
Dorsal Body
by Playing With Lanling's Sunshine Boy
About This Novel
Rebirth, resurrection? It's just a story about a frightened psychopath who gained great power.
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Official(4)Scraped 7d ago
The writing is a bit sloppy
The writing is a bit sloppy, but it's better than most new books. I know the author, and it's his first time writing a book. It's better than the usual messy writing, but it's still a bit sloppy, so please be considerate, although I guess no one is.
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Official(4)Scraped 7d ago
The writing is a bit sloppy
The writing is a bit sloppy, but it's better than most new books. I know the author, and it's his first time writing a book. It's better than the usual messy writing, but it's still a bit sloppy, so please be considerate, although I guess no one is.
Opposite spray floor
Well, if you want to criticize the author, you can do so here. The author will read it.
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