It Was so Cruel That I Was Used as a Negative Example by the Sect

There are no brainless routines, and every emotional line is very clear and traceable. The heroine is somewhat of a group favorite, but after looking at it, you can understand why the elders dote on the heroine. She is a living treasure who is neither arrogant nor impetuous, cute, intelligent and understands the overall situation. I would love to pamper such a treasure if I were the one! The female supporting character's IQ is also on the line. Although Lan Qianxi is obsessed with messing with and smearing the heroine, she is not the type who only slanders the heroine without thinking. She is very good at pretending and using her own advantages. She can also clean herself up afterwards. In short, she is a "A very durable female supporting role." The character is relatively full-bodied. If it doesn't collapse in the later stage, it should be very touching. After all... Black Heart Lotus, if you have a deeper understanding of her evil or good, poison or bitterness, and then look at the individual from the perspective of the story, she should have a different style. The main line of the story is neither frivolous nor impetuous, and has a peaceful charm, but I feel that the other characters' personalities could be richer, because the whole story feels a little bit Buddhist. It is not the kind of strange things, but the kind of vivid and different people. You can vaguely think of the names of people when you mention a few impressions, such as... Someone's little hobbies, someone's little habits, different views and opinions on the same thing, etc. Because the text is super good-looking, and if it improves a little more, it can become even better-looking, so I made this small point. Perfection or imperfection is not a big problem. I see that the heroine's current Buddhist style is indifferent, but I don't know why I always seem to see the heroine who is persistent in countless reincarnations, the heroine who works hard, the heroine who is in pain, and the heroine who is relieved... I feel so lonely and distressed. This article is full of spirit and will not fall apart later. God knows, I was so moved when I found a book like the one above that I read recently. The other books were so late, but this one was such a long time ago. How did I discover it so quickly? There are not more than 300 chapters and more than 500 chapters are not enjoyable enough! It's okay not to give good reviews.

Is there anything like the lottery, which is nothing but 1 free coin?

Damn, I don't want to read it. Is this salted fish? This is a ninja, right? The characters are not real salty fish. As long as the writing is good, I like to watch it. As a result, the heroine has endured it from the beginning to now, and she still has to endure it. Don't tell me that she just said a few words to the original heroine and called it revenge. No, why? With such a high status, you make yourself look like a little pitiful person who is not loved. And how many times have you been reborn before you are reborn? Shouldn't we be more fearless? You still feel that you are aggrieved and I am aggrieved. What are you doing?

The writing was very good at the beginning, and the heroine's character was also very suitable. However, probably because of my experience, this article gave me a feeling of rushing through work. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. The heroine obviously has some contradictions. She believes that she will not have a good ending, so she messes up the story. She has been reborn many times and died several times. Personally, I think she is either looking down on her or being stubborn. The heroine has relatives and friends that she can't let go of, so it's probably the latter. The so-called showing off is just hiding her clumsiness. The heroine has been reborn multiple times, and the author's setting should be "the process is different each time, but the ending is the same." The heroine will not remember the details of the incident, but from the heroine's kiss, her friends are not mentioned. Either her friends in each life are different, or she has not made any friends. I think this is contradictory in terms of character setting (of course it may be that I didn't look carefully enough). I think the development of the plot is a bit rushed. I can't tell you the specifics, but it still doesn't feel as amazing as the beginning. If I have to give one reason, then I think the heroine's character is a bit unsustainable. From the heroine's point of view, the character she set for herself is "Nothing is good, farming and cooking is the best". But from the experience, she has obviously become the backbone of the team, and she has shown her wisdom from it, and she can't hide her clumsiness. In fact, I could write a lot more, but I don't want to. After I feel that the book is not good, I can abandon it, but I think the author can still write something that is as satisfying to me as the beginning, so I still want to read it. Overall, this book is still very interesting. When I read it, I always felt that there were a lot of loopholes, but when I wanted to write it, I found that I couldn't. It's okay to think about it carefully. The above are all my personal opinions. Friends who like to talk about it, please don't criticize me. Dad, come on

Woo hoo hoo, Zhizhi failed to cross the tribulation, it's so miserable. This is both physical and mental abuse (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) Unreasonable, very unreasonable After chasing for so long, I feel like I'm still laying the groundwork and haven't been able to give a proper reason yet-- Why did Tiandao put Zhizhi to death but give her opportunities to be reborn again and again? It's like torturing the branches and torturing the hearts of our readers at the same time. Please update quickly, explain the reasons clearly, and look forward to a comeback and revenge (● ˃̶͈̀ロ˂̶͈́)੭⁾⁾

1. The heroine directly calls the elders by their first names, and calls Rong (the fifth elder) sometimes directly. Even if she later learns that Rong has a good relationship with the woman's mother, she is still an elder after all . And when calling the ancestor (Mulao), it is better to call the old man directly. Although we have known each other for a long time, it is not good to call the old man directly. Even if Mu Lao does not identify himself, he still calls him a senior. If the author wants to express the closeness between the heroine and them, he can call him Uncle Master or Mu Lao. In this way, I just feel that the heroine is so uneducated. There are no rules with this sect. And it's very strange. In the early stage, the heroine's sect gave me the feeling that the elders were not familiar with each other or had a bad relationship (colleagues are not familiar with each other, which is funny). If they were familiar with each other, wouldn't the heroine's mother introduce the heroine to the elder? Even if it can be explained by the fact that there are different elders in different sects (alchemy, sword cultivation, iron smelting, etc.), And ordinary disciples generally have no access to it and are not proficient in it, it is not right. The heroine is also the daughter of the great elder (the heroine's mother). 2. I don't think the heroine, a junior, can lead the thoughts of all the elders of the sect (as shown in the picture). This is purely treating people as fools. The woman is so simple and scheming. Ordinary readers who have read a few strategy books can see the heroine's thoughts. The dignified elder of a large sect can be so stupid and sweet? ! ! Rather than the heroine leading the elders by the nose, I prefer that the original purpose of those elders is to insert disciples into the heroine's sect. But don't describe it like this. It won't show the heroine's intelligence, and it will also make people look uncomfortable.

When do you plan to take the person named Lan offline, or explain Tiandao's protection of Lan? Don't tell me it's because the person named Lan is the original heroine, or when will Tiandao's restraint on Zhizhi be released? ? ? ? ? You are awesome👍 too, for being able to write that guy named Lan so annoying. Every time I see Zhizhi trying to be imprisoned by an invisible force, I feel a sense of powerlessness, especially disgusting🤢uncomfortable😣heartbreaking😣

I have been reborn so many times, and since I can't escape, I just do it. Every time I meet Lan Qianxi, her eloquent mouth becomes mute, and she escapes from all kinds of ways. The more I watch, the more disgusting I am. A vicious supporting character is offline immediately after being changed. It's disgusting. It's so good that I can't stand it anymore. I read novels just to feel good, but in the end, such disgusting things are placed there. It's too disgusting. Goodbye to you.

Of course, that Lan Qianxi exists to set off the heroine and promote the development of the story. But, her mindless and annoying injuries always make people can't help but skip them and don't want to watch them. _(:З∠)_

First of all, the author has many typos, and secondly, the plot has no coherence or connection. There is no sense of surprise one after another. Rather boring, like vernacular. The heroine is recognized as a loser. On the other hand, the heroine almost always finds important clues to complete the tasks alone. There are many early-stage training tasks. After completing several tasks, the heroine is still pretending to be a loser? Do other teammates also assume that he is a loser? No one had any doubts about the heroine. The author uses a God's perspective to describe everyone as stupid, including the heroine's uncle (the sect leader!), The powerful mother, and the geniuses of various sects. They all can't see through that the heroine is hiding her clumsiness. Good guy, the male protagonist can tell it for the first time that the heroine is hiding her clumsiness? Not funny. I don't like this male protagonist very much either. He is so old, almost 1,000 years old, and he likes girls under 20 years old. I just can't get involved, even though the heroine has been reincarnated countless times. But the character of the heroine is still a little girl who loves to act coquettishly and wants to be held by her mother. The author almost always refers to the heroine as a little girl from other people's perspectives. Combined with the male protagonist's age, it's disgusting. The male protagonist later forced the female protagonist to give her accessories, and the female protagonist couldn't refuse them. The male protagonist felt inexplicably superior. I'm really speechless. After we got together, I had to forcibly make a contract with the heroine for no reason without consulting her parents. It turned out that the heroine was a new god. I got the heroine's blood and my abilities were greatly improved, but I felt very guilty. I'm so old. Are you ashamed? I stopped reading when I saw this. I really hate that these two are together. The heroine keeps calling the hero the fifth elder, whether in private or in front of others. Moreover, the heroine always sits on the hero's lap and then calls the fifth elder. It's disgusting. I feel that the author is a bit of a copper addict, or likes the father-daughter style. Abandoned article, goodbye