Typhoon Youth League: Falling in Love

Ding Chengxin would not like her in the real world

One star is for hard work. Typhoon Youth League's practice room is not easy to enter, and the five teenagers are not easy to be seduced by others. It's a novel, so it doesn't matter if it's unrealistic. But what you wrote is all a running account, without any detailed description. The subsequent dialogues are all about the same content, but the characters are different, and there is no readability. Be a first time writer! Just practice more.

The author is great, I think you are still young, right? I personally suggest that you read more books or write more essays to improve your writing skills. A good book does not need to write character introductions like you do. You can write the plot directly. As long as the idea is clear and the language is accurate, readers will be able to know who is paired with whom. In addition, the description should be more vivid and graceful, and the plot development should be slowed down and as realistic as possible. What you wrote means that the plot develops too fast and the storyline is too false. For example, have you ever seen any celebrity give their contact information to others because they saw they were beautiful? Some bad people are beautiful but she's just a bad person, right? What's more, he is a celebrity and an artist, so he cannot easily reveal his contact information. So it has to be realistic. Of course, these are all my personal thoughts. If there's anything you don't think it sounds good, I'm sorry. Finally, I'm looking forward to your next work, come on!

In this case, if you don't know each other at the beginning, you don't have to start a relationship so early. Find out what that person is like after getting to know him for a few days. Only for male-female relations

No, I'm going to laugh like a pig, hahahaha

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Why did you write about them falling in love? They fell in love when they were only a few years old. They fell in love early. Let me tell you, I am now as jealous as the world. If I get a heart attack from jealousy, take me to the hospital.

There are a few words to describe expressions and actions. I have obsessive-compulsive disorder, and I hope the author will put in all the punctuation marks. But overall it's pretty good, I support it.

I support you, author, and look forward to your new works.

This book is well written