
Changing the Plot Starts from Moving into the Love Apartment
About This Novel
"Ding, the plot difference between you and Lin Wanyu has reached 50, you can do some lover things." Zhang Yun got a chance to experience the system and traveled to the comprehensive world of urban film and television. This is just an opportunity to experience it. If you want to truly obtain the system, you can only work hard to complete the task. The system requires that the plot be significantly distorted within the specified time to obtain the source power of the world. So Zhang Yun embarked on the road of collapse plot. On the first day, he kicked out the magic of Guagu and moved into the love apartment by himself. Slowly he discovered that in addition to iPartment, there were also Ode to Joy, Golden Years, Thirty Only, Charlotte's Trouble, The Third Love, Ex, etc.
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Official(51)Scraped 9d ago
It's a very stupid harem story. If you like love apartments, don't read it. The protagonist is a stupid loser stallion, and his goal from the beginning was to visit all the girls in the love apartment. I couldn't bear to dismantle all the cps, it was so disgusting, I ran away! ! ! So the author has some kind of side job
It doesn't matter if the protagonist has a harem, but I can't bear to accept them all🤗
It can't be said that the protagonist is here to cause damage even if his outlook is not correct. It can only be said that he only wants to play with women, even worse than Lu Ziqiao.
I only watch it when others are squirting about harem studs, but this is not okay either.
Men's fan fiction is still urban, and they basically go for female characters. So some people are angry and can be ignored. However, these idol dramas are meant to be read for fun, and the readers they attract may be more disgusted with the romance. The selection of the materials is at fault. But this doesn't work, I can't stand it anymore. Or the protagonist has no charisma at all. You, the author, can't write a man who is both wise and evil, and has both sides. The system is all set, so let's give some plug-ins. I saw that the male protagonist was so obscene and obscene, and I couldn't help but act like him. Such a man with no charm at all, even 60% of women would look down on him in real life. How could the goddesses in movies and TV series fall in love with him? Isn't this stupid?
Can't stand it anymore
With the character of the protagonist, I think there is no problem in starting a harem, but apart from the problem with the three views, as a time traveler, you have a system that can directly exchange cash, and you still have to borrow money, isn't this just lowering your own quality?
Author, you should also be picky about women, don't want any bad guy.
Don't finish it, keep writing.
Author, you are finished. What should I read? I finally found something I can read. For the subsequent plot, you can write about time travel martial arts, animation, games, novels, etc. There are many plots in it and you can continue writing.
A very good novel, I highly recommend everyone to read it
It was well written, but why did it end badly?
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Official(51)Scraped 9d ago
It's a very stupid harem story. If you like love apartments, don't read it. The protagonist is a stupid loser stallion, and his goal from the beginning was to visit all the girls in the love apartment. I couldn't bear to dismantle all the cps, it was so disgusting, I ran away! ! ! So the author has some kind of side job
It doesn't matter if the protagonist has a harem, but I can't bear to accept them all🤗
It can't be said that the protagonist is here to cause damage even if his outlook is not correct. It can only be said that he only wants to play with women, even worse than Lu Ziqiao.
I only watch it when others are squirting about harem studs, but this is not okay either.
Men's fan fiction is still urban, and they basically go for female characters. So some people are angry and can be ignored. However, these idol dramas are meant to be read for fun, and the readers they attract may be more disgusted with the romance. The selection of the materials is at fault. But this doesn't work, I can't stand it anymore. Or the protagonist has no charisma at all. You, the author, can't write a man who is both wise and evil, and has both sides. The system is all set, so let's give some plug-ins. I saw that the male protagonist was so obscene and obscene, and I couldn't help but act like him. Such a man with no charm at all, even 60% of women would look down on him in real life. How could the goddesses in movies and TV series fall in love with him? Isn't this stupid?
Can't stand it anymore
With the character of the protagonist, I think there is no problem in starting a harem, but apart from the problem with the three views, as a time traveler, you have a system that can directly exchange cash, and you still have to borrow money, isn't this just lowering your own quality?
Author, you should also be picky about women, don't want any bad guy.
Don't finish it, keep writing.
Author, you are finished. What should I read? I finally found something I can read. For the subsequent plot, you can write about time travel martial arts, animation, games, novels, etc. There are many plots in it and you can continue writing.
A very good novel, I highly recommend everyone to read it
It was well written, but why did it end badly?












