Mortal: I Have a Lottery Panel

First, the Nine-Aperture Golden Elixir, which can increase lifespan and wash away the qualifications, was given to the ruthless Mo Juren in the original novel without any precautions. He didn't even pay attention to his apprentices. He would either make a puppet or take away his body. Moreover, in order to obtain the antidote, he killed Yu Zitong and robbed the antidote. How could you easily hand your life into Mo's hands and let him cut your heart to help you refine the elixir? And not only were the elixirs given, but the exercises sent by the system were also given to Mo... Even though they were only practiced by mortal warriors, Dacheng can be compared to those of foundation-building monks. With such a method that is so different from the mortal system, isn't it afraid of exposing the system or attracting the covetousness of powerful monks? In Chapter 14, he became even more vicious. He ran up to Han Li and yelled in front of him, "You have the little green bottle and I have the little green bottle!" Hey, your little green bottle is ten times better than mine. I'm not greedy, and I'll give you a pocket medicine field... I just don't understand. What's the purpose of this plot? Do you have this level of intimacy with Han Li? Or is it that just because you know the plot of the original book, you can arbitrarily insert yourself into other people's lives? What makes me speechless the most is that the system supplies random items. In the original article, the treasures that can accommodate living creatures are at least the Mustard Seed Space and other treasures that can only be accessed by the Nascent Soul level. If you just borrow the medicine field, aren't you afraid of being discovered by the Nascent Soul monks searching for souls? If you lent the medicine field to Han Li in order to get the thousand-year-old medicinal materials faster, but after you borrowed Han Li's small green bottle to copy it, why didn't you give Han Li the fake small green bottle? Isn't it true that the appearance is exactly the same? Could it be that Han Li, who has neither used it nor developed his spiritual consciousness, and has no awareness of the true value of the small green bottle, can tell whether the bottle is genuine or fake? Returning the real bottle to Han Li, and ignoring the small green bottle he already had, asking Han Li to cultivate the Millennium Spirit Grass for him, isn't this just taking off his pants and farting, which is unnecessary? Alas, the characters in the original work have collapsed, and the logic makes no sense at all. I won't say more. Writing a book is not easy, so I'll give it two stars.

The protagonist is like a fool and thinks too much of people

It's the Virgin and the nanny again, it's disgusting to watch

That's awesome. The Nine Aperture Golden Pill was given directly to Mo Juren. Why are they your parents? 😐😐😐

Mortals are in a dark world of immortality, and the protagonist is too virginal to be interesting.

The listening mode has a very poor sense of immersion, with the protagonist's name appearing at least dozens of times in one chapter.

It's so poisonous that I quit immediately after reading Chapter 7

Fortunately, it's a novel, otherwise a silly and sweet pig's trotters like this among mortals would have been under the banner of the Human Emperor long ago.

I won't rate it because I really haven't read any books. But a few comments. After the first treasure replica mirror came out, the energy scale might as well not be written at all. One point of energy = 10 bottles of Qi training pills 250 energy points = fake. Sky Palm Vase? When there are ten Nine Aperture Golden Pills, the energy consumption will only be two or three points. A little energy = 3 golden elixirs = improved qualifications + hundreds of years of life? After these simple conversions, it turns out to be quite speechless. Secondly, I didn't clearly distinguish the difference between a good man and a holy lady. As long as Mr. Fan Mo doesn't save you as a spare tire, it doesn't matter if you are nice to him. But you are just a spare tire. When you become stronger, you can help him deal with Yu Tongzi. It feels like you are writing about a holy mother. This is still so bad after reading more than ten chapters. It won't be the same in the future, right? We are friends everywhere, and everyone is a good person?

Come on, I gave you my monthly pass, don't cut it