
Zhutian Mutual Aid Chat Group
About This Novel
When that sad fate comes, do you want to change it? Join the Zhutian Mutual Aid Chat Group and change all those sad futures! Refuse tragedy, start with me! Ace: Today I will demolish the Navy Headquarters together with my friends, and put them on the Red Earth Continent to judge those Draco scum! Jiraiya: So what? Tsunade and I are getting married. Aren't you going to send us a red envelope and give us some money? Matou Sakura: X month, X day, sunny, ???????. Hong Mingming promised to come over and have lunch with me today, but then he changed his mind, which is unforgivable! ----I think this man seems to need to correct himself. .................................................................................
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Official(25)Scraped 3d ago
If you want Sakura to read your notebook, put me on top
A student asked his teacher: "Teacher, last night I saw a blind man walking with a lantern. He couldn't see clearly, so what's the use of holding a lantern?" The teacher replied: "If he is afraid that others can't see the road clearly, this is Confucianism. If he is afraid that others will bump into him, this is Mohism. If he thinks that in the dark night He must hold up a lantern when he goes out, this is Legalism. If he thinks he wants to fight, he can let nature take its course, this is Taoism. If he uses this to teach others, this is Buddhism. If he is clearly blind, but he uses a lantern to guide others, he must be an expert!
It's not interesting, I only saw the part where the protagonist wants to give Esdeath the information to kill the girl. In Zhanmei's world, empire is inherently evil. Esdeath has no ability to change the empire. And she is still a member of the empire. In other words, if she obtains the information, then the hope of the people will be gone. Not to mention Esdeath's conscience, anyone who has seen the beheading girl knows exactly what kind of person she is. Maybe some people will say something about me, but what I want to say is that if you don't respect the original work, then what right do you have for me to respect you?
I don't know how you wrote it
Have you figured out each character's personality or plot? Take Esdeath for example. She knows about the corruption of the empire, but she just doesn't want to care about it.
It was all good at first, but the plot in Chapter 54 was really bloody.
Originally the writing style was good, but the description of the protagonist's childhood in Chapter 54 was fine. Even if I accidentally hurt Sakura and then apologized, it would be fine. What the hell is that in the last few sentences? You're covered in blood and you don't deserve anything. What a bloody waste of my time. Let's go.
dislike
There is too much nonsense, the protagonist has no sense of mystery, and he tells the group members that their world has their own future, which I don't like, and I don't like the character of the protagonist either, it's boring, boring, and annoying.
I was poisoned by the first chapter and disturbed. .
Sooner or later it will collapse
The subject matter of this book is really unacceptable. I've never seen a main character. He took the initiative to reveal all the plot. Shouldn't Infinite Flow novels be about traveling through time and pretending to cause trouble? The feeling this book gives me now is that the protagonist takes several full-level brothers to conquer the world. Is this interesting? I really don't understand the author's thinking.
Bad enough
Enough water, able water, water without traces
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Official(25)Scraped 3d ago
If you want Sakura to read your notebook, put me on top
A student asked his teacher: "Teacher, last night I saw a blind man walking with a lantern. He couldn't see clearly, so what's the use of holding a lantern?" The teacher replied: "If he is afraid that others can't see the road clearly, this is Confucianism. If he is afraid that others will bump into him, this is Mohism. If he thinks that in the dark night He must hold up a lantern when he goes out, this is Legalism. If he thinks he wants to fight, he can let nature take its course, this is Taoism. If he uses this to teach others, this is Buddhism. If he is clearly blind, but he uses a lantern to guide others, he must be an expert!
It's not interesting, I only saw the part where the protagonist wants to give Esdeath the information to kill the girl. In Zhanmei's world, empire is inherently evil. Esdeath has no ability to change the empire. And she is still a member of the empire. In other words, if she obtains the information, then the hope of the people will be gone. Not to mention Esdeath's conscience, anyone who has seen the beheading girl knows exactly what kind of person she is. Maybe some people will say something about me, but what I want to say is that if you don't respect the original work, then what right do you have for me to respect you?
I don't know how you wrote it
Have you figured out each character's personality or plot? Take Esdeath for example. She knows about the corruption of the empire, but she just doesn't want to care about it.
It was all good at first, but the plot in Chapter 54 was really bloody.
Originally the writing style was good, but the description of the protagonist's childhood in Chapter 54 was fine. Even if I accidentally hurt Sakura and then apologized, it would be fine. What the hell is that in the last few sentences? You're covered in blood and you don't deserve anything. What a bloody waste of my time. Let's go.
dislike
There is too much nonsense, the protagonist has no sense of mystery, and he tells the group members that their world has their own future, which I don't like, and I don't like the character of the protagonist either, it's boring, boring, and annoying.
I was poisoned by the first chapter and disturbed. .
Sooner or later it will collapse
The subject matter of this book is really unacceptable. I've never seen a main character. He took the initiative to reveal all the plot. Shouldn't Infinite Flow novels be about traveling through time and pretending to cause trouble? The feeling this book gives me now is that the protagonist takes several full-level brothers to conquer the world. Is this interesting? I really don't understand the author's thinking.
Bad enough
Enough water, able water, water without traces


























