
The Only Player in the World
by Eternal Star
About This Novel
Xuan does not change the situation, krypton does not change the destiny. 'System, I want to exit this world. ''The host's VIP level is insufficient, please clear the level before exiting. ''System, I want to upgrade. ''The host needs to recharge before it can break through the current bottleneck! ' 'What on earth do you want to use to recharge your Tama account? ' Li Qingyuan looked at the mountains of gold, silver, jewelry and currency at his feet and felt like crying. With a money-hungry system that couldn't be recharged at all, Li Qingyuan started his stumbling journey to the heavens. Group number: 602692763.
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Official(41)Scraped 3d ago
After reading more than a dozen chapters, I discovered that it turned out to be a
Judging from this situation, it seems that there must be some beauties from the Hokage who want to take them away, slip away, slip away. Stallion or something, most speechless.
The writing is really good, but why Stallion! ! ! ! Although it was a bit disgusting, I still couldn't help but read on, woo woo woo (┯_┯)
So deserted
So few people! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful
I only say that when you see a book about system personification, please run away immediately. There has never been a book about system personification in so many years of novels. It is the best among good books. The system turns into a person to make you happy. You still get whatever you want.
I suggest changing the title of the book. After all, it's 200 chapters and Naruto hasn't been finished yet, and the others haven't come out yet.
Otherwise, if you change it to a player in Naruto, who will read Bankai Rumaji? There are hundreds of pictures of one world. That book is very popular. And I have not read the original Naruto.
First of all, what are you talking about about the game world?
I just feel like it's not interesting anymore. You can just write about traveling to Hokage, or turning yourself into data. And why did you kill Yuhi Kurenai's father, eh? Can't there be a slightly more powerful Jonin in the role? It feels like the characters in the original work just died and it's not interesting.
It's too slow, too tedious. . . . . .
emm...
Don't be such a stud, be restrained
Three-year-old child plays strategy
After reading about twenty chapters, the summary is that all the actions of the protagonist are quite suffocating. First of all, the protagonist is seriously injured and recuperating. Orochimaru comes to kill him, but he and Orochimaru The negotiation said that he cooperated with Orochimaru to kill Rosa to help Orochimaru obtain Hokage... I don't know what to complain about. First of all, you are an enemy with top-level combat power and basically have no ability to resist. Why don't I just kill you? Furthermore, Luo Sha is already a shadow here. Unless Konoha wants to continue fighting with Sunagakure Village, what kind of idea is there to directly kill the opposite shadow? At the beginning of the third war, the third Kazekage was suspected to be killed by Konoha. As a result, you think it's not enough to have another fourth generation, right? Also, the protagonist proposed a plan to go to Konoha for peace talks, and took Ye Cang and two of them. The good guy didn't know and thought he was an undercover agent. He brought his own high-level combat forces to the enemy's house for peace talks. What's even more outrageous was that he drank and got hungover at the Konoha camp just to pick up Ye Cang. If I were a Konoha ninja, I could laugh to death. I got two top heads for nothing... This is only chapter 20, and I can't think of anything at all. The key protagonist is still playing all kinds of self-righteous tricks. It's really a joke.
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Official(41)Scraped 3d ago
After reading more than a dozen chapters, I discovered that it turned out to be a
Judging from this situation, it seems that there must be some beauties from the Hokage who want to take them away, slip away, slip away. Stallion or something, most speechless.
The writing is really good, but why Stallion! ! ! ! Although it was a bit disgusting, I still couldn't help but read on, woo woo woo (┯_┯)
So deserted
So few people! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful
I only say that when you see a book about system personification, please run away immediately. There has never been a book about system personification in so many years of novels. It is the best among good books. The system turns into a person to make you happy. You still get whatever you want.
I suggest changing the title of the book. After all, it's 200 chapters and Naruto hasn't been finished yet, and the others haven't come out yet.
Otherwise, if you change it to a player in Naruto, who will read Bankai Rumaji? There are hundreds of pictures of one world. That book is very popular. And I have not read the original Naruto.
First of all, what are you talking about about the game world?
I just feel like it's not interesting anymore. You can just write about traveling to Hokage, or turning yourself into data. And why did you kill Yuhi Kurenai's father, eh? Can't there be a slightly more powerful Jonin in the role? It feels like the characters in the original work just died and it's not interesting.
It's too slow, too tedious. . . . . .
emm...
Don't be such a stud, be restrained
Three-year-old child plays strategy
After reading about twenty chapters, the summary is that all the actions of the protagonist are quite suffocating. First of all, the protagonist is seriously injured and recuperating. Orochimaru comes to kill him, but he and Orochimaru The negotiation said that he cooperated with Orochimaru to kill Rosa to help Orochimaru obtain Hokage... I don't know what to complain about. First of all, you are an enemy with top-level combat power and basically have no ability to resist. Why don't I just kill you? Furthermore, Luo Sha is already a shadow here. Unless Konoha wants to continue fighting with Sunagakure Village, what kind of idea is there to directly kill the opposite shadow? At the beginning of the third war, the third Kazekage was suspected to be killed by Konoha. As a result, you think it's not enough to have another fourth generation, right? Also, the protagonist proposed a plan to go to Konoha for peace talks, and took Ye Cang and two of them. The good guy didn't know and thought he was an undercover agent. He brought his own high-level combat forces to the enemy's house for peace talks. What's even more outrageous was that he drank and got hungover at the Konoha camp just to pick up Ye Cang. If I were a Konoha ninja, I could laugh to death. I got two top heads for nothing... This is only chapter 20, and I can't think of anything at all. The key protagonist is still playing all kinds of self-righteous tricks. It's really a joke.
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Two-star recommendation:★★ Looking.




It's an okay Naruto fanfic, at least so far the plot isn't too shaky.




I don't know how to evaluate it, but I think it looks pretty good. The first world is Hokage, who was born in the Sand Ninja Village and is now a Sand Shadow. Sowing discord behind your back. The protagonist is actually invincible, just for fun.



It's my first time to comment. I'm so nervous. How should I say it? How many words can I type to show my literary talent? Is it good to say this? Will it become a hot post? Will my writing be too good? Will others not be able to understand it if I write so well? How can I write at the level of my postdoctoral fellow? After writing so much in half a year, will it be too fast? I'm so excited.














