month or two of business trip and see if there is any impact. Normal people travel a lot for a year, and it doesn't have much impact.
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I was stuffed with a pair of sunglasses, but unexpectedly they turned out to be a login device for a strange game. What, this is a training game? Can you practice and become stronger in the game? "Exercise Diary of the Strong", "Wasteland Sword Whisper", "The King's Court of Spirits" and "The Will of Fire" One game after another came one after another. When he came back to his senses, Lin Ze found that he had become a superhuman being. However, at this time, the other side of the world began to slowly reveal itself to him. A male protagonist who is even more outrageous than Xinyue 3



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