Transformers Rise of the Storm
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Official(15)Scraped 22d ago
In this novel world, China does not exist. China has disappeared.
There is no China in the novel world. China has disappeared. This is unforgivable.
Transformers Venom
Turned into a human being and sold as dog meat, rubbish
Don't watch it if you see it turning into a human. Mecha is romantic. Since it's a machine, don't change into a human. If you want to change into a human, you can set it to the one in Shida from the beginning. You can be a human or merge with the machine to transform into stainless steel. Since you want to change into a human, you don't need to watch it.
About Warhammer World
This space warrior is a bit casual. Although I can understand the battle between planets, I think the 200,000 ordinary space warriors you wrote can be reduced by one zero. After all, the success rate of the empire's transformation surgery is still very low.
Let me comment on the pros and cons. (Of course this is just my personal opinion)
--Excellent: ① The writing is standardized and the speed is moderate; ② It is interesting and interesting, and the data is accurate; --Missing: ①The plot is a bit cliché and the logic is a bit confusing; ②The thoughts in writing are not expressed, and the writing is simply a flow of content; ③There are too many typos and the protagonist's name is too peaceful; ④The span of imagination is too large, which is a bit unpalatable to readers; --Summary: That's it. If the author can sort out the plot, make up a plot that readers want to see, add more exciting and touching points, and add some of his own opinions and opinions, I think it will be better! Come on! (Finally, here is a beautiful picture of "Little Nightmares 2" [It is recommended that readers have time to watch more videos or TV series with particularly meaningful plots])
Author, please read it, thank you
The author must never stop updating the book. It's hard to find a protagonist who is a mecha. Don't stop updating the book after it comes out
Why don't you, the author, post a picture? Water numbers
A suggestion for the author
For the time being, it looks okay. Except for a few typos and the author promised us readers to be normal men and not to be eunuchs, even if you suck.
funny
It's ridiculous to be able to transform into a human being, and you still have inner strength, so you can do whatever you want.
Why is there repeated language?
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Community(0)
Official(15)Scraped 22d ago
In this novel world, China does not exist. China has disappeared.
There is no China in the novel world. China has disappeared. This is unforgivable.
Transformers Venom
Turned into a human being and sold as dog meat, rubbish
Don't watch it if you see it turning into a human. Mecha is romantic. Since it's a machine, don't change into a human. If you want to change into a human, you can set it to the one in Shida from the beginning. You can be a human or merge with the machine to transform into stainless steel. Since you want to change into a human, you don't need to watch it.
About Warhammer World
This space warrior is a bit casual. Although I can understand the battle between planets, I think the 200,000 ordinary space warriors you wrote can be reduced by one zero. After all, the success rate of the empire's transformation surgery is still very low.
Let me comment on the pros and cons. (Of course this is just my personal opinion)
--Excellent: ① The writing is standardized and the speed is moderate; ② It is interesting and interesting, and the data is accurate; --Missing: ①The plot is a bit cliché and the logic is a bit confusing; ②The thoughts in writing are not expressed, and the writing is simply a flow of content; ③There are too many typos and the protagonist's name is too peaceful; ④The span of imagination is too large, which is a bit unpalatable to readers; --Summary: That's it. If the author can sort out the plot, make up a plot that readers want to see, add more exciting and touching points, and add some of his own opinions and opinions, I think it will be better! Come on! (Finally, here is a beautiful picture of "Little Nightmares 2" [It is recommended that readers have time to watch more videos or TV series with particularly meaningful plots])
Author, please read it, thank you
The author must never stop updating the book. It's hard to find a protagonist who is a mecha. Don't stop updating the book after it comes out
Why don't you, the author, post a picture? Water numbers
A suggestion for the author
For the time being, it looks okay. Except for a few typos and the author promised us readers to be normal men and not to be eunuchs, even if you suck.
funny
It's ridiculous to be able to transform into a human being, and you still have inner strength, so you can do whatever you want.
Why is there repeated language?
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