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Yu Xiaogang had real talent and knowledge, and recognized Liu Erlong's mutated martial spirit from the very beginning. Flanders and Liu Erlong stayed together and gave birth to Fulong, who was pregnant. Martial Spirit: Blue Electric King Kong Cat Eagle. ..... Tang San stopped playing poison, his "famous double standard" was corrected, and he no longer talked about "the way to death". He had to repay kindness and think twice before acting. Xiao Wu is practicing hard, but she only wants to take revenge and fall in love? Go aside! Dai Mubai's involution was so intense that he was not even close to being a woman. Oscar has developed a muscular body and is terrifyingly strong in close combat. Ma Hongjun forged his body with evil fire and had a level 30 soul power at a young age, one level higher than Tang San in the original work. Zhu Zhuqing traveled thousands of miles to find her husband, just to say: When you abandoned me, I will never marry again. Although Ning Rongrong is still a arrogant little princess, she is very knowledgeable. PS: Douluo has too many bugs. I want to correct some plots to make them more reasonable, and then add some settings. PS: The protagonist group has been strengthened, and the Wuhun Palace has also become stronger.
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Official(106)Scraped 1mo ago
This is the genuine Douluo, and the Third Young Master of the Tang family is spoofing it as a pirated version.
This is the genuine version. It perfectly fixes the bugs of the San Shao fan. According to this feeling, as long as it is not unfinished, it is comparable to Douluo's Spirit Pearl Divine Sword 9.0.
It must not be unfinished, just write according to the current feeling. I believe you, the author, feel very good now, much better than those fan fictions. Also, the character description can be more but don't be too deliberate, otherwise it will give people the feeling that the word count is too low.
The poisonous point: the protagonist's soul ring age span is too big (the first ring is more than 600 years, the second ring is more than 8,000 years), the name of the soul skill, the training process (learning alchemy during the golden training period, etc.), The soul power level (absorbing more than 600 years of soul rings, the result is the same as Tang San's absorption of 423 years of soul rings). Other issues are fine, but the main issue is the age of the soul ring. You can choose 3, 4, or 5 thousand years, no problem. However, it is 8,000 years and it is the second ring. If it is written as Dou Er, then there is no problem, but you wrote Dou Yi.
It was good at first, but the main character is getting more and more disgusting
First of all, in your setting, Tang San and the master are normal and friendly. Secondly, Xiao Wu is also a member of Shrek. Everyone practices and competes together. We are all sentient beings, but you want to plot against people's hundred thousand year soul rings? Putting aside the fact that Poison Douluo is already 99% invincible, according to your settings, there should be quite a few hundred thousand year soul beasts. You can also find a bunch of them in the sea. There is no need to hold on to a hundred thousand year soft bone rabbit, right? He even said in a high-sounding way that it would be better to sacrifice to Dugu Yan than to suffer with Tang San. It's really disgusting🤢
I can only say that the characters in the original work have been changed, but the protagonist in this book is not as good as Tang San in the original work. The protagonist is really disgusting🤢
The settings are good, but that's all.
Although they are all enhanced versions, the timing and intensity of the cheat are too inexplicable. Either the beginning is straightforward, or the protagonist relies on his modern knowledge and understanding to cheat invisibly. What you wrote is too brainless. I originally gave it two stars cautiously, thinking about some kind of twist in the follow-up, but not only was there no twist, but the character of the protagonist became more and more disgusting. Not only was he stupid and vulgar, but he didn't even have the slightest bit of personality charm as the protagonist. The character's growth was flat and it was purely based on inexplicable cheating. There was still hesitation, cheating and a frustrating plot. Brother, do you really know what you want to write?
It's really stupid. I thought it was okay at first, but I really can't stand it after seeing the second ring of eight thousand years. The master has studied the body training method for many years and cultivated it to the second level, and he can get the second ring of the four thousand year limited soul ring. The protagonist is like a radar body forging, and then directly adds four thousand years. Even if you write that you will be a whale. Glue is good, it's really safe. It's the power of my thinking. As long as you have an idea, you will succeed. Then the protagonist absorbs the eight thousand year soul ring at level 20, and then adds the third level soul power level 23. As a result, the level 40 soul power that went with the protagonist absorbs the 7500 year soul ring, and directly breaks through the two levels 42. Do you think this is right?
Master, has it been turned on or off?
In this version, the master is still too yin. I don't know if the author has any other characters as strong as this, so I would recommend them.
The author has filled in a lot of pitfalls, which is very interesting. Very interesting, but the author still doesn't update enough. I hope the plot will always be a smart plot I hope there are fewer girls in harem stories Don't give the treasure of genius to outsiders, give less to outsiders
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Official(106)Scraped 1mo ago
This is the genuine Douluo, and the Third Young Master of the Tang family is spoofing it as a pirated version.
This is the genuine version. It perfectly fixes the bugs of the San Shao fan. According to this feeling, as long as it is not unfinished, it is comparable to Douluo's Spirit Pearl Divine Sword 9.0.
It must not be unfinished, just write according to the current feeling. I believe you, the author, feel very good now, much better than those fan fictions. Also, the character description can be more but don't be too deliberate, otherwise it will give people the feeling that the word count is too low.
The poisonous point: the protagonist's soul ring age span is too big (the first ring is more than 600 years, the second ring is more than 8,000 years), the name of the soul skill, the training process (learning alchemy during the golden training period, etc.), The soul power level (absorbing more than 600 years of soul rings, the result is the same as Tang San's absorption of 423 years of soul rings). Other issues are fine, but the main issue is the age of the soul ring. You can choose 3, 4, or 5 thousand years, no problem. However, it is 8,000 years and it is the second ring. If it is written as Dou Er, then there is no problem, but you wrote Dou Yi.
It was good at first, but the main character is getting more and more disgusting
First of all, in your setting, Tang San and the master are normal and friendly. Secondly, Xiao Wu is also a member of Shrek. Everyone practices and competes together. We are all sentient beings, but you want to plot against people's hundred thousand year soul rings? Putting aside the fact that Poison Douluo is already 99% invincible, according to your settings, there should be quite a few hundred thousand year soul beasts. You can also find a bunch of them in the sea. There is no need to hold on to a hundred thousand year soft bone rabbit, right? He even said in a high-sounding way that it would be better to sacrifice to Dugu Yan than to suffer with Tang San. It's really disgusting🤢
I can only say that the characters in the original work have been changed, but the protagonist in this book is not as good as Tang San in the original work. The protagonist is really disgusting🤢
The settings are good, but that's all.
Although they are all enhanced versions, the timing and intensity of the cheat are too inexplicable. Either the beginning is straightforward, or the protagonist relies on his modern knowledge and understanding to cheat invisibly. What you wrote is too brainless. I originally gave it two stars cautiously, thinking about some kind of twist in the follow-up, but not only was there no twist, but the character of the protagonist became more and more disgusting. Not only was he stupid and vulgar, but he didn't even have the slightest bit of personality charm as the protagonist. The character's growth was flat and it was purely based on inexplicable cheating. There was still hesitation, cheating and a frustrating plot. Brother, do you really know what you want to write?
It's really stupid. I thought it was okay at first, but I really can't stand it after seeing the second ring of eight thousand years. The master has studied the body training method for many years and cultivated it to the second level, and he can get the second ring of the four thousand year limited soul ring. The protagonist is like a radar body forging, and then directly adds four thousand years. Even if you write that you will be a whale. Glue is good, it's really safe. It's the power of my thinking. As long as you have an idea, you will succeed. Then the protagonist absorbs the eight thousand year soul ring at level 20, and then adds the third level soul power level 23. As a result, the level 40 soul power that went with the protagonist absorbs the 7500 year soul ring, and directly breaks through the two levels 42. Do you think this is right?
Master, has it been turned on or off?
In this version, the master is still too yin. I don't know if the author has any other characters as strong as this, so I would recommend them.
The author has filled in a lot of pitfalls, which is very interesting. Very interesting, but the author still doesn't update enough. I hope the plot will always be a smart plot I hope there are fewer girls in harem stories Don't give the treasure of genius to outsiders, give less to outsiders
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