My Girlfriend is a Bitch

As expected, this cover is someone else's mother who seems to be trying to be cute when she's angry.

How can I put it this way? The writing style of this book is good, but it always gives people an awkward feeling. In fact, it would be better if you wrote an r-book. Also, the main character at the beginning has not understood anything. You suddenly come to a game. To be honest, not many people can understand it. Under normal circumstances, you should first write about the daily life after rebirth, the functions of the system, dealing with the friends and family of the original owner, etc. After the readers get used to it, you can then have a game to pretend to be 13 or something.

It was very confusing at the beginning, I didn't understand it at all, so I couldn't keep it, so I took the first step...

The content of the book is seriously inconsistent with the introduction

┏┛┻━━━┛┻┓ ┃｜｜｜｜｜｜｜┃ ┃ ━ ┃ ┃ ┳┛ ┗┳ ┃ ┃ ┃ ┃ ┻ ┃ ┃ ┃ ┗━┓ ┏━┛ ┃ History ┃ ┃ Poetry ┃ ┃ of ┃ ┃ pet ┃ ┃ ┗━━━┓ ┃Experience is with me ┣┓ ┃Special pets for attacking buildings ┃ ┗┓┓┏━┳┓┏┛ ┃┫┫ ┃┫┫ ┗┻┛ ┗┻┛ I can't let this thing poison me alone

I can't understand it, I can't understand the plot. . . . . . .

It's really a bit confusing...

The writing is rather messy, the content is a bit like pressing the accelerator, a bit too fast, and the content does not match the introduction. It misses a lot of pitfalls and the plot is not rounded enough. Many of the jokes are well written, and I quite like them. It's a bit blurry, so I'll take a rest first.

Too chaotic

Samsung, I like yandere, but I'm confused by your plot. I can't understand what you're talking about.