
The Swordsman in the Martial Arts Arena
by The Poisonous Hand Champion
About This Novel
There is endless wine in the cup and endless heads of celebrities. Chen Youjiu held his knife and plunged into the rivers and lakes, and the rivers and lakes changed because of him.
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Official(14)Scraped 6d ago
No one likes a disabled character. A disabled protagonist is not likable. You keep emphasizing that it's better to dance in a minefield.
The protagonist has an incurable disease at the beginning, is he going to imitate Li Xunhuan? I understand creating contrast, but you don't have to keep emphasizing it. In every chapter, you have to mention the main character's illness, vomiting blood, a dozen times. Talking too much about it is too poisonous. Readers don't have the memory of fish. Just explain it in the first chapter. There is no need to keep saying this for more than ten consecutive chapters.
In the first chapter, he kept drinking and beheading, and in the third chapter, he kept vomiting purple blood. It would be embarrassing to over-emphasize in each chapter.
I haven't read this novel. I read the comments and said it was biased towards ancient dragons. I should be able to read it. Jin Yong only looked for magical skills and was speechless. What is martial arts? Intentions and skills from the outside to the inside. Control with one mind. Hunyuan is like one. Ten thousand laws return to flow. As for the eight extraordinary meridians, innate and acquired, masters and gods, just add it.
Recommend reading to friends who are in a book shortage.
The book is okay, but I feel like the pace is too slow. The main character only has one year left to live. It's only been a month since I wrote more than 100 pictures. How can I write more than 1,000 pictures in Lu Xiaofeng's world view?
I read the beginning and said that I only have one year to live. Can you write 500 chapters in one year of life? Don't talk about renewing your life later. You promised to die within a year, but you are not trustworthy.
The swordsman in the martial arts world
Recommend it to friends who are not interested in reading, especially martial arts fans who love watching Gu Long.
Well written, with a chivalrous style! The style is a bit more ancient, so don't miss it if you like martial arts!
This writing style is a bit like Gu Long
Not bad, the plot and writing are very attractive
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Official(14)Scraped 6d ago
No one likes a disabled character. A disabled protagonist is not likable. You keep emphasizing that it's better to dance in a minefield.
The protagonist has an incurable disease at the beginning, is he going to imitate Li Xunhuan? I understand creating contrast, but you don't have to keep emphasizing it. In every chapter, you have to mention the main character's illness, vomiting blood, a dozen times. Talking too much about it is too poisonous. Readers don't have the memory of fish. Just explain it in the first chapter. There is no need to keep saying this for more than ten consecutive chapters.
In the first chapter, he kept drinking and beheading, and in the third chapter, he kept vomiting purple blood. It would be embarrassing to over-emphasize in each chapter.
I haven't read this novel. I read the comments and said it was biased towards ancient dragons. I should be able to read it. Jin Yong only looked for magical skills and was speechless. What is martial arts? Intentions and skills from the outside to the inside. Control with one mind. Hunyuan is like one. Ten thousand laws return to flow. As for the eight extraordinary meridians, innate and acquired, masters and gods, just add it.
Recommend reading to friends who are in a book shortage.
The book is okay, but I feel like the pace is too slow. The main character only has one year left to live. It's only been a month since I wrote more than 100 pictures. How can I write more than 1,000 pictures in Lu Xiaofeng's world view?
I read the beginning and said that I only have one year to live. Can you write 500 chapters in one year of life? Don't talk about renewing your life later. You promised to die within a year, but you are not trustworthy.
The swordsman in the martial arts world
Recommend it to friends who are not interested in reading, especially martial arts fans who love watching Gu Long.
Well written, with a chivalrous style! The style is a bit more ancient, so don't miss it if you like martial arts!
This writing style is a bit like Gu Long
Not bad, the plot and writing are very attractive












