Traveling Through Warhammer 40k, I Am Lion King Lion
by Su Yixin
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Official(1)Scraped 7d ago
You should finish the paragraphs first. I suggest you change it to a third-person perspective. This perspective feels very awkward. It feels inconsistent with the character of the Lion King, especially the combat power. It feels like what you wrote is like a story book I read in elementary school. Pure reading does not have a sense of substitution. However, Warhammer books are difficult to find. I suggest you read more books such as Die Shou and Fat Cat.
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Official(1)Scraped 7d ago
You should finish the paragraphs first. I suggest you change it to a third-person perspective. This perspective feels very awkward. It feels inconsistent with the character of the Lion King, especially the combat power. It feels like what you wrote is like a story book I read in elementary school. Pure reading does not have a sense of substitution. However, Warhammer books are difficult to find. I suggest you read more books such as Die Shou and Fat Cat.
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